☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

Postby gojo » Sat Oct 24, 2015 9:31 am

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Hawkfeather
Tom | 34 moons | Warrior

location | Camp

tagged | Crowpaw

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    xxxxxxHawkfeather sighed quietly. He knew that Crowpaw had nothing to worry about. He opened his mouth to speak for a moment before hearing Heatherstar call for the apprentices. He was a bit hasty with what he said next to make sure that Crowpaw heard it before he walked off. "Don't worry, Crowpaw, you've trained well." Hawkfeather smiled, purring quietly but digging his claws into the soft soil a little bit out of anticipation. He watched him as he padded off before exhaling and glancing around camp. That when he spotted his kits, tumbling around over a ball of moss. He was sure that Silverkit thought that games like that were pointless, but it was nice to see him playing with his sister once more. He only watched for one more brief moment before stretching his back once more.




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Silverkit and Snakekit
Tom | 5 moons | Kit
She-cat | 5 1/2 moons | Kit

location | Camp

tagged |
Snakekit >> Open
Silverkit >> Open

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Re: wolfheart & echopaw [2]

Postby evixtus » Sat Oct 24, 2015 10:51 am

    w o l f - h e a r t
      t h e - c o n f l i c t e d - h e a r t
        tom ▋ warrior ▋ twenty-seven ▋ tags;; stagpaw

    The oddly colored tom sat in the corner of the camp, watching the cats crowd around the High Tree as Echopaw, Lavenderpaw, and Crowpaw were called forwards to sit underneath the High Tree in front of Berryheart and Heatherstar. He felt shivers going down his spine as he saw the small tortoiseshell apprentice bound up, and a pang of annoyance shot through him like venom. In his mind, Echopaw deserved to stay an apprentice, either that or be ranked as just a queen with no kits, but Wolfheart knew Heatherstar would never do such a thing. He scoffed and turned his attention away from the ceremony, deciding to distract himself.

    Seeing a small tabby-cat apprentice sprawled on the ground, seeming to be irritated, a lot like himself. Wolfheart sighed, not believing he was going over to speak with an apprentice, especially one that he barely ever saw or heard of around camp. He wanted to put himself down for finding a distraction in the young tom, he shook it off, and sat down next to Stagpaw, his eyes focusing on the camp entrance. "Speak, young warrior, what is on your mind?"

    e c h o - p a w
      t h e - v a i n - c h i l d
        molly ▋ apprentice ▋ ten moons ▋ tags;; heatherstar, crowpaw, lavenderpaw, berryheart

    Echopaw had started the morning by giving herself a good grooming session, causing her fur to be sleek and shiny, making her appearance even more vibrant than usual. Though she was always happy and proud of her looks, she felt as if though all eyes would be on her today, even though they would-it was her warrior assessment day, after all. Quivering from the tip of her tail all the way to her damp black nose, she was full of excitement and hungry for adventure of learning her warrior name.

    Echopaw was not a bright cat at times, but she had her moments. She was a fierce hunter, her steps so faint, they could be mistaken for the whispers of the trees. She had a lithe body, small, but slender and fit. Her claws were sharp, like all cat's claws are. her eyes focused on every little movement around her, tingling sensations traveling throughout her body as she waited for the moment of time where she was allowed to pounce.

    Losing her train of thought and snapping back into reality as she heard her name touch the soft delicate fur of her ears, she turned her attention to Heatherstar. The beautiful feline was sitting atop the gnarled branches of the High Tree. Echopaw took a deep breath, excited, and bounded over to the tree, perching herself underneath a branch, coyly placing her bottom on the ground and wrapping her tail neatly around her paws. Today was the day, she just knew it. She was going to become a warrior!
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☀ heatherstar » crowpaw; echopaw; autumnflight

Postby peter parker. » Sat Oct 24, 2015 2:33 pm



































H E A T H E R S T A R
┊she-cat┊36 moons┊leader┊


        Heatherstar waited patiently as the apprentices gathered beside her, still waiting for Lavenderpaw though she turned her attention to Echopaw and Crowpaw who had taken to her summons.
        "Today is the day you'll take your assessment," Heatherstar beamed to the apprentices. She could feel their tenseness but made no motion to voice it, knowing that nerves were natural during such an occasion.
        "You'll be assessed on several aspects that will determine if you'll receive your warrior name two moons from now." She spoke to them delicately, saying nothing more as she wanted to get into the woods before she gave them their instructions.

        Heatherstar turned to Autumnflight and Reedfall who were conversing a few lengths away.
        "Autumnflight?" She addressed the she-cat in a delicate tone, "You wouldn't mind leading a hunting patrol to the thunderpath would you? Have Reedfall and a few apprentices accompany you." She gave her commands with a curt nod to the both of them, closing with a friendly smile before turning her attention back to the apprentices. She got to her paws, awaiting Lavenderpaw's arrival before leading the group to the woods.

┊location » flameclan camp┊tagged » crowpaw; echopaw; autumnflight┊
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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

Postby Willow-way » Sun Oct 25, 2015 2:57 am

Name➪ Gingerpaw
Breed➪ Domestic Shirthair
Scent➪ Vanilla
Age➪ 10 moons
Rank➪ Apprentice
Gender➪ Female/Molly
Mood➪ Sulky and Furious
Location➪ Meeting
Crush➪ Secret
Tagged➪ None


Gingerpaw listened to the meeting intently begging in her mind to go but when she didn't she growled quietly. She was alone anyways so Gingerpaw doubted anyone heard her. It's not fair! I haven't got to go to a single gathering! She exclaimed inside her head. Then whenever Heatherstar announced the other apprentices got to take their assessment that day she got even madder. Gingerpaw isn't a mad cat either usually pretty calm at least on the outside. Then when Heatherstar said at her mentor was going on a patrol and she wasn't going with Gingerpaw was on the verge of exploding. Gingerpaw stood up and circled to the freshkill pile devouring a mouse before sitting in a shadow to sulk.
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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

Postby skywalker, » Tue Oct 27, 2015 9:57 am

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    Autumnflight

    The Molly nodded towards Reedfall, then perked her ears as she heard Heatherstar call her name. She smiled "I would mind at all. We will be on our way" she meowed, getting up, her bottle-bush tail curling around her back "Well, I guess we are going on patrol now" she chuckled, and her tail tip swayed slightly over her back "I'll go get the apprentices; you can wait at the entrance, if you want to" she meowed, smiling still radiantly towards him. She turned little on her paws and trotted off towards a few apprentices; she spotted Her brother talking to Wolfstep, and then saw Gingerpaw tearing at a mouse. She trotted towards Gingerpaw, and trotted towards her. When she reached the young apprentice, she smiled "Heelo, Gingerpaw. Would you like to come on a hunting patrol? Maybe to get your mind off.. Things?" She asked politely, seeing as the apprentice was obviously not in a good mood. As she spoke to Gingerpaw, her eyes were scouting out Willowpaw. She could still promise Reedfall one thing, and that was to take his apprentice out on a patrol. It wasn't exactly battle training, but it was something.

    Stagpaw

    The apprentice's hazel brown eyes looked up suddenly as Wolfstep spoke him him. He found it slightly odd that the warrior wanted to hear what was his problem, but he was just glad that someone wanted to talk to him. She took a deep breath, and plunged into a short rant "Well, it's just so unfair! He said dramatically "Crowpaw, Echopaw and Lavenderpaw all get to become warriors, well, have their warrior assessments, and I don't! I have to wait a whole other moon before I get to become a warrior! I'm so ready, and I'm almost half Echopaw's size by now! It's just so unfair!" He moaned, and his front legs slid out from underneath him, and he muttered anger lay underneath his breath, waiting for the Warriors response.
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Re: wolfheart & echopaw [3]

Postby evixtus » Tue Oct 27, 2015 10:35 am

    w o l f - h e a r t
      t h e - c o n f l i c t e d - h e a r t
        tom ▋ warrior ▋ twenty-seven ▋ tags;; stagpaw

    the chocolate-brown colored tom let his eyes settle down below him at the apprentice who was throwing a tantrum. "Let me tell you this right now: you may be bigger than Echopaw, but her mother is lithe, made for speed, not fighting. Echopaw got those traits from her mother. Also this, whining and complaining about how you believe your ready is different from other's perspectives." Wolfheart twitched his whiskers, seeming to enjoy the lecture he was giving Stagpaw about his behaviors and temperament. "You are younger, less eligible for your assessment, you know barely enough. For Starclan's sake, save your breath. You waste it on yourself when you could be using it to help your clan. You could ask others if they needed new moss in their nests." He turned his eyes to Stagpaw, waiting to hear the small apprentice's retort.

    e c h o - p a w
      t h e - v a i n - c h i l d
        molly ▋ apprentice ▋ ten moons ▋ tags;; heatherstar, crowpaw, lavenderpaw, berryheart

    Echopaw had started the morning by giving herself a good grooming session, causing her fur to be sleek and shiny, making her appearance even more vibrant than usual. Though she was always happy and proud of her looks, she felt as if though all eyes would be on her today, even though they would-it was her warrior assessment day, after all. Quivering from the tip of her tail all the way to her damp black nose, she was full of excitement and hungry for adventure of learning her warrior name.

    Echopaw was not a bright cat at times, but she had her moments. She was a fierce hunter, her steps so faint, they could be mistaken for the whispers of the trees. She had a lithe body, small, but slender and fit. Her claws were sharp, like all cat's claws are. her eyes focused on every little movement around her, tingling sensations traveling throughout her body as she waited for the moment of time where she was allowed to pounce.

    Losing her train of thought and snapping back into reality as she heard her name touch the soft delicate fur of her ears, she turned her attention to Heatherstar. The beautiful feline was sitting atop the gnarled branches of the High Tree. Echopaw took a deep breath, excited, and bounded over to the tree, perching herself underneath a branch, coyly placing her bottom on the ground and wrapping her tail neatly around her paws. Today was the day, she just knew it. She was going to become a warrior!
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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

Postby skywalker, » Tue Oct 27, 2015 10:59 am

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    Autumnflight

    The Molly nodded towards Reedfall, then perked her ears as she heard Heatherstar call her name. She smiled "I would mind at all. We will be on our way" she meowed, getting up, her bottle-bush tail curling around her back "Well, I guess we are going on patrol now" she chuckled, and her tail tip swayed slightly over her back "I'll go get the apprentices; you can wait at the entrance, if you want to" she meowed, smiling still radiantly towards him. She turned little on her paws and trotted off towards a few apprentices; she spotted Her brother talking to Wolfstep, and then saw Gingerpaw tearing at a mouse. She trotted towards Gingerpaw, and trotted towards her. When she reached the young apprentice, she smiled "Heelo, Gingerpaw. Would you like to come on a hunting patrol? Maybe to get your mind off.. Things?" She asked politely, seeing as the apprentice was obviously not in a good mood. As she spoke to Gingerpaw, her eyes were scouting out Willowpaw. She could still promise Reedfall one thing, and that was to take his apprentice out on a patrol. It wasn't exactly battle training, but it was something.


    Stagpaw

    THe stared at Wolfstep out of the corner of his eyes, and started grumbling half way through "Oh yea, and you so their so great.." He said quietly, his tail starting to sway side to side in aggravation "Yea, whatever. Cleaning the elders nests is so fun..." He snorted, although knew he should go any farther; Wolfstep, even though not being his mentor, could lash out an moment. Autumnflight told him that Wolfstep was a very honourable and kind cat, but Autumnflgiht believes every cat is honourable and kind. He wrinkled his nose, and just co tinted complaining silently to himself.
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☀ flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊birdsong┊

Postby Yveltal » Thu Oct 29, 2015 4:39 am

    Image
    my heart is singing a bird's song, my soul is screaming a battle cry..
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    [ she-cat ] [ 20 moons ] [ heterosexual ] [ mood: annoyed ] [ location: camp ] [ tags: stagpaw,
    wolfheart
    ]

    Birdsong's bright eyes trailed along the camp as she stretched out her legs. Despite
    her long fur, she shivered as a wind came through camp. She was glad Heatherstar
    picked her as one of the few going to the Gathering. I just hope IceClan doesn't
    make a fuss and make things worse for all of us.
    She perked her ears as she saw
    Wolfheart talking to Stagpaw, who was ranting about something. The assessment
    again. That cat is always so jealous..


    Birdsong padded over to Wolfheart, where Stagpaw was having a tantrum. The she-cat
    turned to Wolfheart. "I'll take care of this, Wolfheart. Hopefully," she said with a glance
    at Stagpaw, "he'll listen to his mentor." Her voice was soft, but she glared hard at Stagpaw.
    "Stagpaw, I know you're upset about not becoming a warrior now, but you mustn't take it
    out on others. Your retorts will just make things worse, and Heatherstar will delay your
    ceremony even longer, because you couldn't cope, with your jealousy. Would you like to
    calm down, or have to deal with waiting longer, because you decided to make a fuss?"

    Her long tail twitched a bit, her eyes on Stagpaw.
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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊not accepting┊started

Postby skywalker, » Thu Oct 29, 2015 7:46 am

    { so sorry for that last sentence. I was on an iPad and Spell check hates me. }
    { Mobile yet again }

    Stagpaw

    When his mentor approached, he flattened his ears, annoyance bubbling up inside him. As she spoke, his urge to lash out with a retort was strong, but she had a fair point. He didn't look at her, but looked at a pebble a few inches from his paw. He rolled it around with his pad, and wrinkled his nose, causing his eyes to scrunch up a bit "Yes, Birdsong" he mumbled, although continued to grumble under his breath "I'm sorry for acting like a kit. It won't happen again" he meowed, continuing to stare at the pebble he was rolling with his paw.
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Re: ☀flameclan┊a tail of fire and ice┊birdsong┊

Postby Yveltal » Fri Oct 30, 2015 5:01 am

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    ↳ the indesicive heart
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    [ she-cat ] [ 20 moons ] [ mood: calm ] [ location: camp ]

    Birdsong's gaze softened. "It's alright, Stagpaw. Just don't do this again.
    But another retort like the ones before, and I will speak to Heatherstar."

    Her tail swayed a bit. "But don't worry, Stagpaw. You'll become a warrior
    soon, and the best one at that. It just takes time. But you're a wonderful
    apprentice, and Heatherstar knows that too."
    She ruffled the fur on his
    head with her tail. "So c'mon, cheer up!"

    [ tags: stagpaw, wolfheart ]
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