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by ~*Amber*~ » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:00 am
lets not get on this topic of bashing other peoples grammar/posts, some people just don't exactly know/care how to do it correctly. It's rude actually. Imagine how the person would feel if they found out you were doing this
edit: Not only that but english could not have been their first language- please keep all this in mind
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by ~*Amber*~ » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:06 am
hqmary wrote:Oh, sorry ^^`
I guess you're right.
I'll stop.
Sorry 'bout that, guys.
Sorry to be the party crasher on this, but you know how mods and people can get offended easily. I used to be an AWFUL rper. I willthrow myself under the bus and get an rp post i Did when I first joined
"gardevior I choose you! Use gravity!" gardevoir uses gravity and comet and everyone started floating and the water gun started floating. The water was still connected to his mouth so comet uses thunder on the water and it followed up and it the oshowatt shocking him
Lets put bad grammar on the list, powerplay and long sentences that are just gibberish
You may rate me from awful to oh god why
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by abxy » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:09 am
~*Amber*~ wrote:hqmary wrote:Oh, sorry ^^`
I guess you're right.
I'll stop.
Sorry 'bout that, guys.
Sorry to be the party crasher on this, but you know how mods and people can get offended easily. I used to be an AWFUL rper. I willthrow myself under the bus and get an rp post i Did when I first joined
"gardevior I choose you! Use gravity!" gardevoir uses gravity and comet and everyone started floating and the water gun started floating. The water was still connected to his mouth so comet uses thunder on the water and it followed up and it the oshowatt shocking him
Lets put bad grammar on the list, powerplay and long sentences that are just gibberish
You may rate me from awful to oh god why

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by ~*Amber*~ » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:10 am
ectoplasmic tears wrote:~*Amber*~ wrote:hqmary wrote:Oh, sorry ^^`
I guess you're right.
I'll stop.
Sorry 'bout that, guys.
Sorry to be the party crasher on this, but you know how mods and people can get offended easily. I used to be an AWFUL rper. I willthrow myself under the bus and get an rp post i Did when I first joined
"gardevior I choose you! Use gravity!" gardevoir uses gravity and comet and everyone started floating and the water gun started floating. The water was still connected to his mouth so comet uses thunder on the water and it followed up and it the oshowatt shocking him
Lets put bad grammar on the list, powerplay and long sentences that are just gibberish
You may rate me from awful to oh god why

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by hqmary » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:13 am
Here's one from a bad on purpose roleplay (my post) :
«Dodopaw was nomming on pizza with her boyfriend Herbert. Herbert was a potato, so he didn't eat. "HERBERT! how DARE you!" screamed dodopaw. "I had to walk a whole ten FEET to get that pizza off the ground. So... Football!" She kicked Herbert into cookiecrmb's cookie.»
*facepalm*
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by sweet tooth » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:14 am
sp00py wrote:SharpStar laid down on her bedding, head hurting. "When will all this drama end. Loners? FlameClan? Then there the apprentices and deputy..."
sp00py
no
your better than this
Sharpstar?
Originally Sharpstare?
Plus how did this cat expect to be in a clan (Leader at that) without drama?
i just
Oh and punctuation is at its finest here
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