AshClan's Discusion Fourm.

[xXRockfootXx]

Rockfoot, Whispersong, Panthersong, and Emerald padded bleary eyed back into Ashclan’s territory. Rockfoot was put slightly at ease to feel the familiar rough stone of the volcano that they made their home. Her paws ached after walking on it after a little while of trekking, but she didn’t mind. They had been always for so long; it felt like walking on clouds. Very sharp clouds, but clouds nonetheless. However, as they approached camp, Panthersong began to sniff the air worriedly. “What is it?” asked Whispersong, gently, but with the trace of fear in her voice. It was then that Emerald put in. “I feel like when I first came here…It was a lot nosier. Maybe it’s because Pantherclan left you guys alone finally?” Rockfoot shook her head, now noticing too how faint the familiar, busy smells were, and how quiet the area around camp was. And they hadn’t seen any patrols on their way in to the camp either. Only now did she realize how strange that is. Panthersong dropped into a half-crouch as they padded towards the camp entrance, while Emerald's footsteps became lighter. They walked through the front entrance of the camp, and were instantly flooded with the fear-smell and death, with a sickly tang of sickness. The camp was a mess. The entrance to the cavern that held the nursery had crumbled around the edges, and to get in a cat would have scraped their shoulders to the sides. The mossy lichen overhang over the leader’s den was dry and would crumble at the slightest breath. And the cats; they were gone. Not all gone, of course. The whole Ashclan population hadn’t just picked up and left. Instead, it had been defeated in its very own home, by someone. Actually, by something. A sickness, to be exact. It didn’t take a genius to figure out that the cats piled together for warmth while sniffling and sneezing, weren’t in that state just for kicks. It seemed, while the patrol had been gone, a terrible plague had swept Ashclan. The four cats stood there, dumbstruck, as Flickerkit raced up to them. His eyes were wider then their own, and he stumbled repeatedly. “Come quick!” He stammered out. “Emberstar!” Panthersong was the first one to snap out of it, followed by Ember, then Whispersong, and Rockfoot, as they raced towards their leader’s deathbed.”
When they ran to the foot of the highledge, many of the sickly cats wearily raised their heads, giving little excited mews when they saw who it was. Emberstar was lying on her side, her belly exposed and a terrible scent hanging around her. She gave a hacking cough, and tried to roll over. Whispersong quickly led the group around Emberstar's side so as to not put their leader into any additional pain. When they could properly see Emberstar's face, it was nothing like the previously familiar, kind face. Her eyes were clouded, and half shut. Her parched mouth would open every so often to take a raspy breath. When she saw the four, she tried to smile, but she was in too much pain. It was then that Blizzardkit ran up. "Can you--" she broke off with a cough, wracking her entire small body. "Can you help her? Can you help us?" She sniffled loudly. Rockfoot glanced around for Birdsong, but when Blizzardkit saw her do this, she spoke again. "Birdsong was--The first one to go."

[Corvuss]

Amazing once again!~ Also, if you would want to write the introduction to the clan you could do that too. Just tell me if you don't. It is the first impression on the roleplay usually and I am a horrible writer so I would probably scare people away. x3

EDIT (To avoid double posting) I am nearly done with everything~ I just need to know who will mentor who, warrior names of a few cats, and to write the intro~

[Corvuss]

viewtopic.php?f=85&t=2808766&p=91145200#p91145200 Both of you can now post your forms here. Make sure you post each cat separately and with their new age which is 6 moons added to their old age. So all kits are now apprentices, and all apprentices are now warriors.

[xXRockfootXx]

FINAL PARAGRAPH

Rockfoot gasped in surprise. Her thoughts immediately raced to--"Amberbreeze! Is he okay?!" She tried to run to go see him but Panthersong looped her back with her tail. "Wait." She urged. They turned their attention back to Emberstar. "What can we do?!" Emerald gasped. Emberstar slowly shook her head. "What we need now--" she gasped. "Is a new leader." She nodded towards Panthersong. "You--you will be the new leader, Pantherstar." She rasped. "You must lead our clan out of this--out of this sickness." She gave a huge, rasping breath, half gagging. "I must go. My family awaits." She managed to pull off a small smile, a glimmer of hope sparkling in her milky eyes right before they closed for the last time.
After that, the clan seemed to slowly die even more. Pantherstar appointed Rockfoot as her deputy, and with the help of Heatherpaw they attempted to cure the sickness. However, there was very little they could do. They tried their best, but all cures failed. In the end, six moons later, Ashclan was reduced to a measly few cats. But the new leader forged on. For they had hope that a new clan could rise out of the Ashes.

I can write the into and have it by tomorrow probably.
Rockfoot had an apprentice, Harepaw, so she doesn't necessarily need one. However, she can take another. She can do Midnightpaw, then i guess either Panthersong, Emerald (If she stays), Amberbreeze, Whispersong, and/or Smoke(paw) can do Flickerpaw/Silverpaw.

Edit: Alright I'll post my forums ASAP, I'm on mobile right now but as soon as I can I will.

[Corvuss]

I will add that now x3 And I'm still deciding on weather Emerald will join the clan or not. I was thinking about it but I couldn't really find a name ending that would fit her well or sound okay. She would want a name if she did join because she would think they sound cool and brag about it probably ^^ Do you have any ideas of what her warrior name could be?

[xXRockfootXx]

Emeraldblaze? Something like that with a more original second part?
Also, Nightwing's mate was Whispersong, not Pantherstar.

[Corvuss]

Oops x.x I didn't realize I wrote that. And yeah I like that name~

[xXRockfootXx]

INTRO


You feel the Earth under you start to rumble as you see the volcano above you start to puff out smoke. You begin to cough badly as the ashes rain down on you, making you hot and smoldering. then out of a blur of smoke you see eyes, a cat. She steppes out of smoke, "Come with me, if you want to live." She flicks her tail and in a mere heartbeat turns and begins to walk away back into the smoke. You ponder for a second before you hack and cough again, and decide it would be best to follow... Soon you catch up with the strange cat, "Good, you decided not to die!" with that, the she-cat started running, and you follow. You soon get to a cavern in the side of the volcano and you follow the she-cat in. There is some light up ahead. You realize you have stopped coughing, and you are finally able to see cat that saved your life, the she-cat with a pelt that looks like fallen embers have landed on her, but its actually her real pelt. You also notice a faint glow around her edges, like a white outline. After walking into the volcano, you start to see all different types of cats. "Where am I?!" you ask. "This is AshClan, I'm Emberstar, past leader of a once great clan. You may stay until the burst is over, or join them, forever becoming a Clan Cat. The decision is yours..." She nods around at the other cats in the cavern, finally flicking her tail toward a she-cat with a pelt as black as night, before she fades right before your very eyes.


I was going to change Emberstar to Pantherstar, but I decided against it. Mainly I just took the old one, fixed it up, and added to it.

[Corvuss]

I like that new intro~ I will add it soon~ I think the roleplay is about ready to open. I just need to get the 2 warrior names of the new warriors. And the rest of the forums need to made for cats that will be used.

[xXRockfootXx]

Yeah. On the create cats forum/page it says post cats separately and they will be approved separately. Should I do that or can I just put them all on one post
Also, I'm not gonna be online for the next 5/6 hours or so, but when I get back I can do my few character forums, and work on the family tree.
Lastly, on the "history," can we add a paragraph break right after "while Emerald's footsteps became lighter."