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Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Mon Jan 03, 2011 5:13 pm

Ok well I love writeing short little stuff so here they are! you can also find me on devintArt as 7MoonWillow. I really hope you like my poems, i have writen all of these and I am protective of them, you may use them if you:
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2) Credit me
have a good day and thanks for reading!
PS: For all of you who don't know me poetry is in caps because I also have an artshop called Darkside of the Moon, it helps me tell them apart. (link to artshop to prove I'm not lieing♥



Smile
by ~Moon Willow

If I die tomorrow smile,
for my pain, hatered, and suffering is forever over!
and I shall run free amongst the spirit wolves,
forever free,
forever happy!



Run
by ~Moon Willow

Though I run hideing my tracks,
running from pain and runing from the insain...
though running from my life I think,
what is my life?
What is the meaning of it?
And I know my life is a strange twist much like a rolercoster....
but still I run...



The blaze
by ~Moon Willow

How is it that you started this blaze,
from such a small spark?
And how is it that you are missing this?
a blaze that you have started,
and for the first time in my life I am feeling so... needy...
It's ironic if you ask me.
But still, how on earth are you missing this?
How can you not se that you are melting my heart of stone?




The painfull questions...
by ~Moon Willow

If only...
those words echo through out my mind.
What if...
Those words haunt me all the time.
Why not...
those words almost hurt the most, but
Could have...
hurts more.
I loved you but stayed silent,
but I tryed to show you,
but I was too late...
But you and I are togeather in my dreams,
but in life I smile faintly.
Pain being lost when I see you,
but the moment you leave I am as broken and hurt as before...
Just a broken hearted girl with broken dreams that will haunt me forever...



if only
by ~Moon Willow

If only I had the gutts to say "I love you" to your face,
and not here hidden from view.
Here, where I have putten my heart,
but no one looks,
nor cares... but here i go now to say
"I LOVE YOU!!!"
even though it isnt to your face,
I said it... I am just too scared to say it any where else.
So I cry myself to sleep your face in my dreams,
your warm smile wakes me and I wonder do you love me too?
I wish I knew but I may never know...




Why?
by ~Moon Willow

Why can no on see the pain that is haunting me?
Why does no one care that I am dieing?
Why cant you see that I need you,
or that I will die with out you?
But I am still alive on the out side,
but this is just a face for I am dieing on the inside...
But no one sees...
That the pain is killing me...



I am Dieing
by ~Moon Willow

I cry when I remember,
I remember when I cry...
I feel the pain once more like a reopened wound.
I resee the painfull sights.
I rehear the painfull cries,
I relive the hatered, the horror, and the pain...
I am dieing an no one sees that the hatred is growing inside of me.
killing off all of my joy, laughter, and happyness...
If only I could die,
freedom from this worldly hatred.
Yet on the inside I am already dead,
my dull body filled with pain drags on,
ever so slowly through this life...
My hatered is the only thing with me,
the never ending pain trails behind, always in view,
its laughter haunts me,
I hear its horrible teeth gnashing...
always attacking,
ripping into my dull flesh killing me more....
But then I ask myself trembling in fear,
how could it when I am so dead inside?
But yet through it all I am still dieing...



let me die...
by ~MoonWillow

Please let me die here
floating down this river.
Let me become just another statistic to show the dangers...
Let me go dont hold me back,
I shall be free and will never look back!
For there is only pain behind me
and I can not win this game of life,
unless I change the game or re-write the rules,
and I shall by takeing out a player.
I shall be here in spirit,
yet my spirit is dead,
and I can no longer blindly drag this body.
It is over the game is lost so let me drift away and die in peace...



lost...
by ~Moon Willow

If only I cry,
the pain would just die.
If only I sigh,
I would just die,
my pain would be gone and I would move on,
the monsters in my head would die...
Yet so would I,
but it matters not for now I am scared,
The years worn me down.
Their is nothing left but pain,
nothing left but dispare...
If only I could die,
drift away to peace.
To be free from pain.
To be free from hate.
To be lost in a world of nothing but nothingness... and freedom...



To you I was just a friend...
by ~Moon Willow

I wanted YOU
and wished on a star for YOU
and then, you chose HER...
But I dont blame you,
who would want such an abnormal girl with such an abnormal life...
But I understood you, and you me...
But she is popular, pretty, and so on...
and I am not.
I can see now that you are not the one for me and she was your choice...
but it still hurts to say that YOU of all people OVERLOOKED me...
The one who stood by your side when others fled...
Whey you where at the bottom I didnt care,
I helped you up...
buy YOU left my side and it was your choice...
So goodbye the one I loved,
love her and remember that you have lost me...



would the river mind?
by ~Moon Willow

would a river already red with blood want a little broken girl?
would it want my body?
would it mind that i am already blood soaked?
would it mind if i died in it
and let it take me away from this place?
would it care that I wish to die in its cold cluches?
would it let me die?



nothing of goodness
by ~Moon Willow

I had fear...
my first mistake....
I let it grow and consume me...
my second mistake...
I alowed it to breed with hatered and mistrust...
my third mistake...
Now I have been beated and trown down.
Pain consumes my hatred leaving fear, pain and mistrust....
leaving what this world is truely about...
nothing of goodness...



what is love?
by~ Moon Willow

What is love?
why do we chase it?
what does it do for us?
I believe that love is a code word for hurt,
humanly desire, and pain...
but who am I to say?
Who am I to know what we all feel a need for?
but I wonder,
why we go round and round in this circle of pain that we so simply call love....



Lost it
song by ~Moon Willow

If life where a game I've shurely lost it
and if time is a tool I've shurely broken it
Cuz life seams to be a one way track
and I cant role like that!
I am not the kind of girl who will turn my back
And im on my way down the fast track
and no one can slow me down-----I
Because i am a fighter--I!

And maybe thats why,
if life where a game well Ive shurely lost it
and if time were a tool well Ive shurely broken it
yea im just insain that way -ay -aaay
If the present is a gift then Ive shurly wasted it
and if love brings you life well I have distroyed it
oh yea thats just the way I role oOh
life is a game that I shall never win
maybe its cuz of the things we did
but hey, Im never looking back.

Cuz if life where a game well Ive shurely lost it
and it time where a tool well i have broken it
yea im just insain that way -ay -aaay
and if the present is a gift well ive shurely wasted it
and if love brings you life well I have distroyed it

yea I know im on the crazy side
but thats what brings color to my life
it differs me from the others
no, you cant change who I am

{talk} Cuz if life where a game well Ive shurely lost it
and if time where a tool well I have broken it
Cuz life sceams to be a one way track,
and I cant role like that



Little AngelI
~Moon Willow

ts alright little angel
no one shall harm you
you are safe now, hold on tight
you are diffrent yes I know
your wings are black not white,
but you have that sweet glow
you little angel are good you see
no matter what they say
I will love thee
dont cry little angle I am here
listen to my voice
let me hold you dear



The end
~ Moon Willow


I shall walk alone throught the valley of the shadow of death.
Demons tearing at my sides,
I pull along whimpering like a wounded animal.
Blood dripping off my sides,
I pant,
weakness overcomes me...
Death stands besides me,
pulling my soul away...
I cant resist, I die...
Death overcomes me...


Distruction
by ~MoonWillow

You stare into my lifeless eyes,
ignoring my pitious cries.
You laugh at me as I lay dieing, crying.
Mourning over the heart you lost long ago.
contenting yourself with tormenting me,
Distroying my dieing heart....



Flying Away
by ~MoonWillow

Feeling like a beaten dog,
Don't know if I'll last long,
hating this feeling.
This can't be my beginning
where does it end,
I just can't pretend
That this is what I want
Cuz it's nothing I need.
I feel my heart bleed.
Because I'm living a lie,
knowing its not my time
But still I wanna FLY…


Rollercoaster
by ~MoonWillow

I try to go straight,
yet my life jerks me upside down.
I try to go up,
... yet my life plumits down.
I try to go slow,
my life goes too fast.
So I give up and just
hold, hold, hold,
on tight to the railing, hoping to not fall off
or get swept away in this rollercoaster I call life...



Survivor
by ~MoonWillow

I run,
my head low.
I run,
from my pain.
You cant haunt me
you cant hurt me
I am a survivor
I shall prevail...
even through the darkness of this earth...



Hurt
by MoonWillow
I may be strange,
I may be difficult,
but I am honest, stuborn, and protective,
you cant change me.
You cant distroy a bullheaded girls will.
I am strong, just hurt...




Child of darkness
by ~MoonWillow

The silent pitter patter on the roof calls me,
the silentwind wisperinf through the trees sings me a lulaby.
The promise for darkness joys me,
the hatred feeds me.
I a child of the night lift my head in a wild howl
making the fear strickened people flee.
I one with the night laugh at the demons trying to attack me, I
am darker,
I am stronger.
FEAR ME ONES OF DARKNESS!
For I am the night stalker...
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Postby Mavric » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:01 pm

My heart


I tried to give you my heart,
this you cannot see.
I would give you my all,
my everything.
But there is something wrong,
Not with you, with me.
But maybe, just maybe I am wrong
I am difficult and strong.
So in the end I will move on.
I am forever strong,
forever strong.


The Black

The darkness I know,
The scars they show.
Forgive my deeds,
forgive me
I know we have both been wronged,
maybe it wont be long.
Maybe I am a fool,
I will never be know to you,
not fully.
My heart is too black,
I am too hurt,
too black.
Red spilled from my wrists,
not so long ago.
The scars remain,
seared upon my brain.
And the idiocy of it all?
I still love you.

Un-named

Deep inside I feel it
A hunger,
a wanting
a pain.
I cry out a silent cry
A heart breaking in silence.
The hunger, the pain.
A want that can't be described
My heart is yours,
yours
But you don't even know,
Might never know,
maybe tomorrow,
Maybe not.
You never know.


A Mate

I don't want a boyfriend,
someone gone in a day.
I don't wan't anymore goodbyes.
I must end this foreplay.
I am tired of
WIPWIPWIP
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Re: Moon's short lit(plz coment!)

Postby Mavric » Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:36 pm

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Re: Moon's short lit(plz coment!)

Postby geinkotsu » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:33 am

*sparkly eyes* You could be a Philosopher. I love your writings <3
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Re: Moon's short lit(plz coment!)

Postby Mavric » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:38 am

really you think so? I was always told that it was too scary... maybe its just how I read it... THANKS, a philosopher... *looks into the distance* naw Im to insainly hyper to be that smart^^
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Postby geinkotsu » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:41 am

Ah, but everyone has their own opinion, their own insight. So you and I could be philosophers- even if no one understands what we babble on about <3. And I don't think your literature is too scary. Psshhh. Not at all. If you want scary, go spend an hour in my sister's room. XD
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Postby Mavric » Wed Jan 05, 2011 9:51 am

lol sounds fun^^ or just spend a moment in my mind.
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Postby Mavric » Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:34 am

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Postby Mavric » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:05 am

Added another one.. I have a song I sing to the one called "what is love?"... but It isnt writen down... and I can only sing it when I am alone... and feel free...
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Postby Mavric » Thu Jan 06, 2011 10:34 am

added my song... touchy and die... but I wish you could here the tune it is an awsome sound.... but wolf girl wont sing it too you :silent:
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