AshClan's Discusion Fourm.

[xXRockfootXx]

While working on the family tree, I noticed a few cats I missed making the previous Starclan list. These cats are dead too:
Ashclan:
Tinykit
Whitekit
Wolfheart
Sootkit

EDIT
Dark forest:
Scar

[xXRockfootXx]

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Sorry it's kinda blurry, but this is what I have so far
When I properly get it together, I'll take a better picture

[xXRockfootXx]

I made a draft for the intro/backstory. It doesn't have what Emberstar tells the cats in it, I was unable to finish it

Rockfoot, Whispersong, Panthersong, and Ember padded bleary eyed back into Ashclan’s territory. Rockfoot was put slightly at ease to feel the familiar rough stone of the volcano that they made their home. Her paws ached after walking on it after a little while of trekking, but she didn’t mind. They had been always for so long; it felt like walking on clouds. Very sharp clouds, but clouds nonetheless. However, as they approached camp, Panthersong began to sniff the air worriedly. “What is it?” asked Whispersong, gently, but with the trace of fear in her voice. It was then that Ember put in. “I feel like when I first came here…It was a lot nosier. Maybe it’s because Pantherclan left you guys alone finally?” Rockfoot shook her head, now noticing too how faint the familiar, busy smells were, and how quiet the area around camp was. And they hadn’t seen any patrols on their way in to the camp either. Only now did she realize how strange that is. Panthersong dropped into a half-crouch as they padded towards the camp entrance, while Ember’s footsteps became lighter. They walked through the front entrance of the camp, and were instantly flooded with the fear-smell and death, with a sickly tang of sickness. The camp was a mess. The entrance to the cavern that held the nursery had crumbled around the edges, and to get in a cat would have scraped their shoulders to the sides. The mossy lichen overhang over the leader’s den was dry and would crumble at the slightest breath. And the cats; they were gone. Not all gone, of course. The whole Ashclan population hadn’t just picked up and left. Instead, it had been defeated in its very own home, by someone. Actually, by something. A sickness, to be exact. It didn’t take a genius to figure out that the cats piled together for warmth while sniffling and sneezing, weren’t in that state just for kicks. It seemed, while the patrol had been gone, a terrible plague had swept Ashclan. The four cats stood there, dumbstruck, as Flickerkit raced up to them. His eyes were wider then their own, and he stumbled repeatedly. “Come quick!” He stammered out. “Emberstar!” Panthersong was the first one to snap out of it, followed by Ember, then Whispersong, and Rockfoot, as they raced towards their leader’s deathbed.”

[Corvuss]

That's really good!~ I felt like I was reading a really good story and wanted to read more x3 Do you write anywhere else other than roleplay? Also, when you finish the family tree I could go over the lines on a digital program if you would want. Or you could even do it too. And I will add those cats we missed earlier now.

EDIT: Also it is Emerald that was a cat that went not Ember/Amberbreeze x3

[xXRockfootXx]

XD I CHANGED ALL THE EMBERS TO EMERALDS THEN BACK TO EMBER THEN BACK TO EMERALD I JUST COULDNT REMEMBER XD XD XD
I'll fix it when I finish writing the story.
Thanks I've tried writing a book or long term story, but I have trouble keeping a plotline. So I mainly use roleplays to practice my writing skills, but I do tend to ace language arts essays in school.
Yeah if you outlined the family tree I think it would look really good. Ima wait to finish it up until you have the character list posted, so I can make sure I have everyone.

[Corvuss]

Thats great!~ I really can't write at all x.x Also, I believe all of the cats are the starclan ones on the forum and these cats you posted earlier -Rockfoot
-Flickerkit
-Silverkit
-Sharp
-Amberbreeze
-Emerald
-Midnightkit
-Pantherstar
-Whispersong
-Smokepaw
-Heatherpaw
and silverkit I think

I will also be adding 2 characters later that are also siblings but 1 or both of them will be open for someone to take them if they would like to use them.

[Corvuss]

Wait- I am a bit confused. Are you using a new character for deputy or Rockfoot? And who will be medicine cat? Also, all ages will be up 6 moons, so the kits will all be apprentices I think?

[xXRockfootXx]

I was gonna make a deputy, but I decided not to, because I don't like having a lot of characters. So I think Rockfoot will be deputy.
Med cat will either be Hayden's med cat apprentice (I can't remember the character's name) or a new player/cat
All the kits will be apprentices, and all the apprentices will be warriors.
Gtg, goodnight!

[Corvuss]

Okay~ I will have the forum done today!~

[xXRockfootXx]

*excitement!*