Acid;; the reaper | the sorcerer | the failure

Postby Chimericect » Sun Oct 11, 2015 5:15 pm


    Username; Soulfirewolf
    About Me wrote:Hey there! Im SoulFireWolf, owner of 13 wolves in the RPW community. I pop in on the fanclub at random times, usually to post updates on the nursery or that I put up a new RPW UFA for once. I love every one of my RPWs and their concepts and I've spent a lot of time thinking about each and every one of them. If you haven't noticed im not exactly done with the writing portion, it takes time (which I usually don't have) and patience (again, I don't have), but it gives me something to do when im bored. Okay this guy is amazjng and I adore the concept I have in mind for him. I hope you enjoy my form and thank you for considering me to be the owner of this awesome blood moon RPW, I have an adoration for any halloween adopt so im excited to be given this oppurtunity to make him my own.

    Name; Acidium Mortimer
    Meaning wrote:> Acid is a chemical substance that neutralizes alkalis, dissolves some metals, and turns litmus red; typically, a corrosive or sour-tasting liquid of this kind.
    > Mortimer means
    Mortimer was his first given birth name, but when he was taken in by Myr he decided Mortimer was to old timey and he sounded like an old man, so he called him Acidium instead because he thought it sounded dangerous.
    He goes by Acid or Ace usually, and will be going by Acid in this form.

    Gender; Cismale

    If you haven't noticed, im a bit angry...
    Why wrote:There a few reasons why he's a bit snappish to everyone, not just one. He's rather small for his age, and despite his protests everyone thinks it's funny rather than intimidating when he goes on a rampage. This, of course, doesn't help when he's a grim reaper in training. He's trying rather hard to act as intimidating as possible but it just doesn't work. On top of that, he's got a rather squeaky voice that doesn't seem to help him out. Being laughed at isn't something you may want to have done to you, it just doesn't feel nice.

    Acid is also being taught alongside his adoptive sister how to cast magic and create potions and such. However he can't seem to get it quite right and always seems to be outdone by Name. It's rather annoying actually, she seems to have been born with the skills in his opinion and it gives her an unfair advantage. He constantly strives to be better yet she is constantly proving him wrong and he doesn't exactly like it. Of course it's not exactly easy being adopted, at least for him, and being beaten by his little sister was rather hard on him.

    Final reason? Well, this one is rather menial to others but big to him. He's angry that he can't seem to find his key. This particular key, however, hold the few items he has left of his birth family, as well as some other personal things. He's not mad at anyone else this time either, Acid is mad at himself for doing such a stupid thing. No matter where he looks he just can't find it, and if he doesn't find it soon he fears it'll be lost forever.
Personality;
{ One day you'll all be mine }

    Acid is rather bitter and not at all one you would think to be a friendly guy. He's that guy you wave at or smile and he just blows you off, or that person that bumps into you that yells at you for it. He's just an angry elf filled with bitter rage (no he isn't an actual elf) and doesn't want to deal with stupidity. He believes some things require your common sense, and if you don't have that well you're rather doomed if you cross paths with him. He can blow up like an angry green volcano almost immediately if you get on his nerves, which aren't that hard. If you've seen anger in the movie Inside out, just combine disgust and anger together and bam you have Acid. He doesn't seem to have a soft side to anyone other than his family. He was taken in by Myr, but you'll read about that later.
    Acid has a fascination with anything magical, as well as the dead. He wants to be a Necromancer, and with time and patience (that he doesn't have) he will become a fairly powerful (and still smoll) Necromancer.
    Acid is very rarely nice to someone, and his bite is much worse than his bark so be warned. The only three he has ever cared enough about are his younger sister { despite their differences and his constant anger he knows he loves her and would protect her no matter the cost }, Meecury { pretty much his best friend } and Kadyn { He just sees her everywhere and one day just confronted her, scaring the living heck out of the poor girl, but he managed to gain her trust. }
    Acid is rather quirky in his own way, havin his own unique sets of fears and quirks and such. Most of them go hand in hand as well. For one, he hates the color white. He just despises it, he gets a sudden destructive impulse and immediately paints over it no matter what it is. Just imagine for a moment him painting over signs, the ground, and sometimes even lights. His favorite thing, though, is snow. He can't stand winter, he feels that someone is mocking him from above as if to say 'haha, loser!' He'll spend hours out in the cold tryig to get rid of or paint over the snow in his area. He commonly curses at the clouds, deeming them evil creatures bent to destroy his life. Acid even hates white food and refuses to eat it. Marshmallows? Must be colored, no exceptions. Ice cream? Nothing vanilla flavored of course. Mints? He never liked them much anyway so that doesn't phase him. Secondly, he hates the feel of anything soggy. It bothers him so much he won't leave the house in the morning if there's dee on it, or if it had just rained he won't step foot without something covering his paws. (He hates going out after it rains because of the humidity as well, it causes him to floof out.) As far as he knows he never liked the feel of water, although some theories ringing about the schools and just some rumors stating he'll melt if he gets wet. (It's not true, obviously... Maybe..) His biggest quirk has to be the fact he hiccups when he gets overly angered. At medium/ high levels of anger he'll just glow a radiant green, but with extreme levels of intense anger he hiccups. Very threatening, the smol kid in a long black reaper suit that's way to big for him, trying to be tough as he has multiple high pitched hiccups. Not the most intimidating.

History;
{ Be warned, might be rather long }

    Acid was born in a completely different dimension from the normal RPW world. It was a world without name, a world full of darkness and creatures beyond the imagination. His parents weren't your typical parents that orphaned a son because they were killed, or they weren't able to care for him, no he was purposely sent to earth as a test subject to see how the living conditions were. His mother wasn't a regular RPW, she was a powerful dire with emmence abilities. She ruled this dimension, which Acid calls the shadow dimension since he can't remember the real name for it, as queen over all. She was able to control any shadow creature or shadow wolf she wished without saying a word. She fell in love with a rather scrawny skeleton RPW, and when I say skeleton I mean skeleton. He didnt have any flesh on him, but they somehow conceived and bore a son in which they called Mortimer. The two never seemed to pay much attention to him, in fact they often times called him a mistake. He was only a few months old when they decided he would be perfect to send to the world we live on, earth. He made the journey, his parents giving him clues to what was awaiting him for when he came back. A box full of things, such as one of the Royal jewels only known to that dimension { it contains a spirit guide to help him back }, a chain { to help him contain his powers once he learns of them }, a mirror { to travel by } and a few other things that weren't as important. They sent him off, now awaiting patiently for their sons return.

    Acid, however, doesn't seem to remember much of this. He was found by a cunning wolf that went by the name Myrddin, Myrr for short. Myr wasn't married nor did he have a daughter at the time, so he was quite lonely. Once Myr saw Acid sitting all alone in the forest he couldn't leave him there, so he took him in and raised him as his own. Naturally Myr wanted to name his first son something cool, to him Mortimer was rather bland and in his opinion made him sound like an old man, so he called him acid instead. Acid was quite the little troublemaker, but with Myr that was only natural. The two would go off together and constantly mess with the other wolves that came into the woods until Acid was about 5 years old. On his fifth birthday Myr decided it would be time to teach him magic, as Myr had learned and been using his entire life. Acid took a fascination to Necromancy, no surprise to anyone. Of course Myrr wasn't as experiances in this type, he's more of the illusion and making a deal kind of guy. Naturally Myrr tried to teach him, but couldn't do the job. Myrddin decided it was time to give Acid the box he had kept for years, unsure of what was inside. Acid didn't quite know what to do with it until he found the key in his roo where it had sat there, growing dust for years. He never opened the box, however, in fear of it being similar to the greek myth Pandora's box.

    When acid was a younger teen he went off much more on his own meeting up with his other skeletal friend, Mercury. By now Acid was much darker and got angry over everythif, Merc just enjoyed watching him explode. One day Acid came home to find his adoptive father with a female wolf who called herself Nuria. He hated her from day one, slowly the attention he had from Myr was taken away. A few years later they were married, and eventually had a daughter. Acid despises Nuria, as she was the one to start this. He would commonly act quite rotten to her, although she never seemed to care much. From pranks to downright rude actions he was never a nice guy towards her.

    As he aged he grew more distant, retreating to the safety of his hide out (a huge ditch and underground tunnels dug by himself, Merc, and Kadyn, to meet up in whenever. He took a liking to it, moving much of his stuff down there, and eventually not coming out in general. Merc was kind enough to steal and make copies from one of Keres' spell books, this one dedicated to necromancy and the dead in general.

    Currently Acid is training to be a grim reaper, and one day he hopes to be the one to rule over something, to feel power. He hasn't discovered his family roots just yet. He's also teaching himself necromancy, which he seems to have an easy time mastering.

Family Relationships;
{ the only ones who care. }

    Myrddin;
    Myrddin and Acid got along great until Myr got married and had a child. That's when things started to go downhill. Acid grew distant and resentful of them both, although he tried not to show it as Acid needed Myr for both a home and a way to learn magic. Myr didn't seem to interact with Acid much, he knew how resentful Acid was. It was obvious when your envy and anger show. Myr, however, still loves Acid like the son he is to Myr and even if he leaves Myr knows that he tried his best to give Acid a kind and loving home.

    Nuria;
    These two are polar opposites, nothing good has ever came from these two meeting one another. Whether Acid is spitting his venomous words at her or she's snapping back at him these two get along as well as water and oil. They'll be among one another but never mix. Acid won't even give Nuria the time of day (or night) when it comes to spendjg family time. He finds her a cancer to his family, unfortunately. He can't seem to get rid of her, and she always comes back twice as annoying. He hates it and wishes she would go away so life would return to how it used to be.

    Vera;
    Now despite how he feels about Nuria and Myr, he has to admit he loves his spunky little sister. She's always been there to both bug him and give him someone to rant to. She's always taken his side so long as she gets to be a part of whatever plan. These two aren't a normal brother and sister, they almost never fight unless she starts to show off with her good potion making skills. Other than that the two protect one another, fight for one another, and most of all trust one another dearly. These two will always be close, or so they hope. They vowed to never grow distant no matter what happens.


    Thank you for reading my form, and good luck to everyone else trying for this RPW uvu
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Venatici » Mon Oct 12, 2015 6:28 am

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      //did some spare time gift art

      anyway I got a few answers to some stuff:

      I plan to tend this in two weeks, on the 25th, but an extension can be granted if requested. I've just set it at this date so no one is rushing to finish it on Halloween, and the week after it is MP1 quarterly tests for me so I'd be too busy uvu

      Art is allowed as an extra, but please note again this is a character development competition: so your art has to portray character if you chose to do this! Ex: have them by a box of tackle / fishing rods if they're someone who fishes or perhaps a tired / lazy pose if they're someone who sleeps a lot. the art may be done by you or by someone else uvu

      on a note of coding, I tend to use this collectively. if you're new to coding this is a good walkthrough, and towards the bottom / middle there's tons of tutorials & different font stuff which I feel is super neat & possibly helpful

      offsite or different thread forms are allowed, just be aware that the judges and myself have to be able to navigate your form !! that and it doesn't boost your chances, the odds are the same as everyone else u v u

      aaand last thing is that for people wanting to use rpws you can feel free to use mine, however, do know this does not boost your chances what-so-ever.
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Venatici » Thu Oct 22, 2015 6:11 am

      oops I'm in latin right now and gonna be out later bUT

      just a reminder this ends in a few days !! if anyone needs an extension please try to pm me sometime relatively soon so I can adjust my schedule accordingly u v u <33

      all the forms look spectacular so far and I feel like I'm gonna have tons of fun reading these ideas later e v e <333

      edit ;; oops I'm not doing my latin work I'm reading these right now [sorry hercules.... whoops....]
      but a reminder that some of the names you guys are using are names //currently in use!!//
      the name rule is an official rule and has been for a bit u v u

      β˜ͺ Name Rule;; We do not allow names to be shared with permission from the first owner. This rule has been the same since we started though never listed. The Archive is being worked on now so please check for names before using them or even post on the fan club asking if the name has been used.
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Chimericect » Mon Oct 26, 2015 1:52 pm

    good luck ;w;
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Venatici » Mon Oct 26, 2015 2:14 pm

      riP I forgot to post

      this contest is extended until tomorrow via a pmed request,,, and hopefully none later bc I'll be too busy otherwise
      I'll close this tomorrow but due to the extension this won't be judged for a bit since I'm terribly busy rip

      gl everyone, I'll have someone remind me to close this tomorrow u v u <3
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Dissimulodeerling. » Tue Oct 27, 2015 11:43 am

Good luck everyone.
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Venatici » Wed Oct 28, 2015 1:02 am

      wow I'm such a good history student

      anyway I'm sick off my noggin today so I decided b4 I literally fall over and collapse I'll judge this

      my apologies for the shortness, I'm not judging this the way I normally do so
      before I just announce I'll say bc Im not judging this in the normal RD / DR way feel free to pm me as always to ask / comments / questions / concerns and whatnot, I'm always up for this but this esp so

      there's no RU's for this my apologies

      dissimulodeerling - I was looking for character development in this competition and I just felt your form was just not all too fitting and not really showing much character development. there wasn't any really progression personally in my view and the whole story seemed a bit stereotypical to me ?? my apologies but I just found it wasn't all that this competition. however, I liked the personality and thank you for checking /w the two people who let you use their wolves! I do appreciate it ye <33 best of luck in other competitions !!

      -=Elita=- - wow, I actually really loved the effort put into your form !! it was actually also really nice to read through, it kinda felt like a smol lil story and I did enjoy it <33 however, once more the contest for this rpw was character development and the story was once more something that I've heard all too much, and it didn't really tie up: as well, the 'alternate personality' bit is kinda overused and it should only be something attempted when one has put research into the condition [I believe it could be considered DID? not sure I'll ask my psych friend].

      aaaand last but not least, the winner of this rpw is:

      Soulfirewolf - while your form had some typos and the like, I was searching for character development and not english composition, and boy golly did I find it. I love the concept and while the underworld bit is there you made the story your own and I enjoyed reading over it <33 congratulations !! I hope to see this wolf around and I'll add you

      gl to everyone in competitions henceforth & again feel free to pm me over anything <3 have a wonderrful halloween and see yall around !!
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Dissimulodeerling. » Wed Oct 28, 2015 3:51 am

Congratulations soul. I hope you like the piece of art I did, now two out of three rpws in it are yours hehe. XD
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby Chimericect » Wed Oct 28, 2015 4:03 am

    Woah I won ;o;
    I really didn't think that I would get him screams, and I apologize for the grammer errors im not the best at english despite it being my first language //shot

    Thank you so much omg I promise I'll take care of him! ;0;
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Re: Rpw #6 - spoopy scary skele

Postby -=Elita=- » Thu Oct 29, 2015 6:05 pm

Congratulations Soul! If its alright, I'd like for you to not keep my art as it was made specifically for that character. Take good care of Acid.
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