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Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night by MusicOverMatter

Artist MusicOverMatter [gallery]
Time spent 5 hours, 39 minutes
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Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby MusicOverMatter » Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:27 pm

~A jeweled ribbon,
Wraps the sky and fills the night,
Silk could not match it.

A stage most fitting,
For the drama playing out,
The actors ready.

The star of the play,
With a strong blade on her back,
Stalks among the trees.

Our leading man rests,
Unaware of the danger,
His breathing is soft.

A slip of the door,
A piercing gaze and curse,
A slip of the sword.

And then falls his chest,
No breath or blood to fill it
And then falls the night.~




It was so fulfilling to finally finish this piece! It only took a few hours, but those hours were spread out over a couple days, and plenty of the original lines were scrapped before I came to the final product. The poem was done in a haiku style, to compliment the style and subject of the picture. :) Please comment with your thoughts, and if you feel so moved, please like! <3


~Update~
Oh my goodness! I can't believe I got a feature AND I got moved to intermediate! Thank you so much everyone who liked my picture, and to CS smoothie for featuring my work! <3 :,)
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby venteux » Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:30 pm

this is gorgeous. deserves a feature.
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby saka. » Sat Sep 26, 2015 12:53 pm

Holy moly you're an amazing artist this deserves a feature!


















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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby liv :) » Sat Sep 26, 2015 3:10 pm

    Oh my goodness, this is breathtaking! Love the choice of colors!
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby MusicOverMatter » Sun Sep 27, 2015 1:44 am

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so glad that people are enjoying my art. :) <3
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Wed Sep 30, 2015 1:11 am

Amzing! Everything about it is fantastic!!
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby PitchBlack » Wed Sep 30, 2015 5:23 am

This artwork is really detailed and well done. I am moving it to intermediate for you now. ^^
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby MusicOverMatter » Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:58 am

PitchBlack wrote:This artwork is really detailed and well done. I am moving it to intermediate for you now. ^^



Thanks! It makes me so happy that people recognize the detail I try to put in. Thank you for moving it up. :D
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby liv :) » Wed Sep 30, 2015 1:06 pm

    Congrats on the feature! And PitchBlack is right, the amount of detail in this is truly astounding. I don't know if I'd have the patience to do it all!

    Again, congratulations on the feature and getting it moved up to Intermediate!
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Re: Yoru wa taki ~ Falls the Night

Postby Melanie. » Thu Oct 01, 2015 7:46 am

Very stunning detail, the colours are beautiful and the anatomy is perfect. Congrats on the feature, you deserved it!
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