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Postby ~tidepool » Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:35 am

yay thanks! now all i need is more readers :P
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Postby ~tidepool » Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:26 pm

yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay!
hey dorky book thing!
im so happy!!! cant you tell!!!
if you didnt tell your more of a dork then i I thought!
well....wanna know why im happy. SURE YOU DO! you have NO dicision. =P
well first of all, today rocked! why you ask??? because it DID!
.....heh heh.......
...............well..
first things first...HOCKEY tryouts were today! and i totally just got on the coolest high school varsity team in da word!!! everyone who got on the team were all GREAT players and GUESS WHUT! im on the same team as Jake, my big bro if you forgot! which means were going to the same high school....though he's a senior and i'm a freshmen.....whut eves! i can still pester him!!! im the only girl on the team, which im proud of! yayayay! and im gona be one of the only freshmen too! i cant wait untill the first game where i can really show off my awesome skillz. well...another awesome part about today....mine and jakes new team is alreay in season...and....we dont have to wait till next season to start a-playin. so we have a game in 1 day! yayayayayayayay!!! well im a gonna go and pinch myself to see if im dreamin!
BRB.....
Im back! and turns out i WAS AWAKE...i cant belive it!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhh im gonna scream!
ooooh....i forgot to tell you...our maskot is the eagles!!!! and out colors is this awesome blue, gold, and white!
well im gonna go unpack my stick and rollerblades (though i play ICE hocky) and shoot some pucks with my bro!
write in you later!
~Rain
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Re: Dear stupid thing a ma jig (By:Rain)[comments are LOVED]

Postby ~tidepool » Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:45 am

*yawn*
goodmorning.....thing....

man im sooooo....tired this morning....
i couldnt fall asleep last night....i was too hyped up on sugar...
but im happy because I made breakfast insted of mom....YES! suprisingly im a deciently good cook =D
so...i made pigs in blanckets...why you ask? BECAUSE THEY ARE AWESOMELY AWESOME IN EVERY AWESOME WAY!
yes...i <3 pigs in blanckets....who doesnt? they are minny sausages cover with cresent rolls! its my dream in food version!
yummmmmm! sooooo good....so i made about 80 of them....they dissapeared...quickly...i ate like 20....jake ate like 30.... dad ate 15....mom ate 10....ally ate 5.....
ok i gotta admit.....ally is the slowest eater in the history of man kind! and she doesnt eat anything! she uses the complant if she eats too much she wont be able to figure skate properly...and she will get too fat! dork... heh heh
well back to reality....um.....well..... i gota go the the bathroom.....yes you didnt need to know that....be right back....

hey, this is Rain and i love my diary! and my litte sister Ally, who is the best figure skater in the world! Ally is so pretty and smart and nice and totally mature! and i <3 her! i love the color pink! its my most favorite color in da world! its so pretty and girly! oh! im very girly and where lipstick and make up and-

AHHHHHHH! im gonna kill ally!...yes she is the one who wrote the that thing above....gerrr....i need a lock on this thing...
HEY! i do NOT LOVE PINK ALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok for the record i love these colors...aqua blue light blue blue, blue lime green......
did you see pink in there....NOOOOOOOOOOO! i hate pink sooooo much!
its sooo ugly and.....EWWWWWWWW!
whut ever...im gonna go and prepare for my HOCKEY GAME TODAY!
YAYAYAYAY
wish me luck
~Rain
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Postby ~tidepool » Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:06 am

ok...im spaming up my own post but.......
im really really really really sad...WHY?
because im getting NO comments...ive only had one person post....
i might just stop writing.....whats the point....i want some sorta comment....
i dont even care if its critic!
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Postby VesVes » Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:22 am

Don't stop writing! It's actually pretty good! I can't wait for more! :thumbup:
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Postby ~tidepool » Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:24 am

meep! yay! ok ill write a bit more! oh...and ill add people and their looks to the first post
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Postby ~tidepool » Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:55 pm

GO EAGLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay and hello stupid whut cha mic-call it
...yep im guessing it was odvious...WE WON THE HOCKEY GAME!!!!!!!!!!!!
yus! 5 to 1 ! we WON!
and I got a goooooaaaaaaal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im literly soooo happy i could explode!!!!!!!!
not to mention my bro got a hat-trick....FYI- hattrick= 3 goals
and my new friend got a goal 2!
ok my new buddy's name is Sail. hes really nice the the only other freshmen on the team! we met in the locker room before the game! he was happy there was another freshmen on the team. he told me all about the team and that they are really nice and all...
my bro made a friend 2!
Heat is the team caption...hes a TON nicer then he sounds! he assisted me on my goal! NICE pass there!
after the game Heat sayed i did a really good job! i responeded "you did GREAT" and he just laughed.
.........................................
well mom was bussy with Ally so she couldnt take us home.so we walked! it was fun! Sail lives really close by us so we walked with us! heat sayed he would drive us but i wanted to walk...and Jake promiced mom he would stay with me.
so Me, Jake, and Sail walked... me and Sail talked and walked most the way while Jake navigated! Ok,so Jake is like a walking talking MAP! seriously..i had NO idea where we were and Jake was all like "ok take a left turn" im like...WUT???i didnt know he was soo good at directions...no kidding! so I didnt have to do anything but walk! it was pretty nice condishing but after awile my hocky bag got REALLY heavy...not to mention RREEAALLLLYY heavy when we had to walk up 5 flights of stares to my apartment! but i SURVIVED! well duh, im writing this arnt I. well after after we got home me and sail talked more.
let me discribe/say whut was sayed.
"heh. thanks for walking home with me and Jake"
"hey no prob! i live just around the corner"
"oh! yah i forgot"
"heh........"
".....wanna have some pie....we have some leftover from christmas" ......whut elce should i have sayed....i ran outa things to say...
"heh! sure! what flavor"
"apple..." then i walked over to the kichen and get the pie out... open it and cut afew slices
"perfect i love apple" then he followed me to the kichen and grabed the peice i cut for him.
"JAKE!! WANNA PEICE OF PIE!".....well its good to ask...whut if he wasnt hungry
"SURE!" jake yelled back before he appeared in the kichen
"ok....one for Sail, one for Jake, one for me...." i haded everyone their pies.
"thanks" Sail sayed...
.....................................................
everyone finished their pies really quickly.... they we all sayed bye, see you at school soon, and see you at practice
and yep....thats it...
Im going to bed
?why?
cuz im tired....
Night!
~Rain
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Postby ~tidepool » Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:48 pm

heh...sorry i haven writen for afew days...

dear....blob....

I feel soooo bad for sail! hes adopted....but his family is so EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so we had hockey practice today, and at the end sail offered to take me home...i said sure...so we walked...
well today we decieded he would take me to his house...at first he was all "i dont think you should" but i insisted...
WHY DID I INSIST!
ok so me and sail stopd at my house for afew seconds for me to drop of my bag. i dont blame him for thinking of that...that bag of mine was HEAVY. then we walked on...like afew minuets later we were at his "house", more like a condo,it was tall and skinny with other houses attached,but this condo was a corner so....yah.
so, as soon as he opened the door, we heared sails parents yelling at each other, sail was just rolling his eyes..then his dad turned his head over to the door and...they stoped! thank goodness.... then the mom walked madly over to Sail and whispered ....kindof...well it was loud enough for me to hear
"i told you to vacume the carpet,do the dishes, empty the laundry, DUST, do your chores. then you just emptyed the laundry, and paraded over to hockey practice like you were avoiding chores! NEVER do that again. you never even told me where you were going! hockey is a lot of money, creaper. if I wanted to i could always make you quit. but for now your grouneded for a month! go up to the atic and dont come out unless your doing your chores! no food tonight! and tell your litte friend to leave too! creaper, if you disapoint me and disobey me any more i will send you back to the orphinage where you belong."
then he turned around. he looked sooooo mad! then he walked up to me and whispered this im my ear.
"ok, out side at the back of the house. there is a small window way at the top of the house. next to there is a hidden door that you can get through. i will throw down a ladder so you can get up. be quiet, the attic is right above my parents room."
i nodded. then sail walked me to the door and i pretended to leave. as soon as i heared the door shut i ran to the back of the house...without making a noise of corse. when i reached the back of the house, i found the tiny window no problem. in fact is was one of the only windows on this place. i waited for the ladder to come down. i sat on a grey brick untill i saw a wood and rope ladder fly down. the top was attached to the secret entrence so i climbed up. it was slightly difficult to get up it. everyonce in awile it would sway and almost hit the wall of where Sail said his parents room was.
when i finally reached the top sail pulled me in along with the ladder. ok this attic was tiny. there was a tiny bed in there that im guessing is where Sail slept. so we sat down on the bed and started chatting.
"wait so your adopted?"
"yep, normally its not too bad, but my parents are really...um...well..."
"yah, i figured that out"
"heh heh. i though so...i gotta tell you if you hear a beeping sound. hide behind my bed in a litter area. make sure my sheet covers you"
"why?"
"because if my parents see you here they would kill me...and probially you..."
"oh....how will we hear beeping sounds?"
"i seet up this gear that beaps whenever someone passes. i hid it in the wall, down stares, next to where the stares to get up to my room are. the beeping will be really quiet so only we will hear it...i turn off the alarm when ever my parents are up here. just in case"
"ah...."
then right then.....BEEEP BEEEEEEP BEEEEEEEEEEP. i freaked out and jumped into the place Sail told me to hide. then i looked at this screan..that i had no clue about. that showed everything that was going on in the room at that time.
then sail's step brother(Rage) i think walked in...he looked slightly mean thats for sure. then afew seconds later another one of his step brothers came in(Fight)...
"hey creaper! heared mom and dad got mad at you. what did you do this time!"
"heh heh! what does it matter! were still going to beat up our step bro like always"
"true..." the first dog then jumped on sail and scratched his back, sail whined when blood started to drip. then the other growled and bit sail, ripping fur from his stomach. i couldnt bear watching anymore so i closed my eyes untill the other dogs left and it was just me and sail in the room again. I jumped out from my hiding spot.
"oh my dog! are you ok!"
"Fine actually...not as bad as usual..."
"seriously?! how often does this happen..and why does everyone call you creaper???"
"heh, bout...one twice a week. sometimes its just a jump on me scratch my back thing..others its a, dig my fur out..."
"OOOOWWWWWW..."
"oh...they call me creaper because they think im always up to something bad, im misterious, a rule breaker. but to tell you the truth...im not what they think at all...in fact im the only one with chores in this family..."
"oh my gosh thats aweful! are you sure your ok"
"im fine...but i think you better go home now...before anything elce happenes."
"yah...good idea..."
sooooo i left...when i got home i went strait to my room and wrote you....
i think im going to have nightmeres about his family now....it was really sad....

OH! happy 2011! yayayayayay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Rain
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Re: Dear stupid thing a ma jig (By:Rain)[comments are LOVED]

Postby Akpahsj » Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:09 pm

This is really interesting!
Goodbye Guys.

I am sorry to say I am quitting CS, I just have too much other things. You guys have been like my friends, and you've always listened to my problems. It's hard for me to do this, as I have had so much fun on here. But now, I have found out what truly makes me happy and entertains me. My animals, and, of course, when it is too dark to go outside, my favorite show, Heartland. All my pets are free to give away. I'm going to miss this so much. Of course, I will miss all of you.
I will be checking in once in a while to accept trades, and once that Is over...

Bye forever, CS.
Julia.
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Postby ~tidepool » Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:18 pm

really! thanks!
it will probially get better when i get some school entries in here!
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