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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby deftonesly » Thu Sep 24, 2015 10:14 am

@Red, Thought about it on the spur of amusement.. Of course Flarepaw is the one that brings it up with so much sarcasm. XD

Also.. on a really random note, I found songs that represent my cats! ;o;

Scorchstar - Set fire to the Third Bar - Snow Patrol (His song for losing Sandfur, basically)
Flarepaw - Rotten to the Core - Disney's Descendants Soundtrack (A song that shows off her wickedness and immaturity)
Noeyes - Young and Beautiful - Lana Del Ray (How she dreamed, when younger, of being loved and being beautiful)
Hawkcry - I Hate Everyone - Mindless Self Indulgence (Well.. he's evil? Must I continue?)
Jackalhowl - Always Gold - Radical Face (His song for losing his brother, Grasstooth, and their relationship)
Ant - Monster - Nicki Minaj (Ant actually sounds like Nicki Minaj.. that is her voice!! Basically this just reveals how terrible and what a menace she is)
Scorpionkit - Insomnia - The Veronicas
(She will grow up to be an insomniac, will be very antisocial, and be depressed constantly)
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Fri Sep 25, 2015 7:15 pm

Oooh, imma do that too. c: and i'm also gonna send another form, as I'm bored and have a new favourite rp character of mine.
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Fri Sep 25, 2015 9:04 pm

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•Username•
Bugglos

•Cats Name•
Geckokit

•Age•
5/half moons

•Gender•
Tom

•Crush/Mate•
N/A

•Family•
Mother ⚪Lizard ⚫deceased ⚪stray
Father⚫an ununknown stray ⚪unknown
Brother⚪N/A⚫
Sister ⚫Poppy ⚪deceased ⚫stray

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•Position within clan•
Kit

wanted
Medicine cat apprentice
Medicine cat

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•disabilitie[s]/ails•
⚫short legs
⚪slur/stutter
⚫has trouble reading emotions
⚪jumpy/anxiety disorder
⚫zones out a lot
⚪his flat face causes him problems eating/drinking

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•name[s]•
gecko
geckokit

Wants
Geckopaw
Geckosprint

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•Personality•
Geckokit is one of the more patient and understanding of the kits currently in the nursery. He is often found studying plants or helping the medicine cat organise their herbs rather than fighting or playing with the other kits. He's jumpy and naive, getting upset quickly when the other kits and/or Apprentices tease him. His short legs, flat face, and odd way of talking doesn't help his case either.

Geckokit has a tendency to zone out and accidentally ignore what cats are saying to him. This has gotten him into trouble many, many times. He's also a dreamer, his heart always set on the fact he may become a medicine cat one day and be able to heal his clanmates better than he did his mother and sister.

•secrets•

Geckokit is often a lot sadder than he looks, able to hide it well. He blames himself for the death of his sister and mother and for not finding help sooner, nightmares of both their deaths seemingly always intermingling with his other more vivid dreams.

•speech pattern•

⚪Slurs⚫
⚫Misses out 'n's and 'm's⚪
⚪Mixes up 'o's and 'e's⚫
⚫Mumbles ⚪
⚪Stutters⚫

•physical traits•

Body Size
Short but not all that muscular, his fur hides a skinny frame and permanently malnourished body.

Pelt Color
Plain white.

breed
Persian

Fur Length
Medium-long, fluffy and the tiniest bit curly on all four of his ankles.

Eye Color
Emerald green with coal-black, slit-like pupils.

Whiskers, Nose, Paws
Long, sensitive, white Whiskers.
A damp-pink nose tinged with grey around the edges.
Plain white, with the tiniest bit of grey in the aforementioned tufts of fur.

Scars, Injuries
No scars, a permanent injury as a kit left his shoulder permanently sore, but not unusable.

Additional Features
A tail half the length of an average cat and curved in ears.

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•Strengths•
He'll be a strong hunter, his short legs allowing him to balance on the hot sand. He's fast and calm, patient.

•weaknesses•
Although Geckokits calm and patient nature would be great for hunting, it would weaken him in battle. He's often jumpy and shy, hiding behind bigger cats instead of fighting with the other kits; causing them to tease him almost relentlessly.

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•History•

•his first moon•
After Geckokits birth he was immediately thrown into a world of avading two-leg capture and scavenging for scraps of food among two-leg mess, his lack of nutrients and sufficient milk during this time led to growth defects such as his short legs and tail. His mother had pushed him and his sister, poppy, on and on, through miles and miles of two-leg houses before Poppy collapsed. She had died curled up next to him, although his mother did not seem to care, only leaving her body to rot as she pushed them forward.

•his second moon•
Geckokits second moon wasn't much better than his first, his mother still insisting that they continue on. He had started to notice a strange look in her eye, as if she wasn't quite there anymore; constantly muttering about 'lush green forests' and that 'one day they'll live in peace'

during this time Geckokit had grown weaker and weaker, fearing he would soon be joining his sister. Soon after they had entered another unfamiliar two-leg colony Lizard collapsed, becoming gravely ill. Geckokit cared for and treated his mother to the best of his ability, teaching himself how to use basic herbs. He matured quickly, although he was young and his efforts were never going to be enough. Lizard died less than a week later; leaving him alone.

•his third moon•

Geckokit was so distraught by this point he had hardly noticed when the two-legs came for him with their spider-web like hoops and rough paws, only drawn back from his thoughts by the stench of their monster and the vibration of cold flooring under his paws as they drove him off to The cold-place. He didn't notice as they muttered and whispered about him in their strange language, only mourning for his lost family as they prodded and poked, stretched and stroked him.

He had only just woken up from his slump when he heard the squeaking of doors opening and footsteps dashing towards his self-proclaimed prison. The two-leg kittens had dragged him out by his tail, squeezing and patting his head roughly. Needless to say that Geckokit lashed out, his new claws lashing against the two-legs face, causing it to wail with the most hideous of noises. After that he was taken away by a less friendly batch of two-legs, to a place were there was more shouting than anything. All Geckokit can remember from that time was being snatched up by another two-leg and rushed out of the cold-place, settled down by a warm two-leg controlled fire before he had even had a chance to register anything.

•his fourth moon•

He had lived with his new two legs for what seemed like an age to him, although it was merely a moon, when he was lifted from his dozing and placed gently into a cold brown box, his only view from it a few dotted holes in the side. When it was opened we was somewhere new, somewhere that smelt of dust and old wood, with the faces he had become so familiar with no where to be seen. instead there was a new face, one less smooth and more the complexion of a dried out prune. Although geckokit was scared, she was kind and never layed a paw to hurt him.

•half a moon later •

He had started to enjoy his new life when he woke up one day to find his owner unmoving, her usually rosy face now pale and unseeing. The two legs came a week later, taking away his only friends body and leaving him. His soft sleeping spot had been taken away and the warm fire put out, leaving him once again utterly alone.

Geckokit went through the next phase of his life in a daze, being moved here and there, from one two-leg nest to another, never being allowed to stay in one place before he finally ended up somewhere hot, somewhere humid. Somewhere he felt was calling him, the desert. Geckokit had never liked the summer or especially hot places, but this time if felt like it was calling him.

It didn't take long for him to stumble upon the mirage. Starving and dehydrated he had collapsed into the camp that, unknown to him, would become his home for the rest of his life.

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•Other•
He can be rude at times, although he doesn't seem to realise he's being rude. He is often blunt, calling people out without remorse as he thinks fit, unable to hold secrets even if his life depended on it. He was named after his bright green eyes, and his mother, Lizard.

Geckokit oftens gets strange and vivid dreams, causing him to wake up screaming more than once. He hasn't told anyone in fear of being made fun of even more, passing them off as nightmares.

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Word reference
Cold place - animal rescue shelter
Spider Web hoops - nets
Rough paws - hands
Monster - van
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Fri Sep 25, 2015 10:06 pm

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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby yeeee. » Fri Sep 25, 2015 11:37 pm

Sorry for not posting Dx but post will be up later today or tomorrow thank starclan it's friday
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Fri Sep 25, 2015 11:39 pm

@darkest

Just be glad you're not me ^^" i've been ill all day with food poisoning... ;-;
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby deftonesly » Sat Sep 26, 2015 9:41 am

bugglos wrote:
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•Username•
Bugglos

•Cats Name•
Geckokit

•Age•
5/half moons

•Gender•
Tom

•Crush/Mate•
N/A

•Family•
Mother ⚪lizard ⚫alive⚪kittypet
Father⚫an unknown stray ⚪unknown
Brother⚪N/A⚫
Sister ⚫poppy ⚪alive ⚫kittypet

•Position within clan•
Kit

wanted
Medicine cat apprentice
Medicine cat

•disabilitie[s]/ails•
⚫short legs
⚪slur/stutter
⚫has trouble reading emotions
⚪jumpy/anxiety disorder
⚫zones out a lot
⚪his flat face causes him problems eating/drinking

•name[s]•
geckokit

Wants
Geckopaw
Geckosprint

•Personality•
Geckokit is the more patient and understanding of the kits currently in the nursery, often found studying plants or helping the medicine cat organise their herbs rather than fighting or playing with the other kits. He's jumpy and naive, getting upset quickly when the other kits and/or Apprentices tease him. His short legs, flat face, and odd way of talking doesn't help his case either.

•Strengths•
He'll be a strong hunter, his short legs allowing him to balance on the hot sand. He's fast and calm, patient.

•weaknesses•
Although geckokits' calm and patient nature would be great for hunting, it would weaken him in battle. He's often jumpy and shy, hiding behind bigger cats instead of fighting with the other kits; often causing them to tease him.

•History•
Born a purebred kittypet, he was tossed out onto the streets after his elderly owner died when he was around 3/half moons. He was caught and brought for cheap before being tied down and intended to be used as bait in the desert. He was luckily found by a desert clan warrior, and was set free, brought back to camp starving and on the verge of death. With the help of his new clan mates he's starting to fit in, although the other kits still tease him more than anycat else. Geckokit also seems to keep to himself, quiet and sometimes a little too sad for a kit as young as himself.

•Other•
He can be rude at times, although he doesn't seem to realise he's being rude. He is often blunt, calling people out without remorse as he thinks fit, unable to hold secrets even if his life depended on it. He was named after his bright green eyes, and his mother, lizard.

Geckokit oftens gets strange and vivid dreams, causing him to wake up screaming more than once. He hasn't told anyone in fear of being made fun of even more, passing them off as nightmares.

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(hope this is okay, tell me if i need to add more. I didn't add a writing sample as you've already seen one, is that okay? c:)


Why the two pictures of Geckokit, might I add? Please use the the picture that represents what he CURRENTLY looks like to serve as his description.. It is against CS rules to post multiple pictures of one character (unless they are a shapeshifter, which he obviously isn't). Also, please, please add more to his personality and history!!
He will not be accepted until that is fixed as well as the typos..
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Sat Sep 26, 2015 9:44 am

What typos...? I checked through it, like, four times... And i didn't know that, sorry, I'll delete one. I'll also add more, although I'm unsure what to write as he is still a kit.
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby deftonesly » Sat Sep 26, 2015 9:50 am

Well, you don't capitalize Geckokit's name multiple times, put the apostrophe in the wrong paces, you use the ";" in many wrong places, too, many things are misspelled, and you haven't placed your commas correctly? I think that matters when you are trying to get accepted into a semi-literature role-play, don't you think?

As for his history, obviously there is more to it than what you wrote? Maybe write more on what he endured while being chained up in the middle of nowhere before a DesertClan cat found him?
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Re: ☀️ DesertClan ☀️|| Discussion and Forms

Postby N3wt0n » Sat Sep 26, 2015 9:54 am

Oh, no, I get what you're saying of course. I just had checked and double rechecked my grammar and didn't see anything wrong, but I guess I was wrong. And do you mind telling me what I misspelled? I can't see any faults with my spelling.

I'll add more onto that, yes. Thanks for the suggestion.
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