Plumerian Fanclub ♥ V.3

[Arrows]

@The Master Doctor omigosh. that is perfection.
that is literally the only reason I posted.

[benjeep]

@Arrows thank you! I'm glad that you like them! c: They were a ton of fun to make!

Um if anybody is willing, I'd really like for someone to read my form for #605. I wrote a poem, and it breaks the rhyming scheme near the end and I'm not sure how it sounds (I suggest reading it out loud). Here is my form: viewtopic.php?f=53&t=2771728&p=89662953#p89662953

It's only 100 words, so I would really appreciate some opinions.

[SukarettoYanagi]

Okay, so, ugh. I am VERY, VERY, VERY hesitant about this buuuttttt;
I am POSSIBLY looking for a crush/date/mate for Benjamin.

I wanna see what is out there for him! Shoot me a PM with a link/personality if you've got anyone interested! Just know that I am not big on RPing anymore and would rather just work out the details of a relationship.

@leifa; cute!

[*Starshimmer*]

Don't have time for lots of replies, apologies >.<"

@Willow;; good luck! Ben is super cute!!


Going on vacation! Check out my free art journal here~
http://breebee421.deviantart.com/journa ... -553829389

[Lady Sif]

Guess who the most amazing person ever is! It's Sosna!

She ordered me this adorable piece from Char!

Look at my little trickster child!

She's amazing and everyone should go give her all the love in the world right now <3

@leifa
Good job matching Char's style!

[néktar]

Very, very scared about doing this..
But
I'm offering color in's of the line-art below for 10 da points!


I'm taking two slots for now may open more later! PM me if interested.
- Wafflez2
-

✓ I can do try-out in these
✓ Small edits cost nothing
✓ Accessories cost 5 extra points | Warning accessories are iffy
✓ I can resize it if needed

⚠ Please be warned I am highly new to this and I may botch some plumies designs,
So if you order please, go easy on me QuQ
Also please leave my mark on there!

@Tart ;; congrats on getting your first plumie!!!
@ The Master Doctor ;; That is the best art I've ever seen uvu

[~Soul~]

I would love to introduce my very first Plumie T.T
His name is Bigby and I would love to find rps
and relationships for him!
If interested please pm me!

[Jochedo]

@~Soul~ Congrats with Bigby!

Look at the hella awesome art I got from Charchar2! I am so happy right now nvn Well there was Some confusion i didn't really like get it i had to pay for it xD it wasn't free x3

[mal du pays]

@jochedo; Woah, what a lovely piece!
@~Soul~ congratulations on your first plumie! <3
@starless.; what a lovely lineart! <3

I got some absolutely adorable pixels of Kodiak yesterday <3


By Scarfire ;


By Spycynder
<3

[Blossom Birchwood]

Hey guys! Sorry for the super long post. I'll do my comments now really quick:
@Takura- I absolutely love the pixel art! Spycynder did a great job working with pixels! I can see the character in the art, I'm so happy for you :) And that tiny pizel by scarfire- ugh. I love tiny things, it's so freaking cuteeeee <3

@jochedo23- Oh man you are super lucky! That art is beautiful!! Congrats! :D

@~Soul~ - omg, congrats on your first Plumie!! I'm trying to win my first, so you're giving me hope as a non-owner!! <3 He is super handsome!

@Starless. -That headshot is adorable! If I had a plumie and 10 DA points, I would totally ask for a color in!

@Lady Sif- So many people getting art from Char! You're so lucky <3 You must have great friends who got you art of your plumie! That's sweet of them!!

Ok, now to my post. :3

So, I have some super long hours at work. I get paid to do whatever I'd like. Except there is no internet, and my computer is a desktop so I can't bring it to work with me. On Wednesday I have 10 hours to myself. And I was thinking what better way to pass time than to watch movies, read, and draw?!

So, I have this idea. Nobody has given me input on my form for my form. I'm a non-owner and really I would really like some feedback, good or bad- I really want to know. So I was thinking of this:
To Anyone who can send me a detailed feedback critique on my form, I will do some drawings/ sketches of your plumerian!

Here is my form that I would like some feedback on

I really want to be organized, so if anyone is interested in some art in exchange for some feedback, please send me some feedback. If it's a good critique, I'd be more than happy to draw your plumerian. But only 1! I'm only limiting to 1 plum just in case I get flooded.
I need feedback. Don't just tell me what I wanna hear, that it's all great, nothing is wrong. Unless there really isn't anything wrong, but I know there must be some flaws to my form.
Please fill out this form and send it to me in a PM if you want to give me feedback, and get some art in return!
Critique form:

Code: Select all

[b]Here is my feedback![/b]
[b]Is she realistic:[/b]
[b]Is there something out of place:[/b]
[b]Is she unique:[/b]
[b]Should anything be removed:[/b]
[b]Should anything be added:[/b]
[b]Feedback on the art:[/b]
[b]Opinion on her personality:[/b]
[b]Any other comments/ Critiques:[/b]
[b]Would you like a sketch of your plumerian:[/b]
[list][i]If yes fill out below:[/i][/list]
[b]Plumerians name:[/b]
[b]Link to adoption page:[/b]
[b]Is this gift art, or for yourself:[/b]
[b]Short personality:[/b]


Also, side note: Mushu has a hole in his ear, and I have yet to fix my art about that- so don't mention it in the critique please! :)