Looking for form critiques for #590!
I REALLY need some form critiques for my form, as this is one of my Love you plumies, (small dreamie) Any help would be appreciated!
My Form:
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┌ ► "The Basics" ► ┐
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► Believix ►
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Asahi
└ ► Meaning Morning Sun In Japanese ► ┛
►Where They'd Want To Travel Most And Why: ►
► Asahi was always interested into going to Mount Everest! She loves the landscape, and said to have a fiery personality, and being a huge rebel by refusing things and doing it by herself, she wants to become to first Plumie to reach the top! Fastest, and most efficient too!
It was a normal school day learning about history, her teacher started to talk about Mount Everest, and her eyes sparkled. Not sure if she could make it up the top, she wanted to try anyway. "Excuse me, how tall is the mountain?" She asked curious as ever. "Its 8.848 km" her teacher said. "Woah..." all of the class cheered. "I wanna climb it but I don't think i'll make it." Asahi said, not having confidence in herself. "Asahi, you should stop being so unconfident. If you really think you can, you can." From then on, she wanted to climb the tallest mountain in history, and not back down. ►
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► Art On The Right ►
► Headshot By Calder ►
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