- Staring at my black document waiting for inspiration to slip in.
I have bits of pieces of ideas, but I just can't come up with the whole plot ):
watermelon. wrote:
thank you :3
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*groans* I have to wait for my mom to get home so we can get windows office or whatever
it's like 110 dollars but she gets some sort of a work discount (at least she used to) so let's hope she still gets the discount.
H.O.P.E wrote:
Staring at my black document waiting for inspiration to slip in.
I have bits of pieces of ideas, but I just can't come up with the whole plot ):
Vakarian wrote:
hello everyone
new lazy writer incoming.
lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
ANYWAYS
watermelon. wrote:
thank you :3
-
*groans* I have to wait for my mom to get home so we can get windows office or whatever
it's like 110 dollars but she gets some sort of a work discount (at least she used to) so let's hope she still gets the discount.
lucille. wrote:watermelon. wrote:
thank you :3
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*groans* I have to wait for my mom to get home so we can get windows office or whatever
it's like 110 dollars but she gets some sort of a work discount (at least she used to) so let's hope she still gets the discount.
*double posting like #rulebreaker*
oh mel.
first world problems.
lucille. wrote:Vakarian wrote:
hello everyone :D new lazy writer incoming.
lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
ANYWAYS
(don't mind me) excuse me but you never actually asked me to confirm that you were able to join. sorry, but it's just procedure :C
Vakarian wrote:lucille. wrote:Vakarian wrote:
hello everyone
new lazy writer incoming.
lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
ANYWAYS
(don't mind me) excuse me but you never actually asked me to confirm that you were able to join. sorry, but it's just procedure :C
whoops, super duper sorry :O i just made the assumption that it was an auto join thing, sorry again :>
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