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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 3:26 am

the night was like any other summer night in breezeclan's field, dry and hot. though tonight ominous dark clouds rolled a
crossed the sky, blocking the stars and moon from sight. packed close, hidden between the little forest the clan had, was
a well put together undergrowth camp from around the area - which was used to make what they have lived in for gene-
rations. outside the entrance sat a large tabby tom. his orange eyes unwavering as he stared off into the distance,
keeping an eye and ear out for any sign of danger. he knew his shift of watching over his clanmates this night would soon
be over and one of the warriors would becoming out shortly to take over. the tom could already feel the days events of
hunting weighing down on his muscles and was ready to curl into his waiting nest. as he kept guard duty his mind began
to think of who he should send on tomorrow morning's patrols, he had already set up the dawn patrol, but more tasks
still need to be done and it was up to him to set most of this all up - he was the deputy after all. before he could think
much more on it a loud crack sounded in the distance along with a blinding flash of light; making the tom jump in shock.
it seemed the first dry storm of the season had begun.
a few more moments had passed before an odd smell hit the tom's senses. he frowned at the unusual dry smell and as if the
leaves were burning. his eyes widened as it came to him. he knew the scent from when the twolegs would sometimes make
little fires out in the campgrounds near the clan's territory - but they could never smell it this far out. getting to his paws he
began walking down the path from the entrance to find the source. he was only several fox lengths down when he saw it,
multiple trees caught in a wild rage of bright fire. he let out a yowl of alarm as he watched with baited breath as it continued
to spread along the trees limbs, then spreading to the next tree and even to the forest floor. he was brought out of his thoughts
when another crack of thunder sounded close by and with another yowl the tabby took off back toward the camp. "fire! fire!"
he called, bursting through the thorn entrance not even flinching as it ripped at his fur. "everyone up! fire!"
- - -
it was only a few moments later that breezeclan found themselves on the other side of the wide river - thankfully it had been
shallow enough making it easy for them all to cross; some had padded through the water while others took the rock path.
now they stood on the other side watching what used to be their home burn. they were all silent as the watched on, mourning
their loss of kin and a life they knew they could never have again. "where's hawkheart?" a yowl called from the back. at the
mention of the deputy the clan began to whisper between themselves, all eyes looking for the tabby tom. but no one could
find the heroic tom; who had saved their lives that night. and along with many others - they would never see him again.


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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:00 am

after escaping a raging forest fire, that started from what breezeclan calls a dry storm, the survivors have been on a long
journey to find a new home and start a new. they have lost many including their deputy who died in the fire trying to rescue
the queens, kits, and elders. on the journey a few moons in they lost their medicine cat who got badly injured by the flames
and died from the wound. they have barley been contacted by their starclan ancestors since the fire. some think they have
been abandoned by them to forever wonder without purpose, others believe starclan is as lost as they are. soon as they make
their finally step up a rather large mountain they see the view of a beautiful lake, surrounded by open fields and a large dense
pine forest. the cats are ecstatic and make their way down the mountain and in less then a moon have come upon the open
lush fields. they'll decided to make their home here, finding a open cave near the mountains edge with the view of the lake.
but they have no idea of the danger that lurks beneath the trees - the tribe of storming skies.
the tribe will watch the clan from the shadows for the first few days telling their commander of what they are doing and how
the appear to be making the fields their home. outraged the tribe commander goes to meet these clan cats and orders them to
leave. breezeclan still deeply depressed, anxious, and completely worn argue back with the tribe only to dig themselves a deeper
hole with the tribes anger. they declare war on each other and soon the fighting begins. the clan sees the tribe as a group of
barbarian cats who just want nothing but bloodshed. while the tribe sees the clan as a group of pompous kittypets who think
they can try to survive in the wild. but neither know of the even bigger danger that lurks on the mountain, following
breezeclan's scent down the slope - and it will find them.
but who will it find first?
and will the other group of cats suck up their pride to help the other fight off a beast?
a beast who may bring them together? can they ever live in harmony?
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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:30 am
you should know these. if you don't i'd advise you to go read them now before joining.
this is a literate roleplay. i expect to see a couple detailed paragraphs of several lines or more. proper
grammar and punctuation. i understand writers block but it should not be used as a excuse all the time.
forms and all ooc talk should only be posted on the discussion thread. forms should be detailed and hold
all information that is needed. i have every right to reject forms or ask for them to be changed.
you can have four characters in total. two in the clan and two in the tribe. two males, two females,
only one high rank per person. not accepting any rouges, loners, or kittypets in this roleplay.
keep everything realistic. no powers, no oddly colored pelts or eyes. the tribe cats should have tribe names
while the clan have traditional names. this is a WAR roleplay. cats will get seriously injured and some will
die in battle. but this is also where god-modding and power-playing comes in - i don't want to see it. your
cat is not stronger then everyone else nor able to dodge every attack that comes toward them.
it is nice, fun, and encouraged. just none of it outside of roleplay - respect and include everyone. though
this is a war roleplay, as previously stated, please don't go killing off other peoples characters without
permission from them. but again keep in mind there will be a lot of fighting - cats will have to die. i can't
stress it enough; obviously. nothing over the top should happen without my permission, like random dogs
raiding the camp or any natural disaster. cross clan love interests will be around but i don't want to be
seeing every cat in one. no being mates with your own characters.
please try to post at least once or twice every few days, keep the roleplay going. if you haven't posted for
about a week, i'll most likely remove your cats from the roleplay without much warning. with that in mind
your welcomed to join back in with the same characters as long as you remain active. please let me know
if real life things might be in the way of being able to post for awhile.
signatures should be removed from forms and roleplay. small text is not mandatory - though do remember
to make things look appeasing to the eye. no changing the plot or whats happening in the roleplay just
because you might not like where it's going. pm all reserves to me. rules are subject to change.

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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:39 am
the old & the new .┏━━━━━━━━━━━━━┓
old territory .x . xfields .x . x . xcamp .x . x┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
in-between .┏━━━━━━━━━━━━━┓
the mountain view .xfields to forest .x . xriver .x . xthe lake .x . x . x . x┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
the tribe's forest .┏━━━━━━━━━━━━━┓
into the forest .x . xthe dense woods.x . xcamp .x┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:53 am
cross clan relations .
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love .
name likes name
name and name like each other
name and name are mates
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the tribe .
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kin .
name is blank to name(s)
love .
name likes name
name and name like each other
name and name are mates
teacher to trainee .
name mentors name
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by sinopa » Tue Aug 04, 2015 11:57 am
weather .
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green-leaf .
the weather is hot and a little humid,
especially in the middle of the day.
mornings are dewy while nights are
slightly cooler. it's currently the
middle of green-leaf, the hottest
time but soon the days will begin
to cool off with the coming moons.
prey is plentiful and full of life,
everything is an easy catch.
twolegs are currently in their
nests around the lake.
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prey .
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most common to most rare
mice
voles & water voles
shrew & water shrew
squirrels
most types of small birds
rabbit & hare
fish
falcons, hawks, eagles
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predators .
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most common to most rare
foxes
badgers
twolegs
twolegs dogs
hawks
eagles
owls
mountain lion
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traditions .
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MANDATORY READ, please read this! some important things for the roleplay can be found here.
while breezeclan is like any other clan you may come to find - with their starclan and original ways of the never changing warrior code. the tribe of storming skies is of nothing you've come to know. sure they might give themselves names like the tribe of rushing water. but instead of having just the healer or stoneteller as the leader figure they have what they call a commander. this commander must always be called such as a sign of respect. if you get to call them by their original name you are someone who is highly respected and loved in the commander's eyes. once a cat becomes the commander their name like, brook where small fish swim becomes just commander brook. this cat is like an other leader in charge but can sometimes come off more assertive and in charge; with their second in command beside them. the healer is more like the ordinary stoneteller without much leadership - though the commander will look to them for advice often. the healer knows much about medicine and is usually considered very wise and respected throughout the tribe - they are the most likely to talk to the ancestors. fighters are ones who guard the territory and fight off any predators who happen to step foot across the boarders. their training focus more combat, scouting, and how to take down enemies, but they do know how to hunt if its needed. while hunters on the other hand are stealthy and agile training more on hunting and stalking skill, though they too know how to fight if the time calls for it.
the tribe depends much on the trees and shadows for strategies. they can hunt from them and attack also. they use the forest to their advantage and sometimes even cover themselves with mud and leaves to hide better - and it helps like armor too. the tribe can come off very territorial and overzealous, they appear as stocky tough cats with the will to fight and win. they are the types of cats to be confident but independent and very stubborn. first impression would be that they are brutal, cruel, and bloodthirsty. but really they are a group of cats who see each other as family and they want to protect what they hold dear. every day at sunset the tribe will come together in the center of their camp to share tongues with everyone and eat the last meal of the day before going off to sleep.
while breezeclan on the other hand is like the four original clans. they listen to the warrior code, follow their ancestors path, and hold ceremonies for their changing of ranks. but breezeclan do not rely on the forest but more their speed and agility out in the open fields - they can go fast and for long distances. they can also swim rather well. breezeclan after their journey are still proud cats and can sometimes come off a little abrupt and conceited. but really they just want to settle down in a safe home where their loved ones can finally relax - they too just wish to protect what is dear.
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