Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[detective who.]

It's my pleasure, Simon.

Greyfoot A green eyed green tom with a white tip on his tail, he is also blind in his right eye. Greyfoot is a calm cat but can lose it when angered enough.

Shellflower A long haired red silver molly with amber eyes. A gentile molly who is amazing with kits. She is kind but lacks in smarts but she is always there for her mate Greyfoot.

Blackleaf A black tom with yellow eyes. A cold rude tom who only wants to work and only talks to his patiences and Emberpool.

Blueclaw A blue tabby molly with green eyes. A bold strong cat who would gladly die for her clan, well that's what she says but she'd rather get out a fight alive. She's a huge hypocrite but is loyal to no end.

Brindlepelt A brown tabby tom with a white chest and hazel eyes. An immature cat who is a bit of a wimp. He cant take a hint and needs to be sat down and told what to do and acts like a kit all the time.

Otterwisker A chocolate brown tom with yellow eyes. A kind gentile tom who loves his mate Swanfur very dearly. He can get very boring rather quickly and talks about his mate and kits all the time to a point where you want to throttle him

These characters are the main characters for a story I'm writing so the characters I just mention don't have to be reviewed thanks

Good day to you, thedarkelectric.

Greyfoot's prefix is great, but as you haven't told me any of his skills, I don't know about his suffix. -foot indicates a swift cat.

Shellflower's name is excellent, though I'm not sure how likely it is that the red silver colouring would show up in the wild.

Blackleaf's prefix works fine, but I don't know about his suffix, as you didn't write any skills here. -leaf is for an extremely skilled medicine cat.

Blueclaw's prefix is great, but I'm not sure about her suffix. -claw is given to a strong fighter, but I get the impression that she's all talk. That might just be how I'm reading it, though.

Brindlepelt's name is fine, but I'm not sure his personality is. The way a Clan functions, he should have matured a long time ago, or he will be suffering punishments constantly.

Otterwhisker's name is fantastic, as long as he's got the hunting skills to back up his suffix. As a side note, solid brown pelts don't usually occur in the wild.

I hope this was helpful. Feel free to write in again, and have a lovely day.

[thedarkelectric]

It's my pleasure, Simon.

Greyfoot A green eyed green tom with a white tip on his tail, he is also blind in his right eye. Greyfoot is a calm cat but can lose it when angered enough.

Shellflower A long haired red silver molly with amber eyes. A gentile molly who is amazing with kits. She is kind but lacks in smarts but she is always there for her mate Greyfoot.

Blackleaf A black tom with yellow eyes. A cold rude tom who only wants to work and only talks to his patiences and Emberpool.

Blueclaw A blue tabby molly with green eyes. A bold strong cat who would gladly die for her clan, well that's what she says but she'd rather get out a fight alive. She's a huge hypocrite but is loyal to no end.

Brindlepelt A brown tabby tom with a white chest and hazel eyes. An immature cat who is a bit of a wimp. He cant take a hint and needs to be sat down and told what to do and acts like a kit all the time.

Otterwisker A chocolate brown tom with yellow eyes. A kind gentile tom who loves his mate Swanfur very dearly. He can get very boring rather quickly and talks about his mate and kits all the time to a point where you want to throttle him

These characters are the main characters for a story I'm writing so the characters I just mention don't have to be reviewed thanks

Good day to you, thedarkelectric.

Greyfoot's prefix is great, but as you haven't told me any of his skills, I don't know about his suffix. -foot indicates a swift cat.

Shellflower's name is excellent, though I'm not sure how likely it is that the red silver colouring would show up in the wild.

Blackleaf's prefix works fine, but I don't know about his suffix, as you didn't write any skills here. -leaf is for an extremely skilled medicine cat.

Blueclaw's prefix is great, but I'm not sure about her suffix. -claw is given to a strong fighter, but I get the impression that she's all talk. That might just be how I'm reading it, though.

Brindlepelt's name is fine, but I'm not sure his personality is. The way a Clan functions, he should have matured a long time ago, or he will be suffering punishments constantly.

Otterwhisker's name is fantastic, as long as he's got the hunting skills to back up his suffix. As a side note, solid brown pelts don't usually occur in the wild.

I hope this was helpful. Feel free to write in again, and have a lovely day.

Thanks for the critique Detective Who and I will work on the descriptions and change Otterwisker's fur to something else, yes Blackleaf is a med cat and an excellent one at that, I will try to write something up for Blueclaw so her name makes sence, Shellflower is halve kittypet (trust me she's the only one in the story) thus explaining the colour, Greyfoot is fast and quick on his feet, Brindlepelt's clan is a mess so they don't have time to make a fuss over a cat who still gives food to the clan.
As I said I will work on the descriptions so people understand the characters.
Thanks again

[lady chocobo]

hello again~ c: i've returned with some new characters. if you could take a look, and offer your thoughts, that'd be great.

Name: Roll (as a kittypet) | Sparrow- or Pipit- for warrior name
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kittypet | Warrior | Leader
Description: brown mackerel tabby tom with one amber eye and one hazel eye boop!
Personality: Roll is a curious cat, and loves exploring. has a wanderlust for adventure, and will go to great lengths to sniff out whatever it is that's caught his attention. He wants to know everything there is to know about the world. This has gotten him in trouble before with his housefolk, but he shrugs it off and keeps looking for new things to do. He's determined, adventurous, and curious.
Skills: has he's always investigating things, he's developed pretty decent tracking skills.
Other: thinking -nose as a suffix, but i also the like sound of Sparrowstripe or Pipitstripe.

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Name: Todd (before warrior name) | Fox-, Russet-, Red- as a warrior name
Gender: Tom
Rank: Alleycat | Warrior | Leader
Description: Long-haired reddish-brown tom with gold eyes. click
Personality: Todd is very quick to hold a grudge, and very slow to forgive people. He judges cats based on surface level, which unfortunately has earned him ire from other cats and has lost him friends. If one gets on his good side, Todd is intensely loyal and willing to help in whatever way he can. If someone hates him, they're right for it because he's stubborn and refuses to listen to them if he doesn't like them, but if one loves him, then they're also accurate because he's steadfastly loyal and happy to help his friends. When Todd gets especially close to other cats, he's very possessive of them and doesn't like to share, which has caused him to lose several friends over the course of his life.
Skills: He's an excellent hunter, and can always be counted on to bring prey home. will receive the -whisker suffix.
Other: i think he might be a bit too dark for Fox-? but maybe not. : o

[detective who.]

You're very welcome, thedarkelectric. Thank you for your additions; those make much more sense now. I hope Brindlepelt gets a chance to shape up.

hello again~ c: i've returned with some new characters. if you could take a look, and offer your thoughts, that'd be great.

Name: Roll (as a kittypet) | Sparrow- or Pipit- for warrior name
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kittypet | Warrior | Leader
Description: brown mackerel tabby tom with one amber eye and one hazel eye boop!
Personality: Roll is a curious cat, and loves exploring. has a wanderlust for adventure, and will go to great lengths to sniff out whatever it is that's caught his attention. He wants to know everything there is to know about the world. This has gotten him in trouble before with his housefolk, but he shrugs it off and keeps looking for new things to do. He's determined, adventurous, and curious.
Skills: has he's always investigating things, he's developed pretty decent tracking skills.
Other: thinking -nose as a suffix, but i also the like sound of Sparrowstripe or Pipitstripe.

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Name: Todd (before warrior name) | Fox-, Russet-, Red- as a warrior name
Gender: Tom
Rank: Alleycat | Warrior | Leader
Description: Long-haired reddish-brown tom with gold eyes. click
Personality: Todd is very quick to hold a grudge, and very slow to forgive people. He judges cats based on surface level, which unfortunately has earned him ire from other cats and has lost him friends. If one gets on his good side, Todd is intensely loyal and willing to help in whatever way he can. If someone hates him, they're right for it because he's stubborn and refuses to listen to them if he doesn't like them, but if one loves him, then they're also accurate because he's steadfastly loyal and happy to help his friends. When Todd gets especially close to other cats, he's very possessive of them and doesn't like to share, which has caused him to lose several friends over the course of his life.
Skills: He's an excellent hunter, and can always be counted on to bring prey home. will receive the -whisker suffix.
Other: i think he might be a bit too dark for Fox-? but maybe not. : o

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Hi again, Lady!
Roll is such a cute name, ehehe (and what a precious kitty!). I think pipit- will fit his colouring better than sparrow-, also.
He's very much a -nose cat, but it's your call.

Todd and Roll that is too cute
You definitely made the right call with -whisker. I'm really not sure about fox-, though. He might be too dark, but I think it's really up to you; I'd recommend you go look at photographs of red foxes and decide based off that.

I hope this helped, Lady. Happy writing!

[chrislion121]

I'm back!


Name: Owlpaw (not sure for suffix)
Personality: He is very humerus. He loves to fun and is hard to find a time when he is serious. Owlpaw goofs off a lot but rarely gets in trouble for it.
Skills: He often doesn't get in trouble because he is good a stalking around the undergrowth unseen, unheard, and unscented. Even though he doesn't try his hardest all the time he is very skilled.


Name: Icepaw Willowpaw or Moonpaw (not sure for suffix)
Personality: Funny and energetic, she is very caring and loving. Sometimes it can be hard to earn her trust and loyalty but it is unwavering. She is very nice to others but she can be very strict.
Skills: She is not particularly strong but she is extremely agile and light on her feet. Her senses are very acute though she doesn't show it often. Her attributes make her an amazing hunter.

[Pebblemoon]

Hi! You can call me Pebble
Here are my names...

Ashfoot - gray tom with dark grey paws (very fast)
Bramblelight - light brown tom with tiny golden flecks
Redthroat - dark brown tom with
ginger chest
Mousetail - light brown she-cat with a ginger tail
Marshcloud - fluffy gray tom with pale green eyes
Leopardfoot - spotted brown she-cat with dark amber eyes
Sunstreak - golden tabby tom with pale stripes
Whitemist - beautiful white she-cat with misty blue eyes
Robinwing - light brown she-cat with green eyes
Eaglepaw - ginger and black tabby she-cat (suggest names?)
Iceflower - beautiful creamy white she-cat with blue eyes
Fawnspots - pretty light brown she-cat with leopard spots

Thanks so much!!

[detective who.]

Apologies for my long absence. I've had a lot going on, not the least of which was school starting up again. I'm here now, though!

I'm back!

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Name: Owlpaw (not sure for suffix)
Personality: He is very humerus. He loves to fun and is hard to find a time when he is serious. Owlpaw goofs off a lot but rarely gets in trouble for it.
Skills: He often doesn't get in trouble because he is good a stalking around the undergrowth unseen, unheard, and unscented. Even though he doesn't try his hardest all the time he is very skilled.

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Name: Icepaw Willowpaw or Moonpaw (not sure for suffix)
Personality: Funny and energetic, she is very caring and loving. Sometimes it can be hard to earn her trust and loyalty but it is unwavering. She is very nice to others but she can be very strict.
Skills: She is not particularly strong but she is extremely agile and light on her feet. Her senses are very acute though she doesn't show it often. Her attributes make her an amazing hunter.

Owlpaw's prefix is great. I'm not sure how to help you on his suffix. Stalking itself does not correlate to a suffix; however, if he learns to work hard and put it to good use by the time he's a warrior, he'd likely be able to hone the hunting skills worthy of the suffix -whisker.

I'd go for willow- on your second cat, as she's grey, and ice- is for white. The moon is sacred in this system, and as such wouldn't be used as a prefix. On suffix, you could go for either -tail or -whisker; -tail for her agility, if that's stronger/more notable, or -whisker for hunting.
I hope this is helpful, feel free to follow up.

Hi! You can call me Pebble :D
Here are my names...

Ashfoot - gray tom with dark grey paws (very fast)
Bramblelight - light brown tom with tiny golden flecks
Redthroat - dark brown tom with
ginger chest
Mousetail - light brown she-cat with a ginger tail
Marshcloud - fluffy gray tom with pale green eyes
Leopardfoot - spotted brown she-cat with dark amber eyes
Sunstreak - golden tabby tom with pale stripes
Whitemist - beautiful white she-cat with misty blue eyes
Robinwing - light brown she-cat with green eyes
Eaglepaw - ginger and black tabby she-cat (suggest names?)
Iceflower - beautiful creamy white she-cat with blue eyes
Fawnspots - pretty light brown she-cat with leopard spots

Thanks so much!!

Hi, Pebble! I'm afraid this is a lot at once; would you mind giving these to me about five at a time, with more information on each? I can't do much with these.

[blue neighbourhood]

Heya! It's Ferrets/Greystripe/whatever back agaiiiin... cx

Name: Quailfeather (Medicine cat)
Description:

A dark grey tom with green eyes, and a short scar across his flank.
Skill/Personality Notes: He has a dry sense of humour, and his quite a blunt tom. But he is caring, and his heart breaks every time he fails to heal a cat (happened a lot -- plots, heh).

Thanks! C:

[detective who.]

Heya! It's Ferrets/Greystripe/whatever back agaiiiin... cx

Name: Quailfeather (Medicine cat)
Description:
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A dark grey tom with green eyes, and a short scar across his flank.
Skill/Personality Notes: He has a dry sense of humour, and his quite a blunt tom. But he is caring, and his heart breaks every time he fails to heal a cat (happened a lot -- plots, heh).

Thanks! C:

Hello again, Ferrets/Greystripe! I'll call you whatever you'd like to be called. Sorry it's been a few days.
I am very fond of the prefix quail-, but I'm afraid it doesn't fit your cat. Quail- is for brown kitties. I suggest you look through thte list linked on the front page (someday I'll finish the copied list, but Grey isn't on there yet).
To help with your suffix, I'll need more information on his skills, as these are more important than his personality.
Looking forward to your response!

also my dog is a border collie-mix, she's a little brown fluff <3 all of her siblings were black and white, though

[blue neighbourhood]

Okay ^-^ I'll look at it now! C: <3

Aw! *-* My doggy's 100% collie -- she's so exciteable, even though she's seven.. What is your's mixed with? <3

Edit;; I like Ash, Pebble, Stone and Storm -- I use this image for forms. What one do you think suits him? <3
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He's an average medicine cat - which is partially why I chose -feather - but he has a very good memory and a strong scent of smell. Personality wise, he's blunt and has a dry sense of humour, but is agreeable and honest. <33