Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[oraoblivionis]

Name: Feathertail
Description: A white tom with a tail that looks like feathers; He has sky blue eyes
Skill/Personality Notes: He is a medicine cat with an apprentice called lovenose

Hello, Paperd!
For your prefix, I suggest you take a look at the White section of the prefix list linked in the first post. Feather- doesn't really describe what your cat looks like, as feathers can be such a wide variety of colours, and his tail wouldn't have looked feathery as a kit.
I'm not sure about his suffix, because you haven't told me anything about his skills or personality.

It should be ' Cloudfeather ' in my belief

[detective who.]

Hello, Paperd!
For your prefix, I suggest you take a look at the White section of the prefix list linked in the first post. Feather- doesn't really describe what your cat looks like, as feathers can be such a wide variety of colours, and his tail wouldn't have looked feathery as a kit.
I'm not sure about his suffix, because you haven't told me anything about his skills or personality.

It should be ' Cloudfeather ' in my belief

No, cloud- works fine for the appearance, but -feather doesn't mean anything in this system. Please do not assist with critiques unless you are staff; we have it under control.

[Moonblaze-Angel]

(Randomness~ I've got about a bajillion of these, so...should I just keep posting in increments of five? :3)

Name: Moonblaze
Description: A medium-sized she-cat. Slightly fluffy, with feather-y tail and ear-tips. Silver with Gold points, and sea-green eyes. (See siggy)
Skill/Personality Notes: She is the Deputy of WindClan, making her extremely loyal, bold, and cunning. She is very quick, with both her mind and paws. Her personality is usually referred to as that of an aunt; she is loving and cares for her fellow clan, but is great fun, and isn't afraid to tell you you're mouse-brained. She's gone against the Clan Leader several times, believing he is wrong, but only when she has proof to back it up.

Name: Amberfrost
Description: Very large, shaggy tom. Extremely long, thick orange fur, with faint stripes and spots on him. His face, chin, and neck are creamy white, along with his toe tips. He has tufted ears and paws, and has a long tail. His right ear is nicked.
Skill/Personality Notes: He is the Medicine Cat of ThunderClan, but is mates with WindClan's Deputy. (Yeah, yeah...totally copied it, whatever.) He has always been rather mellow, and since his time as a kit, extremely timid. He is great at stalking (surprisingly), and has a very sensitive nose. He can be very stubborn, and has a dry sense of humor. He prefers to not speak much, but is very wise for his age. Special connection to Cinderpelt.

Name: Blizzardfeather
Description: Small, lithe she-cat. Albino, but has fine hearing/eyesight. She has feathery fur, and is very beautiful. Her eyes are a peculiar almond shape, and are dark blue towards the center, but fade to silver. Thin horizontal scar across nose.
Skill/Personality Notes: She is a warrior of ShadowClan/RiverClan (grew up in Shadow, went to River). She is very kind, caring, and always giving up her free time to help others. She doesn't care about rivalries, and has even helped a fox kit before. She adores warmth and shrews, but doesn't have much romance interest.

Name: Sapphirespark
Description: Regular sized, sleek blue she-cat. Medium blue-grey, with silver around her paws, nose, tail, and chest. Thin, but muscular, with 3/4 of a tail. Half of her right ear is missing.
Skill/Personality Notes: She is very energetic, fun, and clever. She can sense your next move, and is extremely lethal in the battle field. When she was younger, RiverClan camp caught on fire, and she was one of the last to know. She ended up being caught in one of the dens, making her severely burned. They had to chew off part of her tail, and her ear has never grown back. She doesn't mind being slightly disabled, and instead gets up everyone's hopes. She's a great friend, and an incurable prankster.

(I've also got Amberfrost x Moonblaze's kits, seen below.)

[detective who.]

(Randomness~ I've got about a bajillion of these, so...should I just keep posting in increments of five? :3)

Name: Moonblaze
Description: A medium-sized she-cat. Slightly fluffy, with feather-y tail and ear-tips. Silver with Gold points, and sea-green eyes. (See siggy)
Skill/Personality Notes: She is the Deputy of WindClan, making her extremely loyal, bold, and cunning. She is very quick, with both her mind and paws. Her personality is usually referred to as that of an aunt; she is loving and cares for her fellow clan, but is great fun, and isn't afraid to tell you you're mouse-brained. She's gone against the Clan Leader several times, believing he is wrong, but only when she has proof to back it up.

Name: Amberfrost
Description: Very large, shaggy tom. Extremely long, thick orange fur, with faint stripes and spots on him. His face, chin, and neck are creamy white, along with his toe tips. He has tufted ears and paws, and has a long tail. His right ear is nicked.
Skill/Personality Notes: He is the Medicine Cat of ThunderClan, but is mates with WindClan's Deputy. (Yeah, yeah...totally copied it, whatever.) He has always been rather mellow, and since his time as a kit, extremely timid. He is great at stalking (surprisingly), and has a very sensitive nose. He can be very stubborn, and has a dry sense of humor. He prefers to not speak much, but is very wise for his age. Special connection to Cinderpelt.

Name: Blizzardfeather
Description: Small, lithe she-cat. Albino, but has fine hearing/eyesight. She has feathery fur, and is very beautiful. Her eyes are a peculiar almond shape, and are dark blue towards the center, but fade to silver. Thin horizontal scar across nose.
Skill/Personality Notes: She is a warrior of ShadowClan/RiverClan (grew up in Shadow, went to River). She is very kind, caring, and always giving up her free time to help others. She doesn't care about rivalries, and has even helped a fox kit before. She adores warmth and shrews, but doesn't have much romance interest.

Name: Sapphirespark
Description: Regular sized, sleek blue she-cat. Medium blue-grey, with silver around her paws, nose, tail, and chest. Thin, but muscular, with 3/4 of a tail. Half of her right ear is missing.
Skill/Personality Notes: She is very energetic, fun, and clever. She can sense your next move, and is extremely lethal in the battle field. When she was younger, RiverClan camp caught on fire, and she was one of the last to know. She ended up being caught in one of the dens, making her severely burned. They had to chew off part of her tail, and her ear has never grown back. She doesn't mind being slightly disabled, and instead gets up everyone's hopes. She's a great friend, and an incurable prankster.

(I've also got Amberfrost x Moonblaze's kits, seen below.)

Hi, Moonblaze! Sorry about the late reply, things have been a bit hectic lately and I forgot this was waiting here.

Moon- isn't recommended, as the moon seems to be sacred to the Clans. -blaze doesn't mean anything in this system, but if you were to give me more of her skills, I might be able to help you find a fitting suffix for her. I'm also 99.9% sure it's impossible to get a cat with this colouring. However, if you'd like fitting prefixes for this appearance, I suggest you look over the Grey section of the prefix list linked on the front page.

Amberfrost's prefix isn't recommended, either; amber is a fossilised tree sap, and cats aren't about to be stumbling across it. -frost doesn't mean anything in this system, but if by 'sensitve nose' you mean good at tracking, -nose might work for him. I'm also not sure 'timid' really fits much in the rest of his description, especially if he's breaking the code for a cat from another Clan.

Blizzardfeather's prefix is fine for her white coat, but -feather doesn't work in this system. If you want a suffix for an average cat, go for -fur or -pelt, or -face for her beauty. Also, if you're going to give a character albinism, perhaps you should do some research on the condition first. You really don't want to go throwing things like that around.

Sapphirespark's prefix doesn't work; rocks just look like rocks to the Clans, I'm sure, and if they found a sapphire it wouldn't look like the pretty blue stone you and I think of, it would look like a rock. -spark also doesn't really mean anything, and -claw sounds like it would fit better for her fighting skills (not sure 'lethal' is the right word, though, as warriors aren't supposed to kill in battle). I'm a bit worried about her backstory ask well; burns are very easily infected and difficult to treat without proper medicine, and how did she not notice the camp was on fire? Was her nose in a pile of herbs?

Sorry if I sound unusally snarky, I'm trying to be quick, as I've got to get off soon. Sorry for the wait again, also. If you've got any follow-up questions, feel free to post again or PM me.
Also, if you've got loads like these, you might want to PM me about those, so we can go over them in greater detail than I did here. Not more than three to five at a time, though. Thank you, and have a good day.

[Keriae]

The only realistic appearance I can think of for Moonblaze is a dilute tortoiseshell. Other than that, there's no way she could have those colours.

[Simonpet]

Name: Swiftkit | Swiftpaw | Swift-
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Description: Swiftpaw is a small, black-and-white apprentice with green eyes. His fur is short though would feel soft to the human touch. He has no notable scars as of yet.
Personality: Swiftpaw is very excitable and curious, as apprentices usually are at his age (six moons). He likes his mentor, and wishes for no other. He can also be called mildly annoying, and his mother joked around that he would never get out of the nursery because of his kit-like behavior. However, Swiftpaw is eager-to-please, and is determined to be the best of the warriors, better than the deputy and leader, even if he never becomes leader.
Skills: Swiftpaw has no notable skills as of yet. However, he is already fairly quick, although he won't be beating Stonefoot anytime soon. He will also become a decent hunter, not the best though not the worst. Fighting will be one of his best skills because of his swiftness.
Other: I'm mostly looking for a character rating overall, as well as description rating. Once Swiftpaw is almost a warrior, I will send him in with more information regarding skills and personality. I was thinking that his warrior name might be Swiftfoot, which would have a double-meaning (cat colored like swift that is quick and a cat that is fleet of foot).

[chrislion121]

Hello again!


Pineheart (fang maybe) tom
Personality: He is brave and loyal. He is very smart and curious. He does what he is asked and never has to be told twice. He does what needs to be done but always finds time to have fun. He is strongly opinionated though he often chooses not to speak out.
Skills: He is a strong fighter and a dexterous hunter. He does not like to swim or fish but can stand it if he must. He is comfortable in the trees but would rather be running on open land.


Lilypaw (foot and tail have been considered) she-cat
Personality: She is very introverted and shy. She is ambitious and determined however she likes to remain elusive. Her competitiveness makes her stronger and her patience makes her wise. She likes to listen to the stories of others even if it is about a cat taking on four badgers at once. She is kind and caring but must learn where her help is needed most.
Skills: She is the average fighter but her hunting skills are beyond superb. Her social skills do not come close to matching her stealth. She is comfortable in the water though she loves to jump from tree to tree. She does not have that much endurance though she wouldn't mind going for a short run.

[detective who.]

Name: Swiftkit | Swiftpaw | Swift-
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Description: Swiftpaw is a small, black-and-white apprentice with green eyes. His fur is short though would feel soft to the human touch. He has no notable scars as of yet.
Personality: Swiftpaw is very excitable and curious, as apprentices usually are at his age (six moons). He likes his mentor, and wishes for no other. He can also be called mildly annoying, and his mother joked around that he would never get out of the nursery because of his kit-like behavior. However, Swiftpaw is eager-to-please, and is determined to be the best of the warriors, better than the deputy and leader, even if he never becomes leader.
Skills: Swiftpaw has no notable skills as of yet. However, he is already fairly quick, although he won't be beating Stonefoot anytime soon. He will also become a decent hunter, not the best though not the worst. Fighting will be one of his best skills because of his swiftness.
Other: I'm mostly looking for a character rating overall, as well as description rating. Once Swiftpaw is almost a warrior, I will send him in with more information regarding skills and personality. I was thinking that his warrior name might be Swiftfoot, which would have a double-meaning (cat colored like swift that is quick and a cat that is fleet of foot).

Hello again, Simon! Good to see you.
I think you've done very well here. His ambition and energy will serve him well. He sounds like a very sweet cat, with a lot of potential.
Swiftfoot or Swiftfang would probably be your best bet, name-wise. I would lean toward -foot, especially as his fighting prowess (and possibly his hunting skills as well?) is in part due to his speed.
I hope this helps a bit; do write in again. Have a lovely day!

Hello again!

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Pineheart (fang maybe) tom
Personality: He is brave and loyal. He is very smart and curious. He does what he is asked and never has to be told twice. He does what needs to be done but always finds time to have fun. He is strongly opinionated though he often chooses not to speak out.
Skills: He is a strong fighter and a dexterous hunter. He does not like to swim or fish but can stand it if he must. He is comfortable in the trees but would rather be running on open land.

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Lilypaw (foot and tail have been considered) she-cat
Personality: She is very introverted and shy. She is ambitious and determined however she likes to remain elusive. Her competitiveness makes her stronger and her patience makes her wise. She likes to listen to the stories of others even if it is about a cat taking on four badgers at once. She is kind and caring but must learn where her help is needed most.
Skills: She is the average fighter but her hunting skills are beyond superb. Her social skills do not come close to matching her stealth. She is comfortable in the water though she loves to jump from tree to tree. She does not have that much endurance though she wouldn't mind going for a short run.

Hello again, Chrislion!
I think -fang would fit Pineheart better; skill before personality, and all that. He also doesn't sound much like a -heart cat, as the key of that is always doing what they believe is right. He may be opinionated, but I don't think he has the determination for -heart. You'd be better off with -fang.

Lilypaw's prefix doesn't fit; the prefix lily- comes from the lily of the valley, which has a white flower, and is therefore meant for white cats. I suggest you check the White section of the prefix list linked in the first post and see if anything there catches your eye.
-whisker, definitely -whisker. If 'her hunting skills are beyond superb', that is what should be highlighted in her suffix, unless her swimming abilities or climbing skills are more helpful to the Clan and equally notable, in which case, go for -stream or -tail, respectively.

I hope that's helpful, Chris. Feel free to write in again, and have a great day.

I need to hurry and finish the second post, it's much faster than the links, I think.

[Simonpet]

Name: Swiftkit | Swiftpaw | Swift-
Gender: Tom
Rank: Kit | Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Description: Swiftpaw is a small, black-and-white apprentice with green eyes. His fur is short though would feel soft to the human touch. He has no notable scars as of yet.
Personality: Swiftpaw is very excitable and curious, as apprentices usually are at his age (six moons). He likes his mentor, and wishes for no other. He can also be called mildly annoying, and his mother joked around that he would never get out of the nursery because of his kit-like behavior. However, Swiftpaw is eager-to-please, and is determined to be the best of the warriors, better than the deputy and leader, even if he never becomes leader.
Skills: Swiftpaw has no notable skills as of yet. However, he is already fairly quick, although he won't be beating Stonefoot anytime soon. He will also become a decent hunter, not the best though not the worst. Fighting will be one of his best skills because of his swiftness.
Other: I'm mostly looking for a character rating overall, as well as description rating. Once Swiftpaw is almost a warrior, I will send him in with more information regarding skills and personality. I was thinking that his warrior name might be Swiftfoot, which would have a double-meaning (cat colored like swift that is quick and a cat that is fleet of foot).

Hello again, Simon! Good to see you.
I think you've done very well here. His ambition and energy will serve him well. He sounds like a very sweet cat, with a lot of potential.
Swiftfoot or Swiftfang would probably be your best bet, name-wise. I would lean toward -foot, especially as his fighting prowess (and possibly his hunting skills as well?) is in part due to his speed.
I hope this helps a bit; do write in again. Have a lovely day!

Thank you for helping me with Swiftpaw! And have a good day too.

[thedarkelectric]

Greyfoot A green eyed green tom with a white tip on his tail, he is also blind in his right eye. Greyfoot is a calm cat but can lose it when angered enough.

Shellflower A long haired red silver molly with amber eyes. A gentile molly who is amazing with kits. She is kind but lacks in smarts but she is always there for her mate Greyfoot.

Blackleaf A black tom with yellow eyes. A cold rude tom who only wants to work and only talks to his patiences and Emberpool.

Blueclaw A blue tabby molly with green eyes. A bold strong cat who would gladly die for her clan, well that's what she says but she'd rather get out a fight alive. She's a huge hypocrite but is loyal to no end.

Brindlepelt A brown tabby tom with a white chest and hazel eyes. An immature cat who is a bit of a wimp. He cant take a hint and needs to be sat down and told what to do and acts like a kit all the time.

Otterwisker A chocolate brown tom with yellow eyes. A kind gentile tom who loves his mate Swanfur very dearly. He can get very boring rather quickly and talks about his mate and kits all the time to a point where you want to throttle him

These characters are the main characters for a story I'm writing so the characters I just mention don't have to be reviewed thanks