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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:17 am

We started running around, eating the candy worms, until...

Ripide! What are you doing? -Eleanor

I spun around to look at Eleanor, and I saw that Riptide was sneakily guiding the worms to the crops!

I am King Salt's son! Listen to me! -Riptide
King Salt? who's that? -Jekyl
Only the most wanted criminal in all of Sugartopia! -Darka
Criminal? He is the king! How could he be a criminal!? -Riptide

Darka leafed through her book, then held it up.

Look! This is the book of criminals! Why would his picture be in here? -Darka

We all peered at the book, for references, his picture is here:
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Cool! I'll eat his scythe! -Eleanor
He's the good guy! You're all liars! DX -Riptide
*Head shake* You're so naive...-Darka

With that, Riptide snorted and walked away, leaving us behind in a field being devoured by gummy worms.
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:27 am

Smiles that was awesome
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:23 am

Waits for the next entry
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:34 pm

Cool, i liked it! *Waits for the next entry* :D
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Mon Jul 27, 2015 4:30 am

Hah! Cliffhanger last time! Back to it!

We all stared in shock at Riptide as he left.
Ripy! Come back! Bad boy! -Eleanor
He's not coming back, and we don't want him, the traitor *growl* -Darka

Eleanor sagged to the ground and mournfully howled, while Darka stared daggers at where Riptide had once been, it was the first time where I'd seen Eleanor serious and Darka angry, but then again I'd known them for about five minutes.
Riptide too.

Darka soon relaxed, but she had to talk loudly over Eleanor's howling.
Well we'd- stop that! Better get- he's gone! Back to it!
*sniff* Okay, I'll get back to normal now- Riptide you idiot!

Yup, she was back to normal.

So, Jekyl, you haven't talked at all in this entry? What's up? -Eleanor
Shush! You're breaking the fourth wall! -Darka
Oh, right, lets pretend this conversation never happened! :D -Eleanor
Okay, sorry guys- I mean gals, I thought me and Riptide would be friends -Jekyl

Eleanor nodded through a mouthful of gummy worms. Yeah, us too. T_T -Eleanor
Darka simply nodded.
And we started all over again.
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Mon Jul 27, 2015 4:35 am

Good work!
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Mon Jul 27, 2015 1:57 pm

Thanks ^_^ Anyways, Blackwolf, I was planning for Eleanor to be really silly in the next entry, she actually steals Jekyl's diary and writes in it, and I was wondering if it was too... crazy even for her?
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Mon Jul 27, 2015 9:03 pm

its not too crazy. I mean Eleanor is based of me and I would steal Dr Jekyll's diary so it's ok that she writes in his diary
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Jul 28, 2015 2:41 am

If three is too many, feel free to use only one or two!

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Name: Skyler Swiftrunner
Candy pet?: No, please.
Appearance: Above (Use the code for the image to show as an image)
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[img]http://www.chickensmoothie.com/pet/137921626&trans=1.jpg[/img]

Personality: She may seem quiet at first - speak one word to her, however, and she'll start talking. Really quickly. She throws insults easily - she can seem to be rude and sarcastic. However, she can be friendly to those who are friendly back to her. She loves to have fun and play pranks.
Friend or Foe?: Friend, please.
Favorite Candy: Gummy Worms.
Color: 00BFFF
I want to join Jekyl!

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Name: Sharon Rose
Candy pet?: Yes. (I'm not very sure what this means, though. Can anyone explain?)
Appearance: Above.
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[img]http://www.chickensmoothie.com/pet/36655428&trans=1.jpg[/img]

Personality: She may seem sweet and innocent, always saying sorry all the time and acting like a scaredy cat, but she can easily betray another for she easily gains other people's trust. It's hard to think of her doing something evil - but she does that quite a lot of the time. She has a sister called Luna Nightshade, who tries to pretend she isn't related to Sharon because she has no will to be part of her evil deeds. Though she may be forced to help.
Friend or Foe?: Foe. Perhaps she gains their trust first, but then reveals her true self afterward?
Favorite Candy: Marshmellows
Color: BF80FF
I want to join Jekyl!

If you want to add Luna in as Sharon's helper or perhaps to reveal the truth and join in or something, here's her form.

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Name: Luna Nightshade
Candy pet?: No (But she may be forced to help Sharon in her evil deeds if others are threatened)
Appearance: Above.
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Personality: She likes to act mysterious, but she's actually quite friendly to the ones who dare to speak - and be friendly to - her. She loves to be in action rather than read plans and books - however, if innocent pets are threatened, she'll probably budge. (And maybe a lot of Mentos.) She doesn't care if others threaten her - she can easily fly away.
Friend or Foe?: Friend (but may seem to be a foe)
Favorite Candy: Mentos
Color: 000080
I want to join Jekyl!
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Tue Jul 28, 2015 4:13 am

{Candy pets are pets that have been changed to be candy themed, and three is fine :3 Thanks for joining!}
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