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Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~Razzle~ » Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:47 pm

I finally got inspired to make a CS pet diery. <3

So, here it is, by my sweet little pet Nacho. (She's a girl, by the way.)

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so I haven't been on this site in like, forever, so I'm briefly back on to get rid of lots of my pets in exchange for art of my dog. Also if you do art and want pets send me a pm I'd love to work something out
You can contact me on my tumblr - @puppiesfortheblind - if I don't respond in a reasonable timeframe
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~Razzle~ » Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:56 pm

Hi there, book thing. I can't remember why I'm writing in you. Oh yeah... Mom says that even though it's school vacation, I still need to write in you for my language art teacher. Dumb notebook.
Anyway, I guess I should tell you about myself? Ok then, Cheasefoot. Yes, I just called you Cheasefoot. Mom was evil enough to get you - with little pictures of cheese on the bottom. You are now named Cheasefoot. Oops, getting distracted. So... I'm Nacho - Stop laughing at me, you stupid book. I didn't pick my name. Sheesh. Mom is called Emma. Dad has a really embarrassing name. It's Santa. My name and his name get me dumped in the trash can every day by Gatito. He's the school bully. Yes Cheasefoot, I said he. It's kind of funny. He looks like a girl, and his name is 'Kitty' in Spanish. Lol.
OH NO! I USED TEXT TALK?!?!?!?!?! SAVE ME!!!!!!!!
Oops, did I really just say that out loud? Sorry dad.

Did I tell you I'm a grammar freak? I am.

Bye Cheasefoot, mom wants me for something. I'll write in you later.
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so I haven't been on this site in like, forever, so I'm briefly back on to get rid of lots of my pets in exchange for art of my dog. Also if you do art and want pets send me a pm I'd love to work something out
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby Daisy May » Sun Dec 26, 2010 1:27 pm

Ohh yay! Write more? Please? For....umm....you know what? Whatever, just please write more. :D
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby Al the Dalek » Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:17 pm

Very good, nice start. Their names amuse me, yes.
Why yes, I am female. Click on the cake to go to my fictional pet diary!
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~Razzle~ » Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:22 am

Hi Cheasefoot.

I. Hate. Mom.
I'm grounded. Just because I broke the brand new china set mom got for X-mas. Now I can't have any electronics. SAVEEEE MEEE CHEASEFOOT!!!!
Oh no... Why do I always say it our loud? Well, now I lost electronics for a month. Bleagh.

Mail's here, hold on. I need to bark at the mail carrier. What? I'm a dog, I do that stuff. Oh, wait... Must stop barking... He has something for ME! 8D
I never get mail!

Oooh, it's an invitation to Sea Stone's B-day party! Who's that? Well, because you have chease on your foot, I'll tell you.

My. Best. Bud. EVER!

I hope Kill is there. Her name? Misleading. She's the only nice teen at our school. I luffles her. <3

Kill isn't the only one at our school with a misleading name. There's Fairy, the second meanest dog at our school, behind Gatito.


Bye Cheesefoot, I'm hungry.
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~tidepool » Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:02 am

mmmmmhhhhhhhhuhhhhhh....i like it....im thinkin gbout writing a diary myself but.....im to lazy XP
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~Razzle~ » Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:25 pm

Thanks! I was quite surprised on how Nacho turned out. I thought she would be quiet, calm, loveable, and smart. But nope. XD
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~tidepool » Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:04 pm

hey! i decided to make mine now (still short on afew cherries) but whatevers
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=388933
read it if you wanna!
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Re: Dear Cheasefoot (By Nacho)

Postby ~Razzle~ » Fri Dec 31, 2010 11:49 am

Hiya Cheesefoot! <3

Whoa, did I just put a heart in you? I sure hope I still have that eraser... Ugh! Stupid cheap erasers! Now you have smudge. D:<

Anyway, Mom said I could go to the party! Woot! So, here we are in the car, driving over to the park. I hopped out of the car, and almost died.


...
...
...

It was Gatito.

The wolf who always puts me in the trashcan.

Right before lunch.

Wait... Oh! Behind him was a wolf I never knew before. Looked like a girl... Wow, she looked scared! Gatito snarled at the poor pup. "Patch! Go away!"
She whimpered trough her passifier, and ran to the playground.

I turned on him. "What did you do that for?" I yelled, anger boiling up in me. "She's only a puppy!"

Gatito snorted. "Yeah, and she was in my way. Stupid cuz."

Woah. He had a living cousin?

Bye Diary. I'm to confused to call you Cheesefoot.
so I haven't been on this site in like, forever, so I'm briefly back on to get rid of lots of my pets in exchange for art of my dog. Also if you do art and want pets send me a pm I'd love to work something out
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