Warrior Cat OC Review Thread

[FireSwarm]

Name: NightShade
Age: 19 moons
Rank: (new) Warrior
Personality: Nightshade has a sharp tongue and a quick wit- which often got her into trouble. she has kept her mischievousness from when she was an apprentice and loves to keep her own apprentice on their toes. she doesn't take kindly to strangers and dislikes the other clans. Nightshade loves kits and likes to play around with them, she often thinks what hers may be like when she gets her own. she feels pity for her sister, foxflame who is a medicine cat and sworn to never have a mate.
Gender: She-Cat
Skills: NightShade is very fast and agile. when it comes to paw to paw combat she isnt the best but is skilled in ambushing and attacking stealthily. when in battle she tries to hide in the shadows, out of paws reach then only comes close enough to touch her opponent for a moment before ducking back. she is a skilled hunter and thrives on land, though her thick fur weighs her down in the water. she is a good tracker due to her great sense of hearing and smell.
Any powers? Tell me them.: nope ;b
Appearance: NightShade has long, sleek black fur. underneath her fur she is lean and wiry. she had amber eyes, a black nose and scarred ears.
Backstory: she was born a rogue in a forest, next to a twoleg place. her father (Jasper) was a loner and left to become a kitty pet as soon as her mother(Luna) gave birth to her and her sister. Her mother always struggled to raise Night and Fox her mother was mauled by a dog and killed when she and her sister were 5 moons old. they hunted for themselves (unsuccessfully) until they were taken in by waterclan and brought up by the warrior code. she became a warrior and her sister, a medicine cat.
Accessories: none
Other: her father, jasper was a bright ginger tom with amber eyes and her mother, luna was a black she-cat with green eyes

[bronzebones]

Name: Rabbitstar (Rabbitstripe)
Age: about 60 moons
Rank: Leader
Personality: Rabbitstar is a total extrovert, who loves socializing with her clanmates. She is very clumsy and extremely slow, however. Her fighting skills are fine in some ways, as she can hit super hard and take a hit very well, but she isn't exactly graceful or quick. She always looks for the best in a cat, and she isn't experienced in being a leader. She needs advice from her betters all the time, but she boasts about her abilities none the less. As a young cat, she got everything her way and thus she hasn't learned what to do in tough situations.
Gender: Molly
Skills: Large and powerful, and despite her less than good skills at hunting regular prey, she is the best badger hunter in the clan (It's a Hillclan thing, where they roll boulders up a hill, lure a badger out of a set, and smush them with said boulder. It is very risky and dangerous, but the payoff is great).
Any powers? Tell me them.: Just the regular 9 lives because she is a leader. Nothing special. She's already wasted a few on her many badger hunts.
Appearance: (include eye colors, number of scars, etc): Large and muscly, With normal grey short fur and white on her paws, stomach, tail tip and most of her face. Common green-yellow eyes and a pink nose. No extremely noticeable scars.
Backstory: (includes: born a rogue, parents died, siblings died, prophecy, etc): She was more or less born into the position, with her mother being leader and the father deputy. She was very spoiled by her parents. She always admired them, and wanted to be just like them, so she begged her mother, Petalstar, to give her stripe as a suffix like her father, Oakstripe. Her father mentored her, even though it was against the rules, but Petalstar made the argument that her word as leader was law. When her father retired to the elders den, her mother made her deputy, and a lot of the senior warriors started giving her a hard time. After a good while, her mother died of greencough, and she became Rabbitstar. At least 3/4ths of Starclan disapprove of her being leader, but there was enough that she could receive her 9 lives. I'm later making a subplot in which the clan finds out about her not really deserving to be leader, and she leaves for a while until they find out the new leader is kind of evil. They accept her and she is determined to be a better leader to the clan.
Accessories: (includes: necklace, special item, etc): Nope~
Other:

Name: Nice!~ I imagine a Rabbit- cat to be a tom, but whatever xD



Age: Normal for a leader.



Personality: Good and very detailed!~



Gender: Based of looks, it works.But she-cats aren't usually muscly.




Skills: Cool!~



Powers: Good.



Appearance: Good.



Backstory: Whoah, I've never seen this kind before! Great~



Accessories: Yay none!~



Other: merp




I'd rate this one 9/10

[detective who.]

Name: Mallownose Mallowstar
Age: 44 moons.
Rank: Leader.
Personality: Mallowstar is a very curious cat. He's gotten wiser since he was an apprentice, and doesn't get in trouble due to his nose nearly as often. He's honed his skill of getting out of trouble, and combined with his peaceful nature, this helps keep the peace with MoorClan. Because he is a relatively new leader, he sometimes worries that his Clan thinks he isn't as good a leader as Diverstar was, so he tries to be involved in the lives of his Clanmates, and encourages them to come to him when they are struggling with anything. He also still enjoys hunting and patrolling with his Clan, and frequently adds himself to patrols at the last minute.
Gender: Tom.
Skills: Mallowstar has always been excellent at tracking. This has made him a great hunter, but also got him into trouble with patrols severl times as an apprentice. He is also not very skilled at fighting, and in battle relies mostly on getting under his opponent.
Any powers? Tell me them.: None.
Appearance: Pure white with amber eyes.
Backstory: Mallowstar, then Mallownose, was made deputy when the former deputy was killed in a battle over borders. Mallownose was chosen by the old leader, Diverstar, because of his ability to wiggle out of bad situations and his peaceful nature. Diverstar lost his remaining two lives unexpectedly; the first by a serious wound in battle, and the second through infection. It has only been six moons since Mallowstar became leader.
Accessories: None.
Other: Most of this is copy-pasted from a form for my role play.


Name: Shrikepaw Shriketail
Age: 9 moons.
Rank: Apprentice.
Personality: Shrikepaw is a bit of an odd cat. He has a stentorian voice, and he likes doing impressions of other cats, especially Mallowstar and his deputy. He tries to be kind with it, in part because he knows he'll be overheard and doesn't want to get in trouble. He's something of a comic, but never at another cat's expense. He has a fascination with twolegs, even after his capture, and he is well aware that his Clanmates find this strange. He's entirely unafraid of the upright creatures, and often follows them down the path in the territory, waiting to see if they drop anything. He enjoys collecting things, be it bones or twoleg items, but he keeps his cache a secret.
Gender: Tom.
Skills: He shows strong skill at climbing and is decent at hunting, but he's miserable at fighting, in large part due to his small size.
Any powers? Tell me them.: None.
Appearance: Small grey-and-white tom with green eyes.
Backstory: Shrikepaw was captured by twolegs only a moon into his training. He returned only a half moon later, which put his training back a bit. Otherwise, his past is quite average.
Accessories: None.
Other: A lot of this is copy-pasted from the same role play as Mallowstar.

[Simonpet]

Name: Pikepelt
Age: Depends on the role-play. Usually older than 20 moons but younger than 45 moons.
Rank: Warrior | Medicine Cat
Personality: Pikepelt is fairly calm, though has a short temper. She doesn't like being interrupted, and views herself as the "sanest" of her siblings.
Gender: She-cat
Skills: Nothing special. She is an average-skilled cat. As a warrior, she is well rounded in climbing, hunting and fighting. As a medicine cat, she is good but no prodigy.
Any powers? Tell me them: None
Appearance: Pikepelt is a yellow-brown tabby with greyish stripes. She has no notable scars--just the nicks and scratches from clan life. Her eyes are a dull amber.
Backstory: Depends on the role-play
1. She was born a kittypet with her siblings, and was the first medicine cat of her clan (Cherryclan), named after her sister Cherrystar
2. She was born a kittypet with her siblings and joined a clan, becoming either warrior or medicine cat
3. She was clan born with unknown parentage with her siblings, and lived a normal clan life
Accessories: None
Other: What do you think? Solid or shaky?

[Simonpet]

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[Simonpet]

Name: Tip-paw | Tipwhisker
Gender: Tom
Age: Depends on RP; between apprentice age and elder age
Rank: Apprentice | Warrior | Elder
Personality: Tipwhisker is quiet and patient, and tries not to trust others immediately. He likes many aspects of Clan life better than his loner life, such as being able to trust others and living with a very large, extended family through blood and friendship, something he never could experiance as a loner. However, he never really believed in some aspects such as StarClan. Afterall, to him, he never saw evidence of ghostly cats watching over the Clans. He would much rather live his life with the Clan relying on the other cats rather than dead beings that may not help. But he can't help wonder if StarClan is real, and longs to belong to it after he dies, and see his friends and possibly his family again.
Skills: Tipwhisker is very quiet and patient, leading to his prowess in hunting and tracking. He can stay still for long periods of time, something which helps when tracking a bird or spying on others. He does have a fear of strangers, and will stay still until the other makes a threatening move towards him, at which point he will run back to his Clan's camp. Tipwhisker isn't very fast or strong, but he is very bright, and can work out battle scenarios in his head, and makes plans to avoid the worst of his scenarios.
Any powers? None
Appearance: Tipwhisker is a dilute ginger tabby with a white streak on his face, white paws, and white splotches on his body. He has dark green eyes that can appear to be gray or black depending on the lighting. His ears are nicked, and his body hosts small nicks and scratches. He has a fairly noticable scar on the inside of his left hind leg, given to him by a badger. Just above his right eye is a pale scratch made when he was first found on Clan territory. (xXx)
Backstory: Tipwhisker was a loner for part of his life, when he was found in Clan territory at the average age of an apprentice. He was taken in, being so young and appearing not to be a threat. There was some confusion as to his mentor, and the Clan didn't trust him right away. As a slowly proved himself, pushing himself to the limit, he gained the trust of other apprentices and warriors, though older members of the Clan never fully trusted him. Tipwhisker became one of the best hunters and trackers in the Clan, as his loner background allowed him to be extremely stealthy as well as still for long periods of time. He likely will never become deputy or leader, but instead retire as an elder, or die as a warrior.
Accessories: None
Other: N/A

[BlackLeopardZ]

Name: Darkstar (Warrior name: Darkstream)
Gender: she-cat.
Age: well she is 9 years when she dies. But at the moment I like to keep her at 2 years.
Rank: leader.
Personality: She is pretty cool, and really strong and brave. She is also wise, but aggressive.
Skills: Idk.
Any Powers?: Well, when Leopardstar gave her her last life, the gift of the river she kinda has a power. When she is 9 years old there is a fire in RiverClan she uses her last life (yup the life of the river), to make the river flood and save her Clan. Then she dies .
Appearance: Black she-cat with deep, dark blue eyes. Looks exactly like her mother.
Backstory: Well her two brothers die and her father dies then her mother dies then her mate dies then her daughter dies. FUN.
Accessories: none.
Other: idk.
(I added more)
Mother: Blacktail - Pretty black she-cat with dark blue eyes.
Father: Nightcloud - Black tom with green eyes and white fur around nose and tail.
Siblings: Moonkit - Looks exactly like his father but has the build of his mother. Nightpaw - Looks like his father but without the fur white fur on his tail.
Mate: Ashstorm - Black tom with amber eyes.
Kits: Moonfeather - Black she-cat whose left eye is blue and right eye is purple.
Clan: RiverClan.
Other names: Darkkit, Darkpaw, Darkstream.
Apprentice: I forgot .-.