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Should Angelic Break up with Toaro?

YES! That jerk, making out with Star Burst!
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Probably, I haven't read the whole thing yet.
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No, not yet! I like Toaro! He's good for Angelic! :D
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Total votes : 38

Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic

Postby Lil'Tiger » Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:50 am

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Comments (Good or Bad, but Good is better XD): This is an awesome and simple(in a good way!)
Fave character: Angelic
Other Stuff: This diary is an epic win <3
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic

Postby Nuky 101 » Sun Dec 26, 2010 4:09 am

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Lol level (1-10): 10.
Excitement level (also 1-10): 10 - I love the plot twists you come up with. ^^
Comments (Good or Bad, but Good is better XD): I love Angelic's personality, and the way you write the story. If it was just a writing about Angelic, I would've probably never understood her, but since she's writing about herself, if gives me a whole other view of things. Keep up the good work! ^^
Fave character: The pups or Angelic.
Other Stuff: One of the best writings I've ever read! ^^
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:57 am

Yay! People like my diary!!!! *jumps and runs in circles with joy*

Dear Journal,
It's Christmas!!! Yayz!! I woke up at like 5:00 in the morning, with Pumpkin jumping on me saying, 'Come on, Angie! Santa broke in last night! And he gave me a Hot Wheels Car!' Then he rolled it over my face, and I yelled him to get the heck out of my room.
So he ran to Bri's instead, whining, 'You're gonna get coal!' Ginger was standing on the stair's railing when I went into the hallway. (We have one of those BIG staircases with a high roof and a HUGE chandelier in the middle of the room.) And I mean, at the VERY top of it. It's a long drop. I asked her what the HECK she was doing, and she said, 'I'm playing Santa! The chandi-something is the Dasher and Dancer. They make me fly.' Then she jumped on the chandelier. Well, Sourpop came out her room at that moment, and she screamed. She ran over and put out her arms so that Ginger could jump to her. But that pup just started to cry, and she whined, 'No! You're gonna tip my sleigh over!' Interesting way to start Christmas morning.

When Daru finally got Ginger off by telling her that the presents might disappear if she took so long, we all went downstairs. Thank goodness. I wanted to see what I got. There was quite alot there. I went through everything in about 5 minutes flat. And I'm talking a good 10 presents or so. Here is my final outcome:
From Sourpop and Daru - A new ipod charger
Bri - A new basketball
Pumpkin and Ginger - Folded red paper *Note to self: throw out immediately after Sour is out of the room*
Aunt Rosa` - A pair of dark flare jeans, new Ugg boots, and a leopard print shirt
Uncle Jacob - A light blue scarf and bow set
Alli - New lavender basketball shirt
Taylor - *dramatic pause* A TARANTULA!!!
That was the best gift of all. I've always wanted one, 'cause they're the coolest pets around. It was a girl Mexican Red-kneed, and I named her Fang. Creative name right?

Tonight we're going over Toaro's house for Christmas Dinner. Toaro texted me all of the other wolves coming, and it sounds like a FULL HOUSE. Well, there's Toaro's Aunt, Lotty, Toaro's Cousins, Amber and Tonic, Toaro's Uncle, Tsume`, and some other close family. Apparently, Taylor's new girlfriend, Desirae, and her family, are coming too. I can't wait!

~Bye, Journal,
from Angelic
Last edited by Liru Kaulitz on Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:22 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby •Bliss• » Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:31 am

Awesome! You have another stalker ^^
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:33 pm

Yay!^^ Thank you!
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Sun Dec 26, 2010 1:41 pm

Dear Journal,
Okay let me just say this now: BEST DINNER EVEH!!!When we got to Toaro's house, the whole place was decked with white lights and garland and that kind of thing. Sourpop and Daru met Red Moon, and the maid took Pumpkin and Ginger down to the kiddy room in the basement. Toaro, Taylor and Alli came down for me and Bri with their cousins, Amber and Tonic. There was also another wolf who looked about my age, who I found was named Cloud. He has a little sister named Maybelle who was down in the basement with the pups. I think Toaro said they were his step-cousins. Well, I got along pretty good with Amber, Tonic, and Cloud, even though I'd never met them before. Probably because they were related to Toaro, I felt comfortable with them. But with Bri it was totally awkward. She's never even MET Toaro, even though he's my boyfriend and she's my sister. So it was even worse with the cousins, who she REALLY felt like were strangers. Once everyone was settled, Taylor led us outside to play 'man hunt'. Yes, we are a little old for that, but who cares? I've never heard a law that says if you're 15 you can't play games. So, Taylor chose randomly, and I was on the team with Toaro, Tonic, and Cloud. The other team was Taylor, Amber, Alli and Bri. We made our bases and territory marks, then we started the first game. Me and Toaro worked out a strategy. He's super fast, so he's guarding the base. I'm the one who's supposed to get to the other team's base. Cloud is the lookout, and Tonic is the prison guardian.

I crept around the border of Taylor's team, and I saw Amber on lookout. Her eyes were really wide, and she was watching hard. I took a stone and threw it in the hedge behind her, hoping she's think someone was there and she's move. And Amber fell for it. I sneaked around her and went around back where I could see Taylor guarding the base. All I had to do was touch that pole. Just as I ran across to win us a victory, I heard a scream from my side and Bri ran out of our territory with a huge cloud of BATS following her. We all started to crack up, and I think Tonic was even rolling on the grass, he was laughing so hard. Amber chased the bats away, and we took Bri back inside. Now dinner is ready. I'm writing this in the kitchen right now, journal. So I have to go. Bye!
~ Angelic <3
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:15 am

Dear Journal,
Dinner was very yummy :D
When we got home, Ginger and Pumpkin were asleep, and Sourpop took the up to bed. Bri said she gained to much weight over there, so she went down into the basement to run on the treadmill. I went into the living roo and turned on the TV. Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix was on. That one is my favorite because it's the one where the Weasley Twins open 'Weasley's Wizard Wheezes'. Ah, a store stuffed full of tricks, pranks, and, my favorite, Skiving Snackboxes. A brilliant way to get out of going to school, don't you think? Those two are my idols for life. What better way is there to make a living? I can't really think of one. It's a lot better than siting at a desk, researching things or typing a paper for your boss. Star Burst agrees with me. I called her up (even though its like, midnight), and she turned it on, too. I asked her which product she would buy if she was at Weasley's Wizard Wheezes, and she said: 'Either the Portable Swamp (to use on her sister's room after she cleans it), or extendable ears (for eavesdropping). I said I wanted Skiving Snackboxes and Ton-Tongue Toffee. And everything else XD. It's a long movie, and after it was done, it was like 1:30 in the morning. I went upstairs and turned on the TV up there, and there was another one coming on, the Half Blood Prince. I watched like half of that when a blizzard warning came up on the screen. I finished the movie after that, and kept the door closed so Pumpkin couldn't run a hot wheels car over my face again.

Bye, Journal ;)
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby rrobin » Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:16 am

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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:23 pm

Dear Journal,
It snowed really hard last night. It's awesome! Ginger and Pumpkin were jumping over eveything, shouting and yelling, 'Who dumped powder on the backward?' Stupid pups. Can't a girl get any quiet? I called up Star Burst and asked her if she wanted to go to the mall, and she said okay, but she wanted to bring some friends. I was a little confused, but whatever.

When I got there (its within walking distance), I saw Star with a huge group of wolves. One of them had their arm around her. I must of looked kinda like, 'wha?', cause Star started to explain. She told me they were a new family that moved in next to her. The house next to hers is bigger than Toaro's. And if that WHOLE FAMILY lived in one house, I can see why they chose that place. They were named after the Weasley family, from Harry Potter. There was Bill, Charlie, Percy, Fred and George (yes, they are identical), Ron, and Ginny. And it turns out, Star and Ron are going out. They were just going to have some lunch with me, but Ron's mom insisted they take the whole family. We all went inside, and found a table (a BIG table). I ordered pizza and Star Burst payed. We ate and just kinda got to know eachother. Fred and George are SO COOL. They are EXACTLY like the characters. Both love pulling pranks. In that little lunch, we became really good friends. They seemed to think I was alot like them, and they offered me a few of their special prank supplies to use on my sister. Apparently, their not the only ones in the family that suit their characters. Percy is just like Bri, super smart, bossy, thinks he's at the top of the family, obsessed with getting it right. They use tons of their joke stuff on him.
I'll tell you more later, Journal.
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Re: Dear Journal, by Angelic {Updated Daily}

Postby VesVes » Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:31 pm

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Lol level (1-10): 10
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Comments (Good or Bad, but Good is better XD): Very funny and exciting! Love that last entry, with the "Weasley Wolves." XD
Fave character: Angelic
Other Stuff: Not much, besides the fact that this diary is epic.

(Two characters in my diary story are also named after Harry Potter characters, but their names don't fit them at all. Voldemort is sweet and kind, while Hermione gets really bad grades and doesn't care at all. XD)
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