Redfur awoke to hear Flametail panting. "Are you ok?" She asked, looking at him. (Sunpaw is Redfur's son BTW) She stared at him.
(You know when Sunpaw turns into mini Tigerstar he is gonna kill Tanya in one way or another then it would make Raventail be mad at him so Raventail would turn into a Fireheart type cat. Can I make a prophecy Penguin?)
Sunpaw saw the plummeting she-cat and ran over to help (TIGERSTAR BREAKING MOMENT), but tripped on what seemed to be like a rotten stick, but when he turned around, the adder's bite had already hit him.
(Raventail you gotta care about Tanya more then me so he can be EVIL)