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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Jul 07, 2015 4:10 pm

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I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: Rachel
Gender: Female
Personality: Kind and happy, but can be aggressive when she or her friends are being messed with by a popular.
Hobbies: Playing on her iPaw, hanging with friends.
Group: Outcasts
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? Yes please :)
Others: Most of the boys have a crush on her, but she HATES it. Thank you!


Actually, Splash, I'm accepting now. Thanks for helping, though. One more slot left!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby rocoboq » Tue Jul 07, 2015 6:52 pm

Read you were accepting one more so... Boop!
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: "My name's Rosunda Gale. Everyone calls me Rose."
Gender: "Unless you're blind, you can tell I'm a female."
Personality: "Uh, seriously? OK, then. I'm tough and don't easily take no for an answer. I'm stubborn and dislike liars. Liars are the worst."
Hobbies: "I like my sword. I like it a lot, in fact. Specifically, I like sword fighting and fighting in general. I also like getting into trouble and, don't tell anyone, gaming. I know, it sounds nerdy, but I love to play video games. Particularly violent ones, like COD and Watchdogs and stuff."
Group: "I wanna be the first female jock, though I may be tossed to the outcasts for one reason or another."
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? "Duh, I hate Snowy. She's a bratty little rich girl who needs to be stopped."
Others: "No, nothing else."
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Jealousy Empress » Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:58 am

thanks for putting my pet (princess) in 20lait1! :lol: :lol: loving how they are going shopping!when is she gonna meet flame, hail and the other jocks?
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Splashtail » Wed Jul 08, 2015 8:08 am

*facepaws*I should've read the front first! Sorry!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:27 pm

I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: Keira
Gender: female.
Personality: quiet and a bit of a loner, Keira is moody and brooding. She hates the populars, and wants to start a petition to break up the populars, and outlaw them in the school. She is guarded by a ghost, who is in the form of a black cat that follows her everywhere. The only thing that keeps it close to her is her syringe full of red paint that spilt at the time the ghost started gaurding her her. The ghost sometimes talks, but only at times of great need, and only wise things.
Hobbies: brooding, talking to her ghost cat thing, Kerma, and trying to find support to get rid of the populars.
Group: emos.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? yes please.
Others: this is why she is haunted, you don't have to read if you don't want to.

As a young pup, Keira lived with her perants and twin sister, Kerma. She was very different then, and the two girls played together all the time. One day, when she was only five, she and Kerma were walking by the beach, under a old lifeguard building. A man was there, smiling and holding out lollipops. They both took one, and he told them that if they wanted more, they would have to follow him. Being naive young girls, the cast glances back at their parents, and followed him.
He led them to the other side of the building, and told them that under the house there were more lolipops. Kerma got down and started to go under, but Keira tried to stop her, not trusting the man. She was right not to, though her sister didn't listen. Kerma crawled under, and then the building collapsed. The man glared at Keira, angry that she had lived, and fled.
Kerma died then, but after the collapse of the building, and cat walked to Keira, dropped a syringe at her feet, and said,
"You tried to save me. I will look after you. Fill this with spilt paint. Then I can always find you no matter what." Since then, the cat has uttered no words, but Keira knows she will one day. She is always worried that the man will return, and knows that he will find her one day.


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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Jealousy Empress » Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:37 pm

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by the way guys, this is princess from page 38...
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:10 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Okay. I am nailed. I mean... screwed. Cinders is supposed to save us all. Easy because she's my friend. Not very easy because first, she doesn't believe me, second, because she's more of the party animal than the serious animal (like me!) and third, because Snowy has a part of those elemental powers. Okay, perhaps... Not very easy at all. Well, before some of the... serious stuff, I suppose.... *takes a deep breath* Normal stuff first, then.

Creek's told me the new kid, Princess, is totally crushing on that creep Hail. The problem? Hail crushes on Snowy. And his brother, Flame, too. Stiff Competition. I'm not sure if they go together....

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Hmm... No. It's not my choice - it's for a Popular - they're the matchmakers. So.... yeah. And three more students. All of them are girls, at least. So.... here are the sortings.


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She's pretty cool, I guess. But she's an Outcast. I don't know if being an Outcast is good. Because Populars are treated... 'with more respect', but Outcasts are... much better. Yeah. So..... the sorting. Yeah.

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Photo of Snowy's ugly face. For no reason. Actually, yeah. She sorts, so... meh. And I don't think Snowy's very happy with the new girl, too. Tell you later.

Snowy: ..... Your eyes are weird. But I like the roses. And your wings are very pretty indeed - snowy white like my wings. But, like, whatever. Name and interests?
???: .... I'm Rachel. I like playing on my IPaw and hanging out with friends. Now I better go! *turns around*
Snowy: STOP! You don't just turn your back on the supreme Popular!
Rachel: Sorry, then. *turns back to Snowy and starts to walk past her*
Snowy: You don't just walk past the Queen Bee, too!
Rachel: So.... How am I supposed to leave?
Snowy: You leave when you're dismissed, Rachel. I'm Snowy, and you better respect me because I am the most beautiful dog here - I'm the Queen Bee, so, duh. Right, boys? *glances back at the jocks hanging around*

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Ryker: Um... Uh, like...
Hail: Totally!
Flame: Yeah!
Alexander: *rolls eyes*
Riptide: Why?
Xaiver: Totally not, bro.
Charley: .... I rather Skyler.
Jackson: You truly are, my lady.
Luke: She's as pretty as a deer. You know, white-nosed reindeer? Red-nosed reindeer?
Cristo: I still do not understand what is the meaning of 'Queen Bee', for everyone is beautiful in their own way, as quoted in the book....

Snowy: RYKER! *grabs his arm and drags him over, then turns to Rachel* This is my boyfriend. Don't you ever think of taking him. If you're a Popular, you can take anyone else in the jocks. *flicks tail at the jocks* If you're someone else.... Go and hang out with those losers.
Rachel: .... Are you calling me a loser?
Snowy: Well, I'm deciding if you're a loser or a Popular, like me. But I'm starting to think you ask too many questions, you know. Only Nerds ask questions. And Outcasts, too. The Nerds are okay, though, because they do my homework for me. But you don't seem very smart, you know -
Rachel: WHO ARE YOU CALLING A LOSER AND 'NOT VERY SMART'? YOU MUST BE NOT VERY SMART TO CALL ME A LOSER, YOU LUMP OF USELESS FUR?! AND YOUR SO-CALLED 'BOYFRIEND' - GET HIM TO STOP STARING AT ME! *stomps off, grumbling under her breath*
Snowy: Why, you - OUTCASTS! Wait a sec - RYKER, WERE YOU -
Ryker: :? D - Definitely not! I was... just glaring. Yeah, just... glaring at the... loser. Outcast.
Snowy: GOOD! NEXT! *turns to next dog*

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Snowy: Swords. What is up with them today?! Like, those... bracelets look like they come from Ancient Rome! Your hairstyle is... nice, because it's my hairstyle, and everything I have is nice! But your shirt looks like -
???: Gosh, stop with all the - *mimics squeaky, high pitched voice* - my opinion this and my opinion that! *returns to normal voice* I'm Rosunda Gale. But call me Rose. Or you get to taste of my sword. *brushes paw over sword hilt* And -
Snowy: You look like a boy. You act like a boy. What gender are you?!
Rose: You blind? *jabs sword towards Snowy's eyes*
Snowy: *takes a step back*
Rose: I'm a female, duh. Can't you tell?
Snowy: Um, OF COURSE I CAN! Anyways, Rosunda -
Rose: Rose.
Snowy: - interests?
Rose: Can't you tell? Sword fighting, video games, getting in trouble - it's totally fun - and punching your pretty little nose off.
Snowy: Wh - I -
Rose: And I want to be the first female jock. But I won't follow your little gang -
Snowy: O - Outcasts -
Ryker: Actually, I don't mind a female in the jocks. You know, because we can easily beat them up.
Snowy: Fine... *glowers at Rose* Jocks. But... you're on the edge on Outcasts.
Rose: Beat me up? I'd like to see you try. *walks off stiffly*

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Snowy: Ugh, black. Pink is much better. EMOS!
???: I haven't said anything yet...
Snowy: You just did. Go away.
???: You will regret that. I am more than what I seem.
Snowy: You.... You're creepy! And you freak me out! But if I... Ugh. I won't be haunted by a creepy Emo... Fine. Name... and interests. Not like I care, though.
???: My name is Keira... I -
Snowy: DONE! YOU'RE STILL EMOS. GO AWAY!
Keira: *glowers at her* You will regret it. You don't know what I have lost... And you don't know what you will lose. *stalks off*
Snowy: Ryker, you keep that Emo away from me. *looks around* No more? Finally. There aren't any to-be Populars around... And I need a supply of Nerds. Two aren't enough to do my homework.
Keira: *from the shadows* Nerds... You act as if we are merely food supplies. But you will taste the pain and loss I have felt.... Snowy...
Snowy: EEP! RYYYYKER!
Ryker: *silent groan* Um, yeah. Go.... away. I mean, go away!



So, yeah. Danava, my connection to the Outcasts, told me that Keira is attempting start a... thing. A petition. Yeah, a petition. To break up those Populars and outlaw them in school. What that means, I don't know. I'm not admitting I don't, though. So Riptide, my connection to the jocks, told me that Rose nearly crushed Hail's jaw with her paws and gave Flame a free furcut. Creek answered that Princess doesn't seem to like Rose very much - maybe because she nearly made Hail's 'handsome little face' crushed. Hm. Maybe. Well... to the... *deep breath* serious stuff.

I... spoke to Cinders a while ago. And she... well, maybe I'll just explain through writing.

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Me: Um, Cinders? You.... figure out.... something?
Cinders: What? Like partying? Because, you know what? I found out that I can create awesome fireworks! I could have done cold whipping cream, too, but - you know, I used to. But now I can't. Weird, right?
Me: Um... Yeah. Very weird.... Yeah, right... Um... You might have... temporary elemental powers. You know, to... help... save the school.
Cinders: Cool! Is this a TV show or something? *looks around for secret cameras*
Me: No. Please. You need to -
Cinders: Well, then I can go, right? *rushes off*
Me: *sigh*

I even tried out my luck with Snowy. I wonder if Creek can help, but I haven't told them yet...

Me: Snowy. The school's going to be taken over by an evil robot of me and a Sunny clone. You have a power transferred to you from Cinders - I need your help - and Cinders - to help save the school!
Snowy: *glances at me* Oh, the fake Outcast. Now you're trying to get me to believe silly stories. Well, that won't work. *struts off*

Ugh. See? At least my talk with Cinders was longer. But... How am I supposed to get rid of this clone and robot if nobody's going to listen to me? Especially if they have the temporary power to save the school?! Ugh, life. If only my friends could handle the news, perhaps they could help to make others... believe. Well, I suppose.... I better go and... mindthunder brainstorm some ideas.

See you, Hawk. I.... I'm going to make them believe. I survived the world of Warriors, being chased by some evil guys with red hair eyes, and even my Math test (I failed it, anyways. But at least I still live.) I can't just lose to a clone and a robot. Nobody can pretend to be me.... Nobody can beat my pranks. I will survive... So, I guess. I'd better go. See you.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Jealousy Empress » Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:16 pm

omg love it <3<3<3<3
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Thu Jul 09, 2015 10:49 pm

Keira was done brilliantly! Yay!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Thu Jul 09, 2015 11:21 pm

That ewas a cold entry! Love it!








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