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Postby frankie (dup) » Mon Jul 06, 2015 10:53 am

All 10/10, all have a good flow and fit well, love the new prefixes!

Willowleaf, A brown she-cat with green eyes, Willowleaf is an incredibly skilled medicine cat, but is very shy.

Ravenbreeze, A calm black tom with amber eyes, Ravenbreeze is very fast. I chose 'Breeze' instead of 'Foot' because he's calm AND fast.

Shiningwhisker, A bright white she-cat with brilliant green eyes, her leader thought her pelt would ward off any prey, but she turned out to be an especially good hunter.
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Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby atii » Mon Jul 06, 2015 5:09 pm

        willowleaf 8/10
        it would be a 9/10, but a willow- cat is usually either a gray or gray-brown cat instead of just a brown cat. otherwise, it is just fine.

        ravenbreeze 8/10
        this would be higher, but i'm not really a fan of using the suffix breeze-. however, raven fits just fine for this cat. good job<3

        shiningwhisker 7/10
        i don't like the use of shining as a prefix. it just doesn't make sense to me. how can a kit be shining? yes, their fur can be a light or flashy color such as white, but even black cats can have a sort of shine to their fur if groomed enough. it's nothing to name a kit over. -whisker works with this cat, however.

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        blackcloud
        a bulky black tom with striking yellow eyes and broad shoulders. despite his menacing appearance, he is a gentle and peaceful cat who can often be found settling disputes within the clan. he is a relatively good at combat, but it is nothing that notable.

        oatfoot
        a lean golden tom with a hint of brown within his pelt and murky green eyes. he is very quick on his feet and can often be found chasing various speedy rodents or birds for fun.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby dudevinci » Tue Jul 07, 2015 3:06 am

    both names seem fine to me. 10/10 for both!

    Foxheart ;; Ginger tom.Very cunning and cruel.He is a rogue.

    Softstep ;; Pale brown tabby she-cat.Shy and quiet.Her footsteps are very silent,thus the name.She is a queen.
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Postby CoolComrade » Tue Jul 07, 2015 6:38 am

Redstorm~5/10~Red kind of works, but if he's good at fighting, he should be given the -claw suffix, and if his speed out matches his fighting, he should be given -foot.
Littlefoot~10/10~Oh my cuteness. This is adorable.
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Gullfang~A grey and white tom with average fighting and hunting skills. His Clan lives on a beach.
Jaynose~A grey-brown molly with excellent tracking skills. (Based off of the British Jay)
Chervilheart~A confident white molly, she hopes to become leader and rule all of the Clans. She is a very kind, but strict deputy.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby dudevinci » Tue Jul 07, 2015 6:42 am

    i see nothing wrong with the first two but..

    Chervilheart throws me off a bit. otherwise,9.5/10!

    Foxheart ;; Cunning ginger tabby tom.Cruel and ruthless.He is a rogue.

    Icegaze ;; Calm white she-cat.speedy and agile,also very competitive.her eyes are an icy blue,thus her name.
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Postby atii » Tue Jul 07, 2015 6:59 am

        foxheart 9/10
        fox- works with the cat, but i'm not entirely sure about -heart. the suffix -heart means, to me at least, that a cat has strong opinions about what is right and wrong to them, so unless he has this -heart won't really work. otherwise he sounds like a cool cat!

        icegaze 8/10
        ice- is a good suffix for her, but i don't like the use of -gaze and a few components about the cat. firstly, most white cats with blue eyes are either born deaf or have their hearing deteriorate over time. she could be the small percentage that doesn't become deaf, but i really just don't like the use of white cats with blue eyes unless deafness is present. sorry for my bias on this.
        now, to -gaze. a cat's eyes is nothing to be named over. in traditionalism, something that i usually use when naming cats, the suffix is used to point on a specific skill that a cat has. if no skill is notable enough, -fur or -pelt (or -face if the cat is considered attractive) is used. in your cat's case, it sounds like either -foot (a cat that is very quick on their feet) or -tail (a cat who is very agile and has a notable sense of balance) would better suit her.

        overall, wonderful job!

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        a white molly with ginger splotches throughout her fur and brown eyes.
        even at a young age she was known to have a great connection with starclan and loved to watch the medicine cat sort herbs and treat cats.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby Cuervo » Tue Jul 07, 2015 9:06 am

    10/10

    Daisyleaf is perfect! Daisy matches with her white pelt and the ginger splotches. It would fit even better if the splotches were a pale ginger. Although Im not sure about the brown eyes. The suffix is also fitting since she seems to have a fondness for herbs. Great job c:


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    Bouldertail
    A large and somewhat fluffy grey tabby tom with pale green eyes. He is known for his climbing skills and topping surprising speeds.



    Sloenose

    A semi-fluffy black she-cat with yellow eyes. She is a very mysterious cat. She isn't much for talking and is sometimes mistaken for a shadow. Though she doesn't show much emotion on the outside she certainly does on the inside. She was deemed of the suffix "nose" for her tracking skills.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby Silxe » Tue Jul 07, 2015 9:58 am

Bouldertail: 10/10. Yes, this works for him, and I like the sound of it!

Sloenose: 10/10. Fits her nicely.

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Mottlednose : Short furred molly, half white while the rest is mottled in brown and ginger tabby. She is an excellent tracker.

Stoneheart : Grey tabby molly with matching grey eyes. She has strong opinions about what is right and wrong, and follows her own beliefs.
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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby ursus. » Tue Jul 07, 2015 10:27 am

9/10- The name fits very well. I just think that there's... something missing... ya know? But I do like this name!

10/10- I love that name, first off! Anyways, although 'heart' is normally used for a cat with lots of loyalty toward his/her clan, I can see this working in stoneheart's case. Very nice!

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A Shadowclan cat. His footpaws were unnaturally webbed-- a trait from his father-- thus giving him an edge over his clanmates in terms of running in his clan's marshy terrain. He is a lithe tom with dark brown fur and green eyes.

Smallpebble-
A Windclan cat. She was the smallest kit in her litter, and has a light grey pelt. Normally, that would be bad for hunting in Windclan's terrain, but she uses her appearence to her advantage by blending into the few rocks that dot the land, then jumping onto her unsuspecting prey. She has dark brown eyes.

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Re: Rate the Warrior Name! { v3 ;; read rules. }

Postby maximus-gayimus » Wed Jul 08, 2015 6:36 pm

9/10 - Seems to fit the description.
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Sunfrost: A reddish-orange furred she-cat with flecks of black mixed into her pelt. She is rather confusing, one moment happy and the next furious. She has switched from evil to good multiple times before eventually giving her life after killing the most powerful Dark Forest cat.

Moonblaze: Sunfrost's truly evil twin. She has pitch black fur and blazing sapphire eyes. Her battle skills are quite impressive, and her temper is another thing you have to watch out for. It can be debated whether her tongue or her claws spare sharper.

Sweetflash: A cream colored she-cat with amber eyes. She is a fast runner, and secretly evil. She trains in the Dark Forest, so her battling is impressive. She is waiting for the perfect moment to destroy her clan.
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