FirClan {Closed} and MoorClan {Open} {Discussion + Forms}

[CoolComrade]

Description - Beautiful white molly with hazel eyes.
Name - Egretface
Clan - MoorClan
Gender - molly
Rank - warrior
Age - 21 moons
Personality - Egretface is a very proud, but kind, cat. She is also very beautiful. She doesn't like getting her paws dirty, and prefers hunting over fighting. She enjoys chatting, but she knows when to stop talking. She's an overall very dainty cat, and can seem lazy at times. She can sometimes be a bit apathetic.
Family - Mother and siblings to be added.
Notable history - Nope!
Skills/Weaknesses - Some toms would say her skill is beauty, but she doesn't really have any real skills. She's average at about everything except fighting. She's terrible at fighting because she hates seeing others in pain.

I realized I have three cats in FirClan and only one in MoorClan, so I added her to make up for it~ Whoopsie!
Edit: She is beautiful enough to have the -face suffix. I know that others might consider her more -nose worthy.

[Dezembro]

Awesome!Thanks everybody! Everyone's characters are accepted, and I'll have the MoorClan allegiances updated by the end of the day.

[lady chocobo]

Description - brown tabby tom with yellow eyes
Name - Rabbitfoot
Clan - MoorClan
Gender - tom
Rank - warrior
Age - 26 moons
Personality - Rabbitfoot is skittish, especially around larger cats. He's not very comfortable in social situations, and prefers to not go to Gatherings because of this if he can help it. Though he's usually on high alert, he does like company and as long as he doesn't have a lot of cats coming up to him, he's fine. Rabbitfoot is polite and friendly to everyone in his Clan, though outside of it, he's wary and flighty.
Family - mother and father are both deceased.
Notable history - nope~
Skills/Weaknesses - He's fast at running, and is very good at it. His downside is his fighting; he's a horrible fighter, and against larger cats is at a disadvantage. He has impressively quick reflexes and uses them to escape from a dangerous situation, should it arise. He's flighty and is afraid of confrontation. Rabbitfoot has no desire to become deputy or leader; that's too much responsibility for the poor tom and he don't know how he'd handle it.

I wanted to add this guy as my other MoorClan cat, if that's okay. If not, that's fine too~

[Dezembro]

I have added every cat with posted forms on to the MoorClan allegiances, I'll be going back and adding all of the NPCs soon.

[CoolComrade]

Who: Egretface's mother
Name: Wisteriafoot
Clan: MoorClan
Gender: Molly
Rank: Elder
Age: 42 moons

Detective is making her brother.

Also, Lady, this is just my opinion, but I think Rabbitfoot (love the name) is a bit old. Just saying. You don't have to change it. I'm not in charge here.

[Mr. Cloudwhisker]

[It is not my place to judge, but shouldn't an elder be older than 29 moons?]

[detective who.]

I know the situation has been resolved, but as a quick note, a 'senior warrior' is one over forty moons. An elder would probably be a year over that, at least.

[Dezembro]

As Butler and Detective said, 29 moons is young for an elder. I understand your reasoning - feral cats usually only live a few years in the wild - however in this roleplay warriors live much longer.

[miniaturetigers]

Thanks CatBug! Detective has been kind enough to accept some of the MoorClan forms during my absence, so I'll just go through and make sure everything checks out.

@ *Catbug* ;; Could you change the age of Patridgeleaf? 13 moons is awfully young for a medicine cat, especially for one that already has an apprentice, as medicine cats usually remain apprentices for much longer than their warrior apprentice counterparts. Other than that, his forms checks out!

@ EchosInTheDarkness~ ;; I'll add Morningpaw, Gorsepaw, and Harewhisker right away. I'm afraid MoorClan has a Rook- cat already, so if you could change Rookpaw's prefix, I can accept her. Also, did you mean to put MoorClan on Willowpaw's form? She can be a MoorClan victim, however the first victim will be from FirClan, so if you were planning for her to be the first victim, she should be in FirClan.

@ ~Saturn~ ;; I'll be adding Ashcloud and Sootpaw now. Thanks for your patience!

@ I r o n. ;; It seems to me that you and have Echos have come to the conclusion that Honeypaw shall be the MoorClan med. cat apprentice? Remember that the position of med. cat apprentice is open for FirClan, so as long as Detective is okay with it, either of you could apply for that position, and both of you can have med. cat apprentice. Grayfoot is accepted.

@ ♚Black Butler♞ ;; Thanks for your patience! Dawnwhisker is accepted. You can make her brother if you want, as well.

@ Living_For_Jesus! ;; May I suggest that Emberfang's name be changed to Emberwhisker? The -fang suffix indicates a cat that is good at hunting and fighting, and as you said in her form, he is a terrible fighter. The suffix -whisker implies a cat that is an excellent hunter, which is much more fitting for her.
As for Sootpaw, there can only be one of each prefix in the Clan, and there is already a Sootpaw, Ashcloud, and Grayfoot, so you will have to change Sootpaw's and his parents' prefixes. My apologies for the inconvenience!

@lady chocobo ;; Bramblingface is accepted.

Okay, I think I've covered everything. Let me know if I forgot to address something!

Im sorry for the WAY late reply! How about Ravenpaw, and Willowpaw, I guess will be from FirClan for the first victim.

[miniaturetigers]

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