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by deletethisaccount.. » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:47 pm

Name - Orchardkit
Gender - She-kit
Rank - Kit
Age - 3 moons
Personality - She is jumpy and very immature. It's a very rare occasion if she gets hurt, so that's why a she never does something that won't get her hurt... if it can.
History - She was born as a clan cat. Her mother, (Dreamwalker) was very sick and so was Orchardkit. Orchardkit survived but her mother didn't. As it was told, her mother would've became a leader in Starclan. She became Dream instead. She was the one who made Orchardkit 'indestructible' during 'dangerous' stunts she and her friends pulled off. When a very dangerous adventure occurred, she could see her mother pulling her up away from dangerous spikes at the bottom of a cliff. Orcharkit does not know this. I would prefer if her foster mother told this to her when she became a warrior. Thank you!
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by rocoboq » Tue Jun 23, 2015 8:37 pm
I think it looks fine, and the descriptions could be helpful when RP'ing if you don't just wanna say "She walked up to the other she-cat, who was watching her." and instead say "She walked up to the golden she-cat, whose emerald green eyes were watching her." I, personally, would refer to it.
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