Secrets Revealed - The Hawk

[20lait1]

Hey, err... Notebook Diary! In fact, just Diary. So of course, life needs a little fun in it, yes, but I haven't told anyone, or shown anyone, either... But I do enjoy writing. It's just something quiet to do before rushing back into life. Well, I'm Cinders Chocopaw! And I love parties, fun, and rainbows! So, on to why I got you. You're just something... to kill time, you know, when there's nobody around to have fun with me. At least I'm getting a new dormmate soon.... But anyways, I go and sleep in the dorms of Furford Academy. And I heard there's a new batch of students coming in tomorrow! Let me introduce my family as well.



This is my mom, Katie Candypaws. She's nice, but quite strict on the 'stay up late' rule. So I'm not allowed to party late in the night without getting grounded. But of course, that's not going to stop me! Bringing a flashlight, a bowl of crisps, and a comic book, and there's a night party. And my mom... If she reads this, she'll kill me, but - Hey, she's not coming to my school, so I'm safe! And she gets really... well, angry if I mention my dad - or brother. I'll explain later....



My sis, Cindy Chocopaws! She's a bit older, but loves to party. Sometimes Nearly all the time, she gets annoyed at me for breaking a rule or something, but she forgives me a minute later. We both like partying, and she does break some rules too, so
we're even. We're awesome!

Now... For the 'sensitive' bit. To say, Mom is really into Egypt and it's mythology. She named the oldest child, which is my brother, after the Egyptian God of Funerals.... And maybe a couple of years after, she and my dad broke up and my dad took Anubis (my bro) somewhere else. I secretly keep a photo of Mom, Dad and Anubis in my drawer - but Mom will kill me ten times over if she found out. Now... The pictures....



Jeremy Chocopaw. From this picture, I'd suppose he's the 'cool' kind of dad - like a kid spirit in an adult body. Still... I don't really want to write about him.



Anubis Chocopaw. My... brother. I suppose... a jock? Just feels wrong to write about them.... I won't, then.

Well, that is my family.... Well, to take my mind off sad things, let me review my sorting....

Snowy: I -
Me: Oh! Hello there, white dog! I'm Cinders, and -
Snowy: You are not supposed to speak first, you -
Me: You said 'I' before I started talking, so you spoke first!
Snowy: *rolls eyes* I am the great and popular Snowy. Your name... Sinders, was it?
Me: Cinders!
Snowy: *sighs* And interests?
Me: Partying, partying, and -
Snowy: Outcasts. Go away.

My sister....



Cindy: You dare make my little sis Outcasts, whatever that is? If you care, I'm Cindy, interests... *glances over at me* Partying, partying, and more partying. Now I'm going with her. *follows me*
Snowy: I... I....

Well, I loved the look on Snowy's snout. It made me... want to party. Well, I guess... I have to wait for my new dormmate to arrive. I think everyone went to the meeting that Snowy held - and to be rebellious, after coming back from a walk in the park with Cindy, I stayed in the room and texted her. I think I sent about 50 messages... No, I think it was 200. Well, I'd better get ready to welcome her.... with a PARTY! Well, since I'm not showing her my 'nerdy' side, I guess, I'll put you away. Bye, Diary!

[retroaqua]

Amazing.. XD

[20lait1]

Hiya... Book thing.

We launched the plan today... I hope Sky isn't hurt.... Here is what happened....

Hail showed me an empty room. I pointed out that KEEP OUT sign but he didn't listen. Instead, he opened the door and gave me a kind of recording device... I tried turning it on and it started screaming "HELP ME!" in a screechy voice. Hail turned it off and gave me the evil eye, then put it in the middle of the room. As Hail left the room, I glanced up - and noticed an air vent.

I decided it could be put into use - my plan, not theirs - and followed Hail outside. I spotted Flame hanging on a branch outside a window, before scrambling out of view. When we had left the room, Hail hurried off to get Flame off that branch, probably. I was left sitting beside Snowy, staring at my paws.



Snowy: *flicks hair* Hey, Fang! You know what's going to happen, right?
Me: Um, uh, yeah... I -
Snowy: Good! Now, I have to rely on those jocks to pull this off... And rid this school of that pesky Outcast!
Me: *lowers eyes*

I kept an eye on her for a couple of minutes, then got up and told Snowy and those Populars that I was going to the bathroom. I fled the cafeteria and found an air vent - I clambered inside and inchwormed through those pipe-things before I found the room - just in time. Sky had just stepped in - and the door was pulled shut outside by Hail as Sky's paw flicked backwards, seeming to close the door.

I used one of my claws to flick open the air vent, then I reached my back paws through and slipped outside. I noticed Sky's shocked expression - - and I hope she will forgive me....

Sky: FANG?!
Me: *tiny gulp* Skyler! I have to tell you - this is a trap!
Sky: What?

She isn't running.... No, she can't... The door's locked... I -

Me: Snowy got the jocks to kidnap you. I heard them talking about you and I knew I needed to know more. I had to protect you.... even if it meant breaking our trust. I had to prove myself for the jocks and the populars, so I had to answer yes to Snowy's request to dance. Come on, Sky, get out of here!

Then I heard a creak - and Flame crawled through the entrance. I didn't know Flame knew about it... Oh dear... Oh no....



???: Why, hello, Outcast girl. And you, too, Fang.
Me: Flame! What are you doing here?!
Flame: Well, you were supposed to distract her. A loyal follower of those Outcasts to the end. I almost thought you actually wanted to have revenge of the girl and join the jocks.

What could I say? I only could reveal the truth....

Fang: ..... I may have been lying to you about having revenge on Skyler, but you're right. I'm a loyal follower to the Outcasts and Skyler to the end.
Flame: Well, well, then. I suppose I have to kidnap you, too.
Sky: NO! If it's me you want, then leave him alone. Run, Fang!

I was speechless. I'd never seen Sky so... angry, so fierce.

Me: I - I -
Sky: My orders! Go!
Me: Yes, Sky. *runs out the door*

I didn't hear what Flame said. I knew I had to find someone to help her... Please, help me.... I had left the door open, but Hail blocked me.



Hail: Running away from the Outcast?! Really -
Me: *darts past*

I ran, ran as fast as I could... Until I bumped into Xavier.



Me: Xavier! *pant* I... Huff... You....
Xavier: Whoa, slow down, bro. Running away from something?
Me: Sky.... She's been kidnapped! You must help me!
Xavier: ..... I don't really get what's going on, bro, but if you need my help, I'll help you. And Sky, too.
Me: Thanks a lot.... The prison is blocked by a boulder, I think.
Xavier: Let me guess, dude - you need me to create a little device to help her?
Me: Exactly! See ya! *rushes off*

I bumped into Riptide next.



Me: Huff.... RIPTIDE! I NEED YOUR HELP! COME WITH ME! *pant*
Riptide: Um... Okay?

That was easy... We're putting together a plan, now. We will save Sky. We must. Goodbye, notebook-thing - I will rescue Sky.

[ωolfie]

I love how Fang just bumps into everyone xD

[retroaqua]

I love this X3

I looked at this earlier this week and groaned that its not posted on often, but meh.

[20lait1]

Hi, Diary…

I’m Sunset Petaldapple. I don’t know what is wrong with everyone, but they seem to hate diaries… I suppose you’ll be my only, true friend, though. I look like that to blend in… I will have to start from the beginning, I guess.

As I said, my name is Sunset. I prefer Sunny, though, as the Queen Bee at our school is named Snowy. She’s… She rules the school, so I’d rather her as an ally instead of an enemy. I…. I don’t know why I act like this now. The Outcasts group don’t seem too bad, compared to Snowy…. But some of the Populars are nice, too. Like Creek. I remember my ‘sorting’, as it was called. Perhaps I shall start with introducing my family….



My mother loves to knit. Her first project is the sweater she is wearing here - it turned out to be bigger than she thought, but she loved it dearly. She wears it nearly every day. Her name is Dusk Petaldapple. I love her, as she loves me. She now knits sweaters to sell and give - the sweater I am wearing now is one of her successes. She is kind, and supportive. I hope to fulfil her expectations, but I barely communicate with her now as I am weighed down with work from school.



My father, Hector. He loves me, too, and my mother. He loves playing chess, and my mother knitted a sweater just for him. We love each other very much, and I wish I can at least have the time to write to them… Tell them about Snowy, and how…. she bosses me around. But I cannot bear myself to write that - she may find out, and she is… one of my only friends, I suppose. Someone to talk to. I hate to see all those Outcasts hating Snowy, but I do too…. I fear that if I displease her… Horrible things may happen. This is what shaped me to be the dog I am now… I still remember when I was free of worries, on my first sorting.

Snowy: I am the great, beautiful Snowy! You do look nice, good enough to be a Popular. I need a Popular that I can trust, you see, but first, name and interests?
Me: I am Sunset Petaldapple. I enjoy knitting, as my mother taught me.
Snowy: Pah! Boring. And from the way you talk, Nerds!

I could see in her eyes - she was desperate for her ‘trusted Popular’, and… perhaps I could make her happy. Even if it made me uncomfortable. I may grow to like it….

Me: And… Shopping.
Snowy: OMG! You’re like, my second in command, already! Populars!
Me: …. Okay….
Snowy: And lose the all ‘perhaps’ and nerdy talk!
Me: …..

From there, I worked. I learnt, I practiced. Soon after my arrival, there was a student. I wanted to be like her - unafraid to speak out. She is who I wanted to be… Her name is Skyler.



This is what she looks like. She’s not beautiful, or pretty, nor boastful. It stings me every time Snowy speaks something mean to her, but… I do not want to displease her. Now, I wonder… Why do I act like this? I back Snowy up, all the time… Even when I think she is wrong. I only write like this now, and in you, as Snowy has told me to ‘lose the talk’. Very well, Diary… Farewell.

[Streak]

Love the story from a popular's point of view!!

[Woogwoo Wren]

Sunny seems......insecure.

[retroaqua]

She is so much more kinder >->

[Splashtail]

: C Can I hug her?