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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby divini » Mon Jun 15, 2015 2:48 am

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Jun 16, 2015 10:37 pm

I've decided... This shall be Skyler's new outfit. If you don't like it, say so in the fanclub (first entry, top).

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Jun 16, 2015 11:30 pm

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Dear Hawk,

I'm excited... And sorta feeling... No, not sick... I just don't know. Weird? Lucifer told me that today's probably the day I'll be changing. He's got some stuff to help... I'll be meeting him in my old dorm after school. Jewel's lured Cinders out with some excuse, so we'll be safe. Okay, let me see... Ah, yes. The... What was her name again? Caramel Rindrock? No, that's not right... Ah, yes. Cinnamon... Rhindstones. She was sorted today... And she seems cool. Derpy as well.... I'd love to chat, but she... Well, I did, but... Ah, whatever. Let me just write this out....


As soon as I woke up, I heard Snowy muttering under her breath as she combed her fur and hair.

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Snowy: Ugh... I need more beauty sleep... *glances up at clock* But it's about time. Oh well. *gets up*
Me: *sits up* Umm... Hi?
Snowy: *glances over* Oh, Azure! I was just going outside to sort the new kid. She was standing down there *points as window* and shooting arrows up at my window... She nearly chipped my pawnail!
Me: Umm... Okay? I'll be... getting on... my nail polish.
Snowy: And don't forget those lipstick brands I suggested! I'd suggest Very Red Berry, or Milky Silky Strawberry...
Me: Ah.. Okay....
Snowy: *struts outside*
Me: *peers out window*

I noticed a dog down there, shooting arrows at the window. The window was closed - lucky, because an arrow hit where my snout was and bounced off. Here's a photo of the girl - I think she's new, because I've never seen her before...

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???: WHOO! Oh, what?! I -
Me: :shock: *pulls curtains closed*

I didn't stay around to hear the rest and I rushed downstairs, tripping over the last step and doing a perfect snoutplant. Or is it snoutfloor? I don't know... Whatever. I saw the girl walk through the door and nearly bump into Snowy.

Snowy: OI! You nearly ruined my perfect fur! And my -
???: Um, sorry....
Snowy: YOU SHOULD BE! Now, anyways, I am Snowy. I am the Queen Bee, meaning everyone has to listen to me. Yes, just me. And of course, I -
Me: *hurries over* Um, name and... likes?
Snowy: *raises eyebrow* Interests.
???: Cinnamon Rhindstones, reporting for duty, sir!
Snowy: I'm not a -
Cinnamon: Now, interests, likes, whatever... Writingdrawingreadingarcheryfencing -
Snowy: SLOW DOWN! I -
Cinnamon: And designing hoodies. This hoodie was designed by me and it was sold somewhere around here.
Snowy: Hoodies, ugh... They're for the jocks, but it does have a nice pattern... Maybe you can design a dress for me.
Cinnamon: No thanks, sir. I -
Snowy: Ugh, I was going to say Populars -
Cinnamon: I don't really mind, sir, but I would -
Snowy: :evil: OUTCASTS!
Cinnamon: Yes, sir! *hurries off*
Me: I think I saw that hoodie somewhere... I -

Then someone rushed down the stairs, tripped on the last step like me, and knocked me and Snowy over.

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Cinders: IS THAT A CAT?! *points at a jet black cat curled up on the ground* IS THERE A PARTY? WHAT ARE -
Cat: *jumps up and transforms*

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Cat: Cat?! I'm not called Cat! I'm Sugar Moon! But call me -
Cinnamon: SUGAR?! GET OVER HERE!
Sugar: Fine....
Cinders: But -
Sugar: *hurries after Cinnamon*

I glanced at Sugar and Cinnamon's backs (as they were rushing off to who knows where) and Cinders. Then I gasped.

Me: Um, Cinders... Your hoodie -
Snowy: WHAT ARE YOU DOING TALKING TO A USELESS OUTCAST! *cough* I mean, you don't want to get their... Outcastness, right?
Me: Is that even a real word? Um... Yes?
Snowy: Yes?! I thought -
Me: I mean no. Or maybe? Actually... no.
Snowy: *sighs* Good. We have so little Populars.... Not enough to outnumber those Outcasts. *grumbles in annoyance* Whatever. I'd better go to my next class. *struts off*
Me: O.... Okay.

I followed Cinnamon, hoping to talk to her, but...

Me: Um, hi, Cinnamon?
Cinnamon: What?! Oh, sorry, sir, I - Oh, a Popular?! WHAT THE FLIPPING CAT NUGGETS - Hi. I mean bye. *rushes off*
Me: Um.... Cat nuggets?



Didn't work... I mean talking to her. I mean talking to her didn't work. Ugh. Well, right now it's a boring Math class and I'm staring at my worksheet. Actually writing in you because I'm bored... But who cares. I see Tiffany...

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Me: Umm... Hi?
Tiffany: A.. Oh, hi! I'm just busy here...
Me: Don't you want to listen to music on your IPaw or game? Secretly, of course -
Tiffany: :o N-No! Learning is important! Why would you do that!
Me: Erm... Me? *glances over at another desk*

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Nexus: *playing games on IPaw* Yes! This is - an advert? Ugh. And I have to wait thirty seconds for it to end...
Dragonscale: *glances over* AN ADVERT FOR A CUTE KITTEN GAME THING?! WHAT IN THE -
Teacher: Cute kitten thing - Gaming? Detention for both of you.
Nexus: I never really liked school anyways....
Teacher: Double detention for both of you.
Dragonscale: *groan* Ugh, teachers... Um, Nexus... What do you say about a prank?
Nexus: A prank?! Awesome! Like -
Dragonscale: Shhh! *glances at teacher* We'll do a prank on that silly teacher and post it on PawTube. Isn't that awesome?! It'll be like torturing the teacher every day with it!
Nexus: Agreed. I -
Dragonscale: I've got everything ready.

What?! I wasn't listening sneakily! I'm - I - I was. Whatever, who cares. It's end of class now... And school for the day, too. I'd... better get to my... Cinders... my old dorm.

I'm here.... I don't think you noticed because time doesn't work on paper. And I'm tired, so I'm not going to be writing much. Lucifer says it's going to be painless... And I'll sleep for a while, so I'll give the pen to him to note down everything. See you later... Hawk....

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Skyler has given me her diary, or Hawk as she calls it, to take notes in. It is a fairly simple task to what I am doing now... I have no use for her pen, as she calls it. I prefer using the tip of my claw - what I am using now is a small amount of darkness, like ink. I have asked and received a sleeping potion from Maggie. She is the type which I like - strong and silent. Back to what I am doing now.... I shall describe the process, then. I've used the potion to put Skyler into a deep sleep. She refused to drink it, but I managed to sneak it into a cup of sweet tasting liquid and have her drink it. She is lying on her old bed now, sleeping deeply. Jewel has taken Cinders to her dorm so that we could have the room to ourselves. I shall begin...

I have borrowed a syringe from Simon. Now, I shall replace his strange liquid with a little darkness... The more darkness the faster it goes, but the more darkness the higher the risk is. If there was a dog that could control light... Skyler would have no fear of sleeping forever. Let me continue. I have injected her right shoulder, and she isn't twitching anymore... She barely seems to be breathing, but I know she is well. Her life force is duller than normal, but bright compared to others.... who weren't as lucky as her. She has a strong spirit. I wonder if it is her sarcastic tongue, her determination.... What makes her likeable to the one she calls 'Xander'. Others seem to like her as a friend, too... I have never experienced having a friend before, but... Let me continue with what I am doing now.

I cannot do much, only to watch Skyler sleep.... Her blue and white fur seems to be dulling, her bright yellow - perhaps golden - eyes dulling as well... Her Cyber Wings seem to be fading as well, into nothing.... Her tail is uncurling, becoming wispy in the air. The collar... I reach out to remove it from her neck, but it seems to fade as well. However... I have not warned her yet.... With only darkness to help her, something will remain... And it seems like everything is becoming... Right.... Except for her hair. It isn't vanishing... I wonder how her friends will react to this change. I will put this diary of hers down.... and wait for the changes to finish. Farewell, Diary of Skyler.

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Wed Jun 17, 2015 5:55 am

Oh god
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Streak » Wed Jun 17, 2015 5:57 am

Love this chapter and the upgrades on the characters! :D Cinnamon's hoodie really is popular, she, Cinders and Silver wear it! :thumbup:
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Sorry for not in the Hawks Nest!

Postby retroaqua » Wed Jun 17, 2015 8:48 am

Meh, I couldn't decide.

Cinnamon x Cinders shall host the best party
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Jealousy Empress » Thu Jun 18, 2015 5:03 am

I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name:Buddy
Gender:male
Personality:Bubbly, Chirpy,
Hobbies:flying
Group:jock
Is he/she a friend of Skyler?yes, but snowy doesnt know.
Others:he is snowys brother, but he wasnt born as thoroughbred. he eats almost nothing, but none of his clothes fit him, and he has a MASSIVE CRUSH ON SKYLER!!! he askes her out to a date!!!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BlondeChick » Thu Jun 18, 2015 8:49 am

I wish I had claws to write with, xD
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby MidniteScy » Thu Jun 18, 2015 11:16 am

Loved this entry! :D Ooo... Wonder what'll happen next.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Jun 18, 2015 6:51 pm

batpants123YOLO! wrote:
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name:Buddy
Gender:male
Personality:Bubbly, Chirpy,
Hobbies:flying
Group:jock
Is he/she a friend of Skyler?yes, but snowy doesnt know.
Others:he is snowys brother, but he wasnt born as thoroughbred. he eats almost nothing, but none of his clothes fit him, and he has a MASSIVE CRUSH ON SKYLER!!! he askes her out to a date!!!


Forms aren't open... And I changed the rules so that only dogs are allowed in the school as everyone's a dog. (Sorry, that means you can't use a pug.... But when forms open you can use the same form but with a different pet) And Skyler already has a crush, too...
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