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[Rizzoli & Isles]

Oh well tiny couldn't do half the things anyways. Her short stubby legs and body couldn't run as fast yet xD hate to say it but tiny..well tiny would forever be tiny ... O.o did that make sense?

I agree if you need my characters for the prophecy feel free to add them x3

[NovaSkye]

Ooh Tiny could be stuck in camp, and Waning saves her. Oh yeah. But she doesn't have to be mentioned in the actual prophecy for that.

[DragonWill]

A moon is a lunar month, so almost 30 days.
She would be a month old.
Maybe not even have eyes open yet.

Your prophecy. It does not rhyme.
As flint and stone become one
A blaze sets across the forest
Toms and Females alike in Clan
Must work together to survive

Try:
As flint and stone become one,
A blaze will settle across the forest,
Cats who are both both old and young,
Must work together, or live lives shortest.

[NovaSkye]

I tweaked it a bit to imply Flint as the cause and Waning as the hero. Check it out, otherwise I'll use yours

[Rizzoli & Isles]

Ooh that sounds delightful.. That would most likely happen to tiny nit being able to keep up and all. I wouldn't mind if NightFang had to risk his life for FeatherStar or anyone really. As an elder I think it would be very noble of him to do so.. This clan is his life he would defend it in a heartbeat.

[DragonWill]

*Cringes at imperfect rhyme*

Nah, I'm just joking. Its perfect.
Rhymes well enough, I'm just being a pedantic singer.

Also, what Rizzoli just said.

[NovaSkye]

Nightfang can definitely make sure the others get out well, maybe something can happen to Featherstar and he can drag her out of the blazing camp or something. I'll have to make sure Tigereye is doing something else.

As for the rhyme, what would that be, slant? Eh. I'm a singer not a writer xD

[DragonWill]

I'm a singer too. Imperfect rhymes just get to me. I even said "Cland" when I read it out loud, then went: "That's not a word..."

[NovaSkye]

Haha okay that's kinda funny lol I see why. It's just difficult to find words that rhyme perfectly for clan and actually go with it. I think I'm just hungry, cause I am stuck with "flan"

[Rizzoli & Isles]

That would be nice ^_^ and I can't rhyme so I can't help you there O.o