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by Baylin » Sat Jun 13, 2015 3:13 pm
Need some thought on this,
So Renee has had a few posts in my messy random diary that's composed of a few other trial characters, well anyway I was wondering if I should upgrade and just make a thread for Renee.
Thoughts?
And I don't even have a name for her journal yet .w.
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by Piefan » Sat Jun 13, 2015 3:17 pm
Macz wrote:Piefan wrote:British, you say? Alinia's probably in Asia, preferably Southeast... It might not necessarily be part of ASEAN though. I'd have stuck them all in Singapore, but to do that realistically there would be very few farms. Besides, there'd be a lot of Singlish which is frustrating, as a Singaporean who once tried to write down my classmate's speaking without crying.
"Eh, whatever lah. Would be so paiseh to do that... Now siam, I'm busy, and you're so blur like sotong..."
... Apollo's just hanging 'round proving my point.
haha, looking over at old posts.
tranlation to the singlish-
" Eh Whatever. It would be so [ i dont know what dat means ] to do that... Now be quiet, im busy and your such a blur like squid "i actually almost burst out laughing by my bad malay translation >.< I've spoken English more than Malay >.< Im Malay, but believe it or not, my first word was "Cartoon" XDD ( Not mai fault that i moved to London when i was 8 months! :/ )
sorry if this is irrevelant to the topic :V
Pai seh's Hokkien, it means "embarrassing"... and that's actually a pretty accurate translation lol. Hooray Singlish, making everything seem like gibberish!
Normal English:
"Whatever. Doing that would be so embarrasing... Now go away, I'm busy and you're stupid..."
(Also, I'm imagining your parents' reaction to your first word. "Twenty thousand words she could have said... Several relating to her family... and she said cartoon. Why.")
I'm socially awkward and sometimes terse - don't mind me.
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by Toy Dragon » Sat Jun 13, 2015 8:50 pm
CookieFluffyFlareon wrote:Polar Kitten wrote:CookieFluffyFlareon wrote:Dakota was American, then she moved to Wolfia, but I have no idea what country Wolfia is based off though XD Ask Snowflakette.
I made up Wolfia. I didn't really base it off of anything, I just got a dog-related name (wolf) and added a suffix that a lot of countries use (ia) and turned it into a country. Make Wolfia however you want it, it's a big country and is different everywhere!
Ohhhh yeah.
Okay, cool

I thought Wolfia was Asia or America...
pretty much not alive here
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by Piefan » Sun Jun 14, 2015 1:00 am
Da Writing Dragon wrote:CookieLittleFlareon wrote:Ohhhh yeah.
Okay, cool :D
I thought Wolfia was Asia or America...
Looking through the Waffle, if Wolfia was based off either of those two at all, it'd be America.
@avatar korra
I'd say that if you have any inspiration at all for future Renee-related entries, you should just make a new thread. I haven't actually read the diary yet, though, lol.
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by momo0 » Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:49 pm
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I WOULD LIKE MY WORK IN THE LIBRARY!Username: momo0
Title: This is NOT a diary! It's a umm... Mongoose!
Link:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2717049Is it part of a series?
If yes, what are the sequels (and the links to those too, please)? No sequels yet.
Short Pitch: Persephone is no average wich.
She has always been interested in the normals and what they do.
But now, when she finally turns sixteen, she can explore the world of normals.
Will Prosephone revel that she is a wich and expose her world?
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by namjoon. » Sun Jun 14, 2015 1:56 pm
(Also, I'm imagining your parents' reaction to your first word. "Twenty thousand words she could have said... Several relating to her family... and she said cartoon. Why.")
Guess what, my youger sister's first word was.....
DUCK!
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by pinkgeneguy » Sun Jun 14, 2015 1:58 pm
Motego
It was actually "Remote Go"
Because we always lost the remote when I was younger
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