The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

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The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby Lemon Lime » Sun Jun 07, 2015 1:45 pm

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Hello! It's me, Red! I have failed constant attempts too make a story that people will read..
If you are reading this, OMG LIK YOR MAZIN LIK OMG I HOP YU LIK DIS OMG I FEL SU MUCH PRESSARE
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Anyway, I got this idea from storybird. The most genius writing website ever.
So, hope you like this, I'll try my best.

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Autumn has always wanted a more interesting life. That hope changed when she was in a forest with her friend, and found a magnifying glass that only she could use.


Chapter One

Autumn stared out her window. She just stared. Why go out and talk with her friends when there was nothing too talk about? What would she say? Oh guess what! My dad left for work and then.. And then came back!
"Autumn! Come down here! Someone wants too see you!" The voice rang around Autumn's plain red room. She snorted, whisking around towards her door.

Autumn padded down the stairs. Once again, plain old boring day. It was going too be her friend, Ash. She came everyday. Reaching the door, Autumn moaned.
"Hello, Ash."
"Come with me. I wanna talk." Ash smiled. Autumn moaned again, before grabbing her leather jacket, heading out, and closing the door behind her.

Ash and Autumn reached the forest at the end of their town. The sun was setting, and Autumn knew she'd have to go back soon.
"C'mon!" Ash called. Autumn had been so focused on the idea of leaving, that she didn't notice her friend continuing into the dense trees. She jogged over, and when the shrubbery covered the exit, she heard a whisper.
"Autumn. Come here Autumn." The voice sounded as if instead of the whistling breeze, it was there instead.
Both far and close...
"Who's there!" She screeched.
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Chapter Two

Postby Lemon Lime » Sun Jun 07, 2015 2:05 pm

Chapter Two
Autumn turned around constantly. She could have sworn that she heard a voice!
"Autumn, what are you doing!" Ash giggled. "The entire of Neorama can probably hear you!"
Autumn. Come here Autumn. We need you. Autumn heard the voice again. Maybe if she followed it, it would stop... No! How could she! She couldn't tell where it was coming from! Autumn felt her blonde hair almost bouncing from her pounding heart, as she motioned for Ash to follow, and guessed.

Autumn continued walking. The sun had set, and it had started raining. The voice had continued calling, and Autumn still got the creeps when it did. Every time, it added another sentence. The voice called again. Autumn. Come here Autumn. We need you. Come too find your destiny. We need you, Autumn. Autumn closed her eyes, and shook her head. She continued walking, and something caught her eye. There was a glimmering object on the ground. She looked over, and a magnifying glass lay in the mud.
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Re: The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby Lemon Lime » Tue Jun 09, 2015 9:56 am

Chapter Three

Autumn picked up the small magnifying glass. She held it to her eyes, and looked at Ash. A fox lay at her feet, looking up longingly. Autumn removed the glass, and it was gone. She put it back too her eye, and now the fox was whimpering at Ash. Please Autumn, Help Us. The fox was seriously asking her for help. Ash can't see it.. Autumn thought. She looked around, and saw an owl, perched on her shoulder.
"What are you doing Autumn?" Ash giggled. Autumn removed the magnifying glass and handed it to Ash.
"Look through this." She instructed. Ash raised one of her eyebrows, and put the glass on her eyes.
"Ohhh. Cooool. I can see things closer!" Ash teased. "What's so special about it?" She asked, removing the magnifying glass.
"Can't you see it?" Autumn asked, snagging it from Ash and putting it back on. She looked at the fox, still whining, and it shook its head. It doesn't work for her. She would've seen my owl if it did..
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Re: The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby areadbhar » Tue Jun 09, 2015 1:45 pm

Mark, great so far!
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Re: The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby Lemon Lime » Thu Jun 11, 2015 10:15 am

Chapter Four
Autumn picked up the magnifying glass again, and stuck it in her jacket pocket. She started walking, and Ash followed. She picked up the pace and Ash did also. She pushed through the layers and layers of green plants. The moon was shining overtop of her head, and she knew it was almost midnight. Autumn took the magnifying glass out of her pocket, and placed it to her eye. She didn't see what she expected. She saw herself, Ash, and two other people running into a bloody battle. She couldn't take the magnifying glass of though. She just couldn't. Autumn was being followed by her owl, and Ash was being followed by her fox. The only difference about them, was that Ash seemed too see it. The people were two boys, about her age. They were followed by a wolf, and a falcon. They hit the battle, and the vision ended. She tore the glass of, and started panting. She suddenly forgot about Ash, and bolted out if the forest.
"Autumn! Wait!"
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Re: The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby Lemon Lime » Fri Jun 12, 2015 1:21 pm

Chapter Five
Autumn tore through the streets. She stumbled over curbs. She kicked up dust, until finally she reached her house. Autumn tried opening the door, it was locked. She banged on the door, more and more, and the wave of chill swept over her. She shivered and stopped pounding. Autumn's eyesight flickered for a moment, and she almost thought she was about to faint. Then, at the corner of her eye, was her owl. It was hooting into a window, and tapping.
"John! Can you see what's doing that?" Autumn faintly heard her mom. Her dad cursed, and looked out the window.
"There's nothi.... Autumn!" He came down, and opened the door, letting Autumn in. "We thought you were already in bed!" Her mom came down and nodded, racing over too give their daughter a hug. The living room was lit by a hanging lantern on the roof, that only supported light when it was dark out. Autumn stuffed the magnifying glass further into her jacket pocket as her parents led her upstairs.
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Re: The Magnifying Glass (Maybe Give Me A Chance And Read?)

Postby Lemon Lime » Sun Jun 21, 2015 5:09 am

Chapter Six
Autumn woke up the next morning. She sat up, stretched, and saw the magnifying glass. She stumbled over, and picked it up. She put it to her eye, and saw her owl, sleeping on her bed. She sighed and stuck the magnifying glass back in her pocket.
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