Kiana's Notebook -OLD-

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

How would you feel if I restarted the Notebook?

Don't restart the notebook
1
25%
Wait you're restarting the notebook?
1
25%
I don't care.
1
25%
YES RESTART!
1
25%
 
Total votes : 4

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Tue May 19, 2015 4:11 pm

((Note: This post may have a little bit of creepypasta (Creepyness). Not a lot, but a little bit. There may also be some blood))
(I used http://minecraft.gamepedia.com/ as a refrence for this post.)

Me; So... the Rock Tree... right? What could they possibly mean? //le gasp//
Darhk: //facepaw// Well certainly not a tree made out of rock!
Bone raced ahead and started barking frantically.
Me; What's the matter Bone?
A little pink dog wearing a green frog hat materialized from the shadows.
???; This way. We've been expecting you.
Me; I'm sorry could you speak u-
Darhk elbowed me and I growled at him. The dog stared at us with her unnaturally dark eyes, then turned and vanished into the shadows. Me and Darhk exchanged a look, then followed her.
The little dog led us to the base of a large oak tree, and disappeared into the hill underneath it. Looking closer, I could see a door cleverly hidden into the base of the small hill.
Darhk: I guess it wasn't a tree made of rock... Now I'm disappointed...
I cautiously opened the door and peered inside. The cave was in complete shadow, and I half-expected Freddy to jump out and stuff me in a suit. Sighing in relief when no Freddy appeared, I placed a paw inside the cave.
???; Who goes there?
Me; Your worst nightmare.
A torch flickered to life and three dogs emerged from the darkness.
??; I'm BB. Beast Boy.
I gasped.
Me; You mean Beast Boy from Teen Titans?! I'm honored to meet you! Can I shake your paw?
BB; No I- //facepaw// I'm a mod created by one of Minecraft's old artists, Dock. I'm a knock-off of Beast Boy.
???; I'm Rana.
Herobrine: And you already know me. Welcome to the Glitches' home.

Image

Image
──────────────────────
Crow | Aubade | Green | Ki
─────────
Obsessive worldbuilders,
enjoyers of speculative fiction
and stories about apocalypses.

─────────
ImageImageImage
──────────────────────
Image
User avatar
Archaeopteryx.
 
Posts: 4106
Joined: Wed May 16, 2012 2:16 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Thu May 21, 2015 7:20 am

Me; So why do you want to help us? And how long is it going to take? If I'm away for a month, my mom's going to get suspicious....
I looked over at Darhk. He stared at the campfire in front of us and didn't say anything. What was up?
Rana: Well... one hour in your time equals three days here.
Me; And since my sister went to a sleepover for the night.. and my mom went shopping and to meet up with her friend... We have about four hours; and twelve days here... We can do it!
Me; So... why do you guys want to help us?

I purposely looked over at Hero. He growled and looked away, a slight blush on his cheeks. Ahh. That makes sense.
Hero: T-they're forcing me. Nothing more.
BB; Here's the thing... we aren't allowed to help much. Otherwise you'll be stuck here forever. This isn't even the world you're supposed to find the diamonds in.
Me; Waait... how much are you able to help?
BB; We can only point you in the general direction of diamonds. And give you one thing each. So choose.
He laid out five items, a black sword, an egg, a compass, a purple sword, and a purple bow and arrows.
I picked up the egg to admire it.
Me; What's this?
BB; It's a-
Hero: -Figure it out.
Me; I'll take the egg.
Darhk: And I'll take the purple sword.
I sat back and stared at the egg. Then something came to me. BB said that this wasn't the world we were supposed to find diamonds at. What did that mean?
Me; Wait.. this isn't the world we're supposed to find diamonds?
BB; Well-
Hero: Do you ever shut up?
Me: No, actually. What about you?
BB cleared his throat and Hero and I broke eye contact.
BB: This isn't an actual world. Think of it as "a map between maps." Glitches, and unused mobs make their homes here. We can access any map, any server, from here.
Me; Well, I think we're ready. Let's get this over with.
BB; Okay, we will send you on your way. Hero will watch you, make sure you don't get into trouble.
Hero; Wait, What?!
Me; Oh dog. This is going to be a long 12 days/hour.

Image

Image
──────────────────────
Crow | Aubade | Green | Ki
─────────
Obsessive worldbuilders,
enjoyers of speculative fiction
and stories about apocalypses.

─────────
ImageImageImage
──────────────────────
Image
User avatar
Archaeopteryx.
 
Posts: 4106
Joined: Wed May 16, 2012 2:16 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Thu May 21, 2015 8:42 am

I did first post in fan club o3o first of millions~ can't wait for more ^-^
''Cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck''
Female / Middle school / Computer artist
▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
Hey there, I'm BlondeChick! Just the average dirty
blond doing what blonde's do best ^v^ I'm pretty
busy so I won't be able to get on the computer
much to draw, but I will be on a mobile phone
alot so I will be replying to trades/PM's :>


My characters......link ...... link .......link

pixel......................pixel......................pixel.....................

▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
xxxTo do list
[x] Make 3 cycats
[] Finish entry for cycat #50
[] Finish 'My characters' page
[] Make 'My cycats' page
[] Do pixels for siggy

Image


























User avatar
BlondeChick
 
Posts: 785
Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:10 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Cloudflame » Thu May 21, 2015 9:45 am

Me neither! (Darn grammar)
User avatar
Cloudflame
 
Posts: 1910
Joined: Mon Apr 06, 2015 11:57 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Wed May 27, 2015 8:58 am

Not meaning to be pushy,but when is the next page? I'm dying to find out what's next ;u;
''Cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck''
Female / Middle school / Computer artist
▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
Hey there, I'm BlondeChick! Just the average dirty
blond doing what blonde's do best ^v^ I'm pretty
busy so I won't be able to get on the computer
much to draw, but I will be on a mobile phone
alot so I will be replying to trades/PM's :>


My characters......link ...... link .......link

pixel......................pixel......................pixel.....................

▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
xxxTo do list
[x] Make 3 cycats
[] Finish entry for cycat #50
[] Finish 'My characters' page
[] Make 'My cycats' page
[] Do pixels for siggy

Image


























User avatar
BlondeChick
 
Posts: 785
Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:10 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Wed May 27, 2015 10:06 am

Kova wrote:Not meaning to be pushy,but when is the next page? I'm dying to find out what's next ;u;

Sorry its taking so long... -_- I'm experiencing writers block...
I'm working on the next post but its taking so longgg

Image

Image
──────────────────────
Crow | Aubade | Green | Ki
─────────
Obsessive worldbuilders,
enjoyers of speculative fiction
and stories about apocalypses.

─────────
ImageImageImage
──────────────────────
Image
User avatar
Archaeopteryx.
 
Posts: 4106
Joined: Wed May 16, 2012 2:16 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Wed May 27, 2015 10:07 am

Tanglepath06 wrote:
Kova wrote:Not meaning to be pushy,but when is the next page? I'm dying to find out what's next ;u;

Sorry its taking so long... -_- I'm experiencing writers block...
I'm working on the next post but its taking so longgg

It's alright ouo It help's if you look around at other diaries.
''Cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck''
Female / Middle school / Computer artist
▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
Hey there, I'm BlondeChick! Just the average dirty
blond doing what blonde's do best ^v^ I'm pretty
busy so I won't be able to get on the computer
much to draw, but I will be on a mobile phone
alot so I will be replying to trades/PM's :>


My characters......link ...... link .......link

pixel......................pixel......................pixel.....................

▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
xxxTo do list
[x] Make 3 cycats
[] Finish entry for cycat #50
[] Finish 'My characters' page
[] Make 'My cycats' page
[] Do pixels for siggy

Image


























User avatar
BlondeChick
 
Posts: 785
Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:10 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Wed May 27, 2015 2:47 pm

This time, we spawned in a snowy forest instead of a nice, ordinary, NOT FREEZING FOREST. And of course, Herobrine was probably stalking us. -_- Really?
Darhk: Okay, so first things first- make a shelter.
I nodded.
Me; Let's just pretend we're playing a normal game of Minecraft!
Darhk: Okay, so this time I'll get the wood. You hollow out a hill for our "home."
I snapped to attention.
Me; Sir! Yes sir!
Darhk rolled his eyes and wandered off to the nearest tree.
I took a look around, almost freezing. Yep. Okay, so make a shelter. So I don't freeze to death. I got this.
I noticed a little hill kinda close to where Darhk was smacking the trees, (ow) and wandered over there to get a closer look. It was little, but hey, we're only planning to stay for two weeks.
:shock: It sounds longer when I say it like that.
Okay.
I started to smack the dirt with my paw, only pausing when I hit stone. Then I just wandered over to Darhk and stole all his wood.
Darhk: Hey!
Me; What? :D What did I do?
I made a wooden pickaxe and started mining the stone.
Darhk stared at me. I smiled back.
Me; Need the stonee.
Darhk; :shock: O-okay then....
I created a nice little hollow in the hill and crafted a door.
Me; Aaand I'm done!
Darhk: (Muffled) Kiana could you open the door? -_-
Me; Oops sorry! :D
I opened the door and Darhk walked in. I placed the crafting table close to the door and crafted a furnace. I placed some wood in the furnace and watched as the light from the furnace lit up the whole "room." I sighed in content.
Me; It's so warmmm
Darhk sat down next to me and put his arm around my shoulders. I blushed.
The light from the furnace went out and I leaped up, grateful for the distraction. I pulled the charcoal out of the furnace and crafted some torches, which I placed around the room.
Darhk: Waait how did you get coal?
Me; Charcoal. I was bored so I looked up pretty much everything on Minecraft. Apparently if you place "cook" wood in a furnace it makes charcoal, which you can use as coal. :lol: Aren't I clever?
Herobrine: No.
Yep. He's stalking us. .___. How annoying.
Me; Okay, so let's go over our battle plan.
Darhk and Herobrine: Battle plan?
Me; Hey! When I write your two colors it looks like Christmas!
Darhk: Get to the point... -_-
Me; okay so... If an hour equals three full Minecraft days/nights, if we get a bed one hour will equal six days, right? Because we'll be sleeping through half a cycle. So, our top priority is-
Herobrine; //yawn//
Me; :evil: -is to find six sheep to craft two beds.
Darhk: Isn't our top priority to find diamonds?
Me; That too.
So notebook- I guess I don't have that much time to write in you right now. I'll do a quick summary of every day but I'm not going to carry you around. I guess I'll see you later!
(Don't worry- you'll still be able to read what happens. I'm just going to write in a mix of third and first person views (Credit to Spade-Studio and Kova and several others for this idea.))
Author: I'm so sorry this took so long! But I can announce the demon's new name! His name is Itzal!
Author: And there's a new poll up.

Image

Image
──────────────────────
Crow | Aubade | Green | Ki
─────────
Obsessive worldbuilders,
enjoyers of speculative fiction
and stories about apocalypses.

─────────
ImageImageImage
──────────────────────
Image
User avatar
Archaeopteryx.
 
Posts: 4106
Joined: Wed May 16, 2012 2:16 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Thu May 28, 2015 2:35 am

"it looks like Christmas!" You keep me forever smiling with this. :mrgreen:
''Cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck cluck''
Female / Middle school / Computer artist
▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
Hey there, I'm BlondeChick! Just the average dirty
blond doing what blonde's do best ^v^ I'm pretty
busy so I won't be able to get on the computer
much to draw, but I will be on a mobile phone
alot so I will be replying to trades/PM's :>


My characters......link ...... link .......link

pixel......................pixel......................pixel.....................

▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪ ▪
xxxTo do list
[x] Make 3 cycats
[] Finish entry for cycat #50
[] Finish 'My characters' page
[] Make 'My cycats' page
[] Do pixels for siggy

Image


























User avatar
BlondeChick
 
Posts: 785
Joined: Sat Mar 14, 2015 3:10 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Wolf In The Shadows » Thu May 28, 2015 1:36 pm

Really good notebook so far!! I love the story!
NOT ACTIVE ACCOUNT

MOVED TO SMALL ART WOLF
User avatar
Wolf In The Shadows
 
Posts: 1425
Joined: Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:59 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazonbot [Bot] and 4 guests