❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) completed

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Cute? :3

boring...
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omg so pretty and yesssssss
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asl;djkldsklaj; YES.
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eh
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HAHA NOPE
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Thu May 21, 2015 11:09 am

      ehehhheh
      casssiiiii <33333
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby casimir » Thu May 21, 2015 11:33 am

      you should do me a favor and try and publish this c:
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Postby noal » Thu May 21, 2015 11:57 am

YES! listen to Casimir!
this should be published
and distributed farther
than the CS community
and even if you cant do
that, it's still amazing! c:
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby casimir » Thu May 21, 2015 12:02 pm

      oooh put it on figment.com and wattpad
      i bet deviantart would be a good idea too.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Thu May 21, 2015 8:26 pm

      oooo publishing???
      dun know about that o.o
      I'll put it on wattpad tho eheh
      but it makes me super duper happy that you guys think it could be published <33
      thank you~
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) careful

Postby Asherwy » Sun May 24, 2015 6:36 am

five. careful
OCTOBER (( LARK ))


Demure raindrops pattered modestly, harmonising against the colourful, decorated stone that surrounded
the poolside, coalescing into transparent puddles within shallow dips of the uneven ground. The naked
slap of bare feet tapping on wet stone mingled pacifically with the drizzling rain as my classmates made
their way to the storage room on the other side of the complex, intent on retrieving their kayaks. My
GCSE physical education class was currently in the middle of our kayaking unit as of late, and it was always
such a bother to haul those ponderous canoes off their metal racks. It was especially difficult for me, as
I always ended up being forced to pull down my kayak on one of the higher shelves with my pitiful height.
I stopped in front of the storage room entrance and held the door as my classmates filed out, each carrying
a kayak between two. Unlike my english class, the people in my PE class were much livelier, offering
vibrant words of gratitude to me as they passed. While the last few students hurried out, my eyes drifted
over to Joseph, one of the few friends I have in this class whom I would partner up with during group
activities.

"Lark, over here."

Joseph's voice was relaxed and loose, yet filled with a sunny exuberance that I had never found in any
other person. His hair was an umber brown, curly and fleecy on his scalp, occasionally falling onto his
equally coloured irises that gazed at everything without a speck of judgement hiding behind those dark
pupils. Nodding, I trotted over to him and smoothened my rash vest before raising my arms, ready to
support the hull of the boat while Joseph dragged it down. The taupe-haired boy didn't appear at the
pool entrance yet. Just as he was late to leave, he was late to arrive. Absent-mindedly, I wondered what
he could possibly be doing during the time he took to get here. Messing around in the changing rooms?
Forgetting to check the clock? I couldn't even begin to fathom what sort of idiocy he performed in the
course of his free time. A panicked cry of warning leapt out of Joseph's throat, fracturing my thoughts
and shattering them into dissolving fragments as I was wrenched back to reality. A threatening shadow
leaned over my eyes just as I realised that the kayak had tipped the wrong way, dodging my fingers by
an inch and plunging towards my face. On reflex, I switched the position of my hands in the split-second
I noticed the problem, managing to grasp the cockpit of the kayak. Unfortunately it was more hefty that
what I had estimated and I fumbled with the grip, the canoe eventually slipping out of my clutches. I
prepared myself for excruciating pain until an abrupt movement caught my eye, a tanned hand darting
out from beside me and clasping the kayak before it dropped.

"You okay?"

The familiar brazen voice of raw bronze resonated like a sweet, satin breeze, circling around me with
gentle concern. Warily, I dragged my eyes across to face the boy, stalling until the last possible moment
to make eye contact. His inky gaze sent a piercing jolt throughout my body, paralysing my heart for only
a moment as he slowly placed the boat on the ground and glanced at me anxiously. My mind was
discombobulated and disturbed; I hadn't the slightest clue of what to think. Not a single soul has ever
done this to me before, nor has anyone extricated me from a falling kayak. My cheeks felt hot, so I turned
away, hastily reaching for the handle and lifting it up.

"Thanks."

I muttered brusquely, desperately avoiding his eyes. Joseph's bright voice chimed worriedly from the other
end of the kayak, inquiring if I was okay. I nodded curtly, adjusting my grip. Shuffling forwards, I motioned
for Joseph to hurry up, keen on letting the sound of rain silence my scrambled emotions. Joseph noticed
my zealous effort and contributed as well, striding through the door briskly while I followed him until I
was certain that the boy's gleaming eyes had vanished from my back.



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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby casimir » Sun May 24, 2015 12:42 pm

      ^ nuff said.
      well played, nan, well played
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Tue May 26, 2015 12:19 pm

      guys excuse my double post
      -ahem-
      would any of ya like some intense jealousy and drama crap or just moderate
      'cuz i need to decide
      ye
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