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omg so pretty and yesssssss
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asl;djkldsklaj; YES.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby arisyev » Tue May 19, 2015 2:39 am

        Forgive me, but I have no idea what a UTC+8 is.

        Alright, so I was at a friends house-who lives in
        the same neighborhood as myself-and we were
        watching 'Mr. Poppers Penguins.' I made a
        comment about when my guardians would get
        home and my friend said she just saw them pull
        into the driveway. I replied, "Oh, I'll just call them
        then." And I picked up my phone and pretended
        to be talking to my mother. I said this in a whisper
        voice: "Hello, yes, I just saw you pull into the
        driveway." And my friend said, "Stalker much?"
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Tue May 19, 2015 12:25 pm

      'tis a timezone bud

      haha gotta love coincidences
      that's really funny x3
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby casimir » Tue May 19, 2015 12:34 pm

      -twitching violently-
      ...
      more.
      now.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Tue May 19, 2015 4:02 pm

      shhh little one
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby SunsetPatches » Tue May 19, 2015 11:57 pm

>> can i just say i adore this so far uvu
the imagery and deliberate pacing of this is just wonderful.
if you need anyone to beta/crit/edit this for you, i'd definitely be interested :3
(i'll be stalking in any case c;)
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) questions

Postby Asherwy » Wed May 20, 2015 2:34 am

four. questions
SEPTEMBER (( CASE ))


"Case, Lark, you're up!"

Steadily, I heaved myself out of my seat, leisurely stretching my arms out behind me. Lark's movements
were inaudible to me, as she was always so obediently silent in whatever she did. Following behind her
delicate figure, a yawn escaped my mouth and I scratched the back of my head, drowsily ruffling my hair.
This inexorably received a whetted stare from the girl, in which I so gallantly returned with one of my
ostentatious grins. As expected, she presented no reaction or riposte, lucidly turning back to her computer
and inserting a wire to project her screen on the whiteboard. Despite the prevailing fact that most girls
tittered shyly at my smile, I was already accustomed to her lack of response during the past month of
perennially being ignored whenever I asked an inane question or verbalised a fatuous statement. In my
defence, I just simply could not help but wonder about the nonsensical fringe of things. Once everything
was set up and ready, Lark pressed play and the animation she had conjured appeared on the whiteboard,
accompanied with the song I had shown her just a week before. I smiled, concealing my expression as
frame after frame materialised and vanished on the screen, conscious of how much effort she had planted
into this endearing animation. Furtively sneaking a glance at my secluded companion, I found that she wasn't
even watching our presentation, instead she was staring fixedly out the window, her beautiful emerald eyes
twinkling in a way I had glimpsed only while she looked out that glassy aperture. Now that I closely
scrutinised her features showered in morning sunlight, I discovered that those cascading locks were multiple
shades of chamoisee and coffee brown, not just chocolate. I was intrigued by this new-found beauty, and
ended up gazing avidly at her for the remainder of the animation. Only the impatient shout from our teacher
jolted me back to my senses.

"Case! Do you mind explaining?"

I nodded sheepishly, inducing several chuckles and giggles from my classmates as I did so. Launching into
an explicit interpretation of the story, I thought how ironic it was that the person who didn't even finish
the book carried out the elucidation. Of course I had no other option, since Lark fabricated the animation
it was the least I could do. In addition, Lark was also exceptionally adamant about this decision. She was
most definitely unlike any female I've ever laid eyes upon. If I smiled, however distant they may be, they
would always grant me a smile in return. Lark never smiled at anyone, the closest I've seen her in the
vicinity of one was when she peered out the class window. I am unable to even comprehend whatever
prodigious entity out there causes that miracle on her face. This thought clung to me for the surplus of
english class. The teacher dismissed us and students clambered out the door, practically hurdling through
one another in order to acquire a head start at the canteen's lunch line. The rest of my classmates filed out
the entrance, gradually unveiling the patient shape of Lark's petite body. I can't decipher the reason why
she is so altruistic as to wait for me after every class, but one thing I am positive of is the unwavering
felicity I have during that time. Yet, I hankered to know why.

"Why do you wait for me?"

There was a fulgurate of bewilderment in her bewitching green gaze, a sight that I took great pleasure
in. A nice change from her perpetual impassive expression. That only lasted for a fleeting moment before
it was my turn to be flabbergasted. Lark's gaze softened, softened into an almost painful yet tender
illustration, immaculately embodied by her aesthetic appearance.

"Who knows?"



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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Wed May 20, 2015 9:51 pm

      @sunsetpatches - aaaahhhh thank you!!
      feel free to post your critique whenever you feel like it!
      I got way too much room for improvement ;w;
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Wed May 20, 2015 10:37 pm

      this so awesome
      And freaking cute
      <3333
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Wed May 20, 2015 11:01 pm

      thank you ;3
      not as cute as mine thooooooooooo~
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby casimir » Thu May 21, 2015 11:06 am

      eeheheheee
      asshhh <33333
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