This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

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Should I have a character clean out? (explained here)

No!
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Yes! (select an option below)
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Because I don't want a character (and I want to replace him/her with a new character)
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Because some people are taking up the character slots and they don't even read the Hawk
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Because I want character slots to be opened quicker (maybe because you want to insert a character)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Mon May 11, 2015 11:23 am

Exactly!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Mon May 11, 2015 1:06 pm

Hahahahahahaah
I just laughed much too hard for no reason XD
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Lightning Lord » Sat May 16, 2015 1:55 pm

I hope this keeps going...It's amazing
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sat May 16, 2015 10:20 pm

Please stop spamming... There's a fan club for that. (Check the front page.) Thanks!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun May 17, 2015 1:30 am

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Dear Hawk,

I found out that we were moving back to Furford - YES! I GET TO SEE EVERYONE AGAIN! Well, maybe I don't want to see Snowy... But I'll be missing the guys here as well. Well, I better get to bed now - Goodnight, Hawk.

Well, I'm waiting for Catnese class to start.... I'm early. Like for the first time. Still... :cry: I'll be leaving.... Is Music coming in? IS SHE STARING AT ME?!

Music: Skyler? Is that I diary? IF IT IS THEN-
Me: *Muffs Music's mouth* Ssssh! It's a Hawk! Anyways, you have a diary to? Don't you?

Well, I notice these things... Not my fault.... *shrug*

Music: Wha? How? It's a Dragon...Can I see the Hawk? Please?! *puppy dog eyes*

NOOOO. NOT THOSE EYES....

Me: *groan* Fine, you can write in it if you want to. But keep it short.

Well, I can't have all my pages used up because of her....

Music: Yeas! *grabs and starts reading intently*

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Hello Dragon I mean Hawk. Skyler let me write in her Dragon Hawk, and she's writing in mine.... She's leaving, and we'll miss her... I wonder how's Music going to get us together for another mission. Through another PawChat message? Skyler didn't seem surprised when I showed her the message... Well, she did tell me to make keep this short. Oh, well... Bye, Skyler...



Okay, I've got my Hawk back...

Music: I'll miss you. *Hugs* You miss out on camp, but you get to see everyone back at Furford.
Me: Thanks...

I'd hate to miss out on camp.... Maybe if I get the time and the energy maybe I can fly over and check out what's going on at the camp..... Well, I - :cry: - I'd have to pack up after this lesson. Bye, Music, and everyone else.... I'll be here if you call.... Bye.....

Seeing I'm going to waste a lot of paper if I don't use this page, I'm going to use this page. *sigh*
Okay. Now, I.... Well, it's the afternoon. And I'm at Furford. And I get to skip all my lessons for today because I have to pack up my stuff. So, I'm in my dorm.... Wait - Why do I see.... Colours? Swirls....

AHHHHHHHHH - OKAY, I'M FREAKING OUT. Something happened but I don't know what. Let me take a quick... selfie.... *takes deep breath*

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This. Is. Creepy. I don't know how I just changed my looks, like, just in a moment, but this is weird...... Wait - Do I hear something?

???: Do not worry. This is merely a disguise -
Me: WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?!!! WHAT -
???: *sigh* You will change back, do not worry. Your enemies have come to this school to hunt you down, in which -
Me: WHAT?! MY ENEMIES -
???: They are in disguise, just like you - but you will recognize them. However, if you follow my instructions -
Me: Who are you anyways? And are you talking about Shadow -
???: Silence. Do not speak of their names. I will reveal myself when time has come... But first, you must be sorted as a new dog.
Me: Gah! I'm tired of writing question marks - I'll call you 'Voice'.
Voice: Call me whatever you want for now. Don't let them catch you writing in your diary -
Me: IT'S NOT A DIARY! IT'S -
Voice: Leave this dorm. Now.
Me: I - Fine. *leaves dorm*

So really, the voice instructed me to walk through the school until I was very, very close to Snowy.

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Me: What -
Snowy: New student? Haven't seen you around. *snorts* And your fashion is like, terrible! But anyways, name and interests?
Me: I -
Voice: Say it. Your name is Azure Sapphire -
Me: Your name is Azure -
Snowy: I am Snowy! Not whatever you call me, you - thing! I am the most fashionable -
Voice: *groan* Say it! My name is Azure -
Me: Wait - So you're called Azure?
Snowy: No! I am Snowy, the great -
Voice: *facepaw* Your disguise name is Azure Sapphire. You -
Me: Ah! I get it! My -
Snowy: You talk to yourself? Geez, Em -
Me: IamAzureSapphireand -
Snowy: Wait - AZURE SAPPHIRE, THE DAUGHTER OF THE GREAT MOVIE STAR AVA SAPPHIRE? REALLY?
Me: Erm....
Voice: Yes.
Me: YES! I mean, yes.
Snowy: YOU'RE COMING TO POPULARS AT ONCE! AND TELL US ALL ABOUT THE MOVIES YOUR PARENTS - Oh, yeah - and can I, the great and beautiful Snowy, be part of a movie?
Me: Erm....
Voice: ....
Me: Tell me what to do!
Voice: .....
Me: Erm... Well, I have to ask Ava - I mean my mom, about you being in a movie - and about the movies.... Erm....
Snowy: You must tell me when we go to the mall! See you after school! *struts off*
Me: :shock: What did you just get me into?

Okay, this is seriously freaking me out. Oh -

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Me: *spots Fang* FANG -
Fang: Huh? What?
Creek: *whispers in ear* How does she know your name?
Fang: That's right! *turns to me* How do you know my -
Me: Oh, hi - Creek! Great to see you again! Miss -
Creek & Fang: :shock:
Me: Ah.... Never mind. *turns away and hurries off*
Voice: What are you doing?! You're not supposed to -
Me: Yeah, yeah. Whatever - *hears Snowy behind me* Huh?

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Snowy: Geez, you look like a weirdo! Like, so... dark. Name and interests - actually, I don't care, because you're Emos already. Go away!
???: I am... Shadowed Heart. I... My interests.... I would like to have my revenge on those pesky chosen ones. Bitewing is angry...
Snowy: :what: What? Oh, just go away, Emo kid.
Shadowed Heart (Okay, I get it, he's Shadowheart! Imagination, please... If you make up a name, make it different): Very well. *leaves*

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Snowy: Oh my gosh, you're like, the perfect jock! *flutters eyelashes* Name and interests?
???: *grins* Well, hi there, cutie! I'm, erm, Soul... stealer, eater, fleeter - Yeah, just Soul. And I like pretty girls, you know, like you, and of course -
Shadow: *cuts him off* Just shut your jaws! *grabs him by the tail and drags him away*
Snowy: *glares at Shadow* So, Soul, you're Jocks - and you, Shadow guy -
Shadow: *leaves, still dragging Soul along*

Okay, those guys are the 'enemies'. I thought the Voice said that they were in disguise -

Voice: Please do not write in your diary.
Me: It's not a diary, it's a Hawk! Why can't I -
Voice: *sighs* Just put it down -
Me: I -

Wait. Do I hear.... now, what? Another couple? Jewel and Tobias?

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Me: Je -
Voice: Please stop saying their names. You are not supposed to know their names.
Jewel: *still talking to Tobias* I heard that Azure, daughter of Ava Sapphire, just came to this school today! I wonder where's Skyler though... She was supposed to be back today, I heard.
Tobias: Yeah, me too.... You know, maybe the new girl Azure is Skyler?
Jewel: *chuckles* That would be as likely as Snowy moving Skyler up to Populars.

Well... You guys are mind readers or something? Because both of those things happened -

Voice: Just put down your diary. Now.

Well, I guess I do.... This voice is really starting to annoy me. Oh, well - see you later, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Sun May 17, 2015 4:21 am

XD That was really funny and amazing. I think I nearly lost my stomach for laughing so hard, but I did lose my butt. It really hurts, sitting without a butt because I laughed so hard it flew off








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby abxy » Sun May 17, 2015 4:57 am

I tried SO HARD not to laugh. I succeeded but it hurt to not laugh
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Toy Dragon » Sun May 17, 2015 10:21 am

20lait1 wrote:Please stop spamming... There's a fan club for that. (Check the front page.) Thanks!

This is annoying me -_-
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Sun May 17, 2015 11:15 am

Well, I thought she would appreciate the encouragement after writing a chapter right there instead of having to go all the way to her fanclub. If that isn't respected here, then neither is my presence.








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun May 17, 2015 2:10 pm

Actually, I do enjoy people here chatting about the Hawk, but don't take it too far. Some readers may not like all the spam.. I hope people do not quit reading this because if I ask people not to spam, some people may get insulted. If I don't, some people may not like all the talking going on... What to choose....
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