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Sent my best work I can do in my current positions.
Good luck to everyone else entering.
Lord Xerberus wrote:Just wanting to slip in and announce that my Shawn and The Pirate Dragon's Felix are officially dating!! ;v;
I've been wanting to find her someone that clicked for awhile now, so I'm really glad that they're together ;v;
Offering form critique for a form critique
hey so you know how unnecessarily detailed I get with my plumies pasts/characters and such? gw, that passes over to how i analyze forms too. so if you want a very detailed, analytically run down of your form which will include;
1) what i think you so add
2) what i think isn't needed
3) what i like
4) what doesn't look right
5) grammatical errors if i find them
6) anything else i feel the need to bring to your attention
the only thing i ask in return is the same for me, although you don't have to follow my checklist or w/e by any means. :^) it's no bother to me at all, i will not be offended in any way shape or form, critiques really help me progress with the character and they majorly help me.
basically what i'm looking for in return is more than "it looks cool" and i'll be satisfied. please PM me if you're willing to do so !!
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