[Wind Mage]

I literally didn't get a wink of sleep last night, so I drew an attractive dragon to cheer myself up..
Seriously though, is my art intermediate worthy?? (AKA, please critique me)

EDIT: ((Turns out I don't have pen-pressure, so... huh, I guess only on SAI XD))

Thank you, DoctorDraca, for redlining it for me ^^" Collarbones suck.
Anyway, added some nicer hair, and an extra set of horns, BC Alduin.
If you guys wanna see the older version, it's here: xXx

I might actually come back to this again later, who knows...

-DT

[OutdatedBoombox]

I think the neck is too long and thick in proportion to the head and the shoulders are a bit broad. The collarbone is far to high up(it's on the neck instead of the chest)

[Wind Mage]

yeah, the head is covered by some hair,

and I didn't even notice the friggin collarbone.

I'm gonna go fix that now
because it will bug me forever if I don't
don't let me sketch with no sleep please

EDIT: K so It's all just covered by this hair, which I made the same colour as the BG, so yeh, his proportions are fine under all that darn hair. Ugh. Thanks, still xD

And thank you for the critique! n_n

[DoctorDraca]

Alduin? As in the world eater?
Neato!

I certainly think this is intermediate worthy if you fixed up the anatomy a little. If you want to can give you some redlines? I'm fairly decent with shoulders and collar bones and all that good stuff.

Also, do you have pen pressure? Because that might help you a great deal.

[Wind Mage]

yeah, the world eater. I like him. ^^"

You can redline it if you want, but again, most of the shoulders just got covered by the hair, but I can add you, yeah. OvO
I think the hair layer is 13, if you wanna see the shoulders
(I don't name my layers, sorry)

Oh, honestly this was just a simple drawing because I wasn't feeling 100%. I used the little scroll-y thing on the laptop, tbh. I think I have pen pressure on my main computer, but I'm not sure...

[DoctorDraca]

Oh, yeah, seeing the shoulders beneath the hair may be useful and I can adjust my critique to that.

You used the track pad on a laptop? Wow, kudos to you! If I had to do that I'd end up with my fist through my laptop while sobbing grossly. So wowie, that's neat! I never said the art was bad, I certainly didn't mean it that way. It's super lovely, in fact.

I'll PM the redline to reduce clutter. c:

[Wind Mage]

Oh what? Did my art post make it sound like I was offended? I'm sorry! I was trying not to use to many emotions xD I guess I learned my lesson

I'll add you now, than ^^

And thank you :D

NOTE: the head was never finished, because I screwed up on it, so.. just pay attention to the shoulders, and not the failure head thing xD

[Wind Mage]

kk there I hope it looks somewhat better xD

[DoctorDraca]

It looks amazing!

[Wind Mage]

Ahh! Thank you!