The gods have blessed me with more amazing gift art from my bae Kyo

ricecatkyo is a giant nerd who needs all the hugs yes
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Anyway, so I'm finishing up my last critique right now, but I'm still offering a full critique for one in return !!
Offering form critique for a form critique
hey so you know how unnecessarily detailed I get with my plumies pasts/characters and such? gw, that passes over to how i analyze forms too. so if you want a very detailed, analytically run down of your form which will include;
1) what i think you so add
2) what i think isn't needed
3) what i like
4) what doesn't look right
5) grammatical errors if i find them
6) anything else i feel the need to bring to your attention
the only thing i ask in return is the same for me, although you don't have to follow my checklist or w/e by any means. :^) it's no bother to me at all, i will not be offended in any way shape or form, critiques really help me progress with the character and they majorly help me.
basically what i'm looking for in return is more than "it looks cool" and i'll be satisfied. please PM me if you're willing to do so !!
seriously i never get insulted by form critiques and i'm most likely going to take your advice, it really, realllllyy helps me.
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I would also appreciate it if you asked my try out character questions here
the weirder, the better. i really don't like questions that are just general like "what's your goal in life" or "who's your favorite family member?" because the answers are boring to read, she's developed enough to have more than one answer for that, and it's most likely already answered in my form. weird questions are fun because they show more of her personality, and it's a lot more fun to read.