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emotions. { a treasury of writings }

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 9:55 am

emotion.

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this collection of odds and ends details the fascination i have with human emotions.
from anger, loneliness, or happiness, you're likely to find something here that describes what you are feeling.

includes . . .

anger disgust fear happiness loneliness love

a few emotions commonly found within your mind.
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loneliness . . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 9:59 am

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loneliness.

The long snout of an animal rested on a smooth, ridged carpet of pine needles, it’s body pressed against the cold, damp forest floor, it’s long tail beating upon the surface of the earth rhythmically, churning up swirling clusters of thick dust. A long pitiful whine escaped its jaws, boredom and desperation mixing around in the depths of it’s mind.

But apart from all of the sorrowful emotions building up inside of it…

There was loneliness.

The true feelings of being completely alone settled heavily on its shoulders, the weight of it all squeezing a lonesome sounding howl out away from its heavy jaws.

This creature had never before been faced with such a heavy hue of loneliness, always had something, something to think about, look forward to, but now…

There was nothing.

Nothing pressed down upon its body, suffocating it, and amid all of its lonely sorrow, it wondered how nothing could weigh so much and be so painful.
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anger. . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 10:00 am

{ anger here }
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happiness . . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 10:00 am

{ happiness here }
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fear . . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 10:00 am

{ fear here }
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love . . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 10:01 am

{ love here }
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disgust . . .

Postby aurora. » Mon May 04, 2015 10:01 am

{ disgust here }
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open for commentary, suggestions, etc.

Postby aurora. » Tue May 05, 2015 10:14 am

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Re: emotions. { a treasury of writings }

Postby aurora. » Wed May 06, 2015 7:16 am

bump.
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Re: emotions. { a treasury of writings }

Postby star star. » Wed May 06, 2015 12:03 pm

    this is pretty cool so far ^^
    just a little grammar tip-
    "it's" is the conjunction of "it is".
    "its" the possessive of an object. just pointing that out, you made that mistake twice in "loneliness" ^^





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