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Postby paradise, » Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:15 pm

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                hey guys, hoofy here c: i am entering delcie & captain's 1oo scene challenge because i love writing, and i thought it would be a fun experience for me. please, i am asking nicely, do not post. it will keep things less cluttered and more organized for me. but, feel free to bookmark it and don't be afraid to give me advice, i will take it happily. wish me luck all of you readers! c: i will be using two main characters in this 1oo scene challenge, kylie jade rose + dylan asher parker. their forms will be put op on the next post. they are will be a couple later on, this is kind of like a story, it will go in order from their first meet. i will strike the scene once i finish it.

                “Little by little, day by day, okay?” // “Get. Off. Right now.” // “... That’s it.” // “So, uh, we should… probably run now.” // “You’re insane! I love it.” // “Hey, I offered to help you.” // “Who’s laughing now?” // “Would you please just be quiet?”// Whoa, buttercup, whoa.” // "I can’t believe you talked me into this." // “Marry me?”// “Hey! I was gonna drink that!” // “You did all of this for me?” // “This isn't over.” //“If you die, I’m gonna kill you.” // “Well, this is awkward.” // “It was you who was standing there.” // “That is the stupidest idea you’ve ever had. Of course I’m in.”// “Hey, I’m with you, okay? Always.” // “Uh, she’s gunna punch you, man.” // “BAHAHAHA- ahem.”// “I think I am concussed.” // “You have got to be kidding me.” // “This ain’t that kind of movie.” // “Is it… dead?” // “I’ll just sit here and wait for you to be finished.” // “You wound me.” // “Trust you? PAH.” // “I don’t know who you are.” // “It’s okay. I promise. I’m here.” // “Oh, this is going to be good.” // “Well, I finally got your attention.” // “Like a hole in the head.”// “I'm... okay.” // “Well, are you coming?” // “Where are your pants!?” // “Help me push it.” // “It’s almost midnight, no way!” // “Positively smashing.” // “Don’t let go, okay?” // “You can’t leave me like this.” // “Say that to my mother.” // “Sing me a lullaby, please?” // “This hurts worse than I thought it would.” // “Hah! - oh, wait, you’re serious?” // “As much as I’d enjoy that…” // -gasp- “The plague!” “No!” “YES.” // “I won’t let you do this.” // “I’ve still got it.” // “I can’t do it. I just can’t.” // "Don’t you ever do that again!" // “I thought I lost you.” // "Teach me?" // "Don’t you dare throw that snowball-" // "It could be worse." // "We’re in the middle of a thunderstorm and you wanna stop and feel the rain?" // "I’ve seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice." // "What are you so afraid of?” // “How did you get that scar?” // “You said WHAT?” // “Can you stop bringing that up?” // “Wait for me!” // “We’ll be dead by morning.” // “STOP TALKING.” // “I do.” // “I don’t want to.” // “What did I ever do to you?!” // “Follow me.” // -SIGH- “I can’t reach it.” // “What are you waiting for?” // “WAIT NO THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT-” // “I don’t need you.” // “You deserve better.” // “If you love something, let it go.” // “Why do I have to wear this?” // “Here goes nothing.” // “Where the heck were you?!” // “I don’t need help.” // “We’re gonna be parents…” // “I didn’t think you knew.” // “I thought those were poisonous.” // “Don’t make me go alone.” // “I’m sorry… I didn’t know.” // “I’d be lost without you.” // “Just leave me!” // “I dare you to…” // “Run!” // “How did you manage that?” // “Liar!” // “I don’t even want to be here.” // “Oh crap, we fell asleep!” // “Is this the life you wanted?” // “GIVE ME THAT.” // “Get back here!” // “Let go of me!” // “I’ll just follow you.” // “YOU DON’T SAY.” // “And yet, you love me anyway.” // “I just thought I’d have a swim.” // “Don’t cry.”
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kylie jade rose

Postby paradise, » Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:18 pm

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    B ᴀ s ɪ ᴄ s
    name; kylie jade rose
    nickname; ky
    age; seventeen years
    gender; female
    birthday; july seventh


    R ᴇ ʟ ᴀ ᴛ ɪ ᴏ ɴ s ʜ ɪ ᴘ s
    crush; none
    boyfriend; none
    father; marcus anderson
    mother; lilly rose
    siblings; brother
    friends; tbd
    enemies; tbd


    P ᴇ ʀ s ᴏ ɴ ᴀ ʟ ɪ ᴛ ʏ
    good traits; shy, cheerful, smart
    neutral traits; playful, teasing, fun
    bad traits; skittish, hot-headed, sarcastic
    strengths; drawing, singing
    weaknesses; keeping her cool, dancing
    first impression; innocent, quiet, shy
    fears; being kidnapped, spiders
    habits; twirling her hair around her finger, biting her lip


    A ᴘ ᴘ ᴇ ᴀ ʀ ᴀ ɴ ᴄ ᴇ
    build; thin, fit
    height; five foot seven
    weight; one hundred and fifteen pounds
    eye color; bluish grey
    hair color; blonde [ranges from light to medium]
    face shape; heart shaped
    modifications; ear piercings and belly piercing





















H ɪ s ᴛ ᴏ ʀ ʏ
kylie jade rose was born in the city of las vegas, a popular state. she and her parents lived in a rather small apartment, just the three of them. at the age of four, kylie's father started cheating on her mother. this went on for a couple of years, until her mom found out. by this time ky was now eight years old, and her father was rarely around. her mother became depressed and was too afraid to confront her boyfriend about it, so it continued. kylie didn't know why her father wasn't around, and she never had the guts to ask her mom about it.

becoming more and more depressed, her mother turned to drugs. she became addicted and never had time for kylie anymore. at age eleven, her father finally was around more and her mom stopped doing drugs. kylie thought things were starting to get better. boy was she wrong. the reason her mother stopped was because her father found out and started abusing her mother. it kept getting worse and worse, and kylie didn't know what to do about it. now, kylie was fifteen when her mother died. the cause of her death was unknown, but kylie knew her father had done it. they had gotten into a huge fight the night before and kylie had seen blood on the floor the next morning. kylie was scared, would her father now abuse her?

her father took her and they moved to utah, he said they needed a new life. but kylie didn't want to be with her father, she was afraid of him. her dad drank all of the time, and often brought his guy friends home. they started to harass kylie and her father just laughed about it. so kylie turned to the next best thing, a boyfriend. he was the worst of the worst, but at least her cared about her. after a year of dating, he showed kylie some drugs, and they started doing it together. when he was high, he tended to hit kylie and scream nasty things at her. she became afraid of her boyfriend as well, no man in her life was good. so, at the age of eighteen, she left home and her terrible boyfriend. she wanted a new life, and she rented an apartment in la with her brother, once again. she is still depressed and does drugs at times, but is trying to get better. she worries about the day her boyfriend might find her, she hopes that day never comes.
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dylan asher parker

Postby paradise, » Tue Apr 28, 2015 2:48 am

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    B ᴀ s ɪ ᴄ s
    name; dylan asher parker
    nickname; ash
    age; eighteen years
    gender; male
    birthday; september twenty-third


    R ᴇ ʟ ᴀ ᴛ ɪ ᴏ ɴ s ʜ ɪ ᴘ s
    crush; none
    girlfriend; none
    father; unknown
    mother; jess parker
    siblings; sister
    friends; tbd
    enemies; tbd


    P ᴇ ʀ s ᴏ ɴ ᴀ ʟ ɪ ᴛ ʏ
    good traits; humorous, secretly caring, outgoing
    neutral traits; teasing, skeptical, can be romantic
    bad traits; rebellious, player, easily angered
    strengths; taking to anyone, skilled fighter
    weaknesses; is attracted to too many girls
    first impression; bad boy, doesn't care, cocky
    fears; falling in love [cheesy i know cx]
    habits; running a hand through his hair


    A ᴘ ᴘ ᴇ ᴀ ʀ ᴀ ɴ ᴄ ᴇ
    build; fit, some muscles
    height; six foot two
    weight; one hundred and seventy pounds
    eye color; dark brown
    hair color; really dark brown [sometimes looks black]
    face shape; chiseled features
    modifications; lip ring





















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Postby paradise, » Tue Apr 28, 2015 3:08 am

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daniella [danny] - kylie's best friend

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mikayla - kylie's best friend

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aiden - dylan's friend

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tyler - kylie's brother


[might add more later.]
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first scene - you have got to be kidding me

Postby paradise, » Tue Apr 28, 2015 5:17 pm

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          finally, the long year was over, it was summer. i slowly stretched as i sat up in my bed, a rush of cold air hitting me in the face. grumbling about the air conditioner, i reached over blindly, looking for my phone. while i was looking for my phone, my hand smashed into my nightstand, making me yelp slightly. "stupid table." i muttered, finally grabbing my phone and turning it on. today, me and my two best friends, danny and mikayla were going to the mall, call it cliche or whatever. i groaned as my moron of a brother started to yell at me, "kylie! ky! KYLIE!" i rolled my bluish grey eyes, my brother was such a pain in the you know what. "would you shut up already!" i yelled back, sliding out of my bed. i think i could hear him smirking as he spoke, "oh, well come downstairs as fast as you can!" yeah, ok. can you hear the sarcasm? i walked into my bathroom, hopping into the shower, quickly scrubbing off last night's makeup. after i was finished, i started to straighten my blonde hair which currently looked like a tangled mess. i applied some makeup and walked out of my bathroom, towel wrapped tightly around my small body. my brother always liked to pull pranks on me, especially when i got out of the shower, so now i am very alert every time i walk out of my bathroom. oh, yeah, i forgot to mention, i live with my eighteen year old brother, tyler. i love him, but there are just certain times i want to choke him. my mother was dead, and my father was somewhere in utah, along with my ex-boyfriend. well, i don't want to talk about that right now, it brings back bad memories. i shuddered lightly before walking over to my dresser and picking this out, along with my black vans. i was about to walk downstairs when my phone whistled, indicating i had a message. hey gurl, me an danny are gonna be at ur house in ten, love ya babe <3 i smiled looking at my message before sliding my phone into my back pocket, walking down the stairs. my brother was smiling cheekily at me once i arrived in the living room, "what?" i questioned, plopping myself down on the couch. "you'll see soon enough." he grinned before standing up and walking into the kitchen. i sighed softly, what was he up to now? about ten minutes later, i heard a knock at the door, indicating that my best friends were here. i was about to get up when my brother scrambled over to the door, opening it up. what the heck? "hey man!" "dude!" i raised an eyebrow as male voices started coming from the front of the house. oh no. i stood up from the black couch, walking over towards the front door. "wow, who is this cutie you got here tyler?" one of the boys grinned, winking at me. i inwardly groaned before sending a questioning look over towards my brother. tyler was whacking that one boy ,who was trying to flirt with me, on the arm before he caught my glare. "oh yeah, i forgot to mention kylie, these fine guys will be staying with us for the summer." the whole flipping summer! he smiled brightly, extending his arm out to his friends. "their names are dylan, aiden, mark, and justin." they all smiled at me, except for dylan, or whatever his name was, he just winked. i rolled my eyes, and muttered under my breath, "you have got to be kidding me."


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