This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby snowcat67 » Fri Apr 24, 2015 2:31 am

Wow... this hawk is so interesting!!! Looking forward to more adventures :)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun Apr 26, 2015 6:50 pm

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Dear Hawk,

I have no idea how cats live like this, but - Life is boring. Each day is - hunt, patrol, eat, sleep. That's it. And the Gathering, of course, is a gathering. I mean, what kind of dog cat won't know it? We get all those four Clans, which are groups of cats - ThunderClan, WindClan, ShadowClan and RiverClan. Then we talk. After that we leave. The end.

I heard that warriors can get... apprentices, like how Briarstripe got me as an apprentice. I don't really care about our apprentices - there aren't any, in fact. Now the 'new' warriors have to do all those apprentice jobs. At least we've got kits that are ready to be apprentices... And I might have my own too.... No. I'm too young for that.... What? Wait - I think cats can mate already, like my age? Not sure... Whatever. Let me 'reflect' on the first patrol I had as a warrior....

Let me see... Xavier as Lionfang... Charley as Cloudpelt... and Maggie as Shadefoot. Okay....


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Lionfang: Skyfoot! I'm leading a patrol - I'm taking you, Cloudpelt and Shadefoot. Come on, bro!
Me: Okay....
*leaves camp*
Me: *follows*
(We're walking along a border that stinks of fish)
Cloudpelt: *leans over* Hey, Skyfoot -
Shadefoot: Please stop chatting, Cloudpelt.
Lionfang: Come on, dudes! You guys are moving too slowly.
Me: .....
(After a while, we encounter a bunch of cats that stink of fish)
Fish Cat 1: You're walking dangerously close to the border, ThunderClan mangepelts.
Fish Cat 2: Don't bother, Fish Cat 1 Mosspelt -
Shadefoot: Don't insult my friends, you fish-scented, fox-hearted, mouse-brained -
Lionfang: *holds up a paw* Silence, Shadefoot. *turns to fish-scented, fox-hearted, mouse-brained cats cats that stink of fish* Greetings, RiverClan. Now, Mosspelt, bro, there is no need to warn us -
Small Fish Cat 3: DON'T STEAL OUR FISH! *leaps towards Cloudpelt*
Cloudpelt: *yowls and bats her aside*
Fish Cat 2: Minnowpaw, STOP! *turns to Lionfang* We are very sorry about our apprentice, Lionfang, and about Mosspelt too. He is a barely a warrior, merely an apprentice with a warrior name. He is simply protecting our territory.
Lionfang: *dips head* I see, Fish Cat 2 Lakewhisker. I am very sorry about our warriors, too. We shall take our leave.
Lakewhisker: Very well. *leads the fish cats RiverClan cats away*



Now, let me review my hunting patrol... There was Link as Hailfoot, who was leading the patrol. Ink as Brightstorm, Monica as Cherrytail, and.... Robinfoot. Ace, was it? Hmm.....

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Hailfoot: Now, everyone.... Can you scent that mouse? ....
Everyone except for Hailfoot: Yes....
Hailfoot: Good.... Robinfoot, go for it.
Robinfoot: *stalks forward and leaps*
Cherrytail: Go for it!
Hailfoot: Hush -
Robinfoot: *lands on mouse*
Cherrytail: Great! Good catch -
Brightstorm: And then, she dived for that mouse - oh, yes, she caught it -
Hailfoot: Silence... You'll scare away all the prey in the forest.
Everyone: ......
Hailfoot: Good... Now -
Me: I SMELL FISH CATS!
Everyone: :/
*a brown striped tabby cat pushes through the bushes*
Hailfoot: The RiverClan medicine cat, Fernshade. Welcome. What do you want?
Fernshade: Greetings, Hailfoot. I have come to speak to Acornfur.
Hailfoot: Go ahead. *turns to Cherrytail* Take her to camp.
Cherrytail: :D Sure! *pads along, Fernshade by her side* Did you see that? You know.... *walks off*
Brightstorm and Robinfoot: Fish cats?
Me: :oops: Just ignore me..... Pretend I don't exist....
Brightstorm and Robinfoot: Okay!
Me: Wait -
Brightstorm: So, Robinfoot -
Hailfoot: *sighs* Come on, let's get to hunting. Come on, Skyfoot.
Robinfoot: ;) Who's Skyfoot?
Brightstorm: Never heard of this 'Skyfoot' cat.
Hailfoot: *sighs again* Come on.



So Brightstorm and Robinfoot pretended I wasn't here... Until we got back to camp and we ate together. And it seems as if Snowface and Nightstorm are dragging Sparrowfang back and forth.... :x I won't let them! Let me get over there....

Ugh. Now I know why I shouldn't get between two angry girls.... even when I am one. But I will get Sparrowfang - and did Nightstorm mention Cloudpelt/Charley? And there are two kits who are about to become apprentices.... But I don't care. And Russetstar keeps on going out for walks. Hm... Sounds a little suspicious. Should I follow him? How about if he notices? I'm a little worried... What should I do, Hawk? I guess I'll spend the night thinking... See you, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Mon Apr 27, 2015 12:52 am

You should go after him and see whats going on, Skyfoot. Eh, Skyfoots okay, but Skydapple is pweety too!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Streak » Mon Apr 27, 2015 2:16 am

OMG 20lait1 when you gifted me I clicked your profile to gift u back then I clicked the link to this
I've Been Reading this for OVER TWO HOURS
but omigosh I love this and I'm so addicted I LOVE warriors and the crossover is just so perfect omg this writing has made me go crazy :lol:
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby TotallyHamster » Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:11 am

MOARRR
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Alnitak » Mon Apr 27, 2015 4:20 am

    Another good entry of the Hawk. The warriors crossover is certainly interesting. Are you thinking of crossing the Hawk with any other series at a later point?
    Because I think it's actually a good idea. ouo
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby abxy » Mon Apr 27, 2015 5:19 am

If you're gonna cross it over with another series at some point, cross it over with Artemis Fowl >u<
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby retroaqua » Mon Apr 27, 2015 6:39 am

You could cross with Me and Raven's diaries, The Cherry and The Water ( Strangely I do not own the water when I'm called Aqua .3. ), because we are skilled with crossing diaries :D
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 27, 2015 7:47 pm

Aquadoglover wrote:You could cross with Me and Raven's diaries, The Cherry and The Water ( Strangely I do not own the water when I'm called Aqua .3. ), because we are skilled with crossing diaries :D


That would be a good idea... But I'm doing a collab with the Dragon at the moment, and we're planning things out now - the Dragon is doing other collab with 3 other diaries, so I'm doing this to not keep everyone waiting. I might do that after the Dragon collab. Thanks for the suggestion, though.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby namjoon. » Mon Apr 27, 2015 10:09 pm

Yep, our collab is ending soon though... A few more Posts then we'll be done!
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