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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:43 pm

Finished my story. I changed the name to The Werewolf's Scret, though.


This is one I made up called The Werewolf's Secret.
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The little Italian village named Segreto on the island of Sicily. The villagers were almost oblivious to the other villages and towns, shunning their idea of inustrialization. Farming was the only way of life, the village preacher would say every Sunday, saying it was the natural way. No machines could take that away.
The villagers didn't want technology anyway even without the preacher's teachings. They were all happy with this acceptance. Until one day a strange woman by the name of Maria came to visit.

She was almost normal. But not quite. For one, her skin was not olive like the Italians but pale and it was only dotted with small freckles on her cheeks and over the bridge of her nose. Her face was surrounded by a veil of long black hair that sheilded one of her eyes. But it was not her weird walk or unusually hairy arms and legs that set an odd feeling into the villagers minds. It was her company.
Three wolf-like dogs followed Maria wherever she went. They were like cats that had been fed once and needed more. The villagers were clearly upset by the animals that resembled the killers of their livestock and destroyer of their crops but Maria was nice enough. She would never talk about where she came from but many suspected Northern Europe. Maria was also young. She could not be more then 18 and instantly every young farmer who was able to walk was following Maria at a safe distance.
But one farmer's son, Diego, decided he would be the one to ask for Maria's hand in marriage. He would be braver then the cowards who hid behind her. So on a cold Christmas Eve, the fiftieth day Maria had been in the village, Diego walked up to the inn she was staying in and walked in.
The inn was cold and drafty, even more so then outside. Diego walked in and as he did so pulled his coat tighter around him. He went up to the bar in the corner and sat down at a stool. "Which room can I find Maria in?" Diego asked, his voice calm and steady. The bartender looked up and glared hard at Diego. "We've been asked that a lot. All fromy ougn farmers who want some money. No one walks around in fancy clothes t\like that normally. People thinks she rich. but you look different. Room 14."
Diego thanked the man and went up the short staircase upstairs where the double-digit rooms were. He wlaked down the logn hallway and Diego seemed colder then he ever had in his life.
But he mastered his fears saying this was for love an finally found room 14 at the end. He took a deep breath and knocked on the door three times. Diego waited for a long time with no answer. He frowned knowing Maria had not left so she could be answering the door like a normal person. He knocked again and looked through the peephole as he did. The sight made him reel back in horror.
The room was a wreck and papers were all over the floor along with a shredded couch and several of Maria's ice dresses.
The curtains were on the floor and in a tangled mess under them lay Maria's body. Blood came from a gash in her throat and her legs were bleeding profusely. Hair had been ripped out of her head and her eyes were closed.
Then Diego saw the wolves Maria kept as pets. One was sitting near her, blood dripping from it's mouth like slobber from a hound dog. The other one was in a painful state, lying on the ground writhering back on forth on it's back, like a man being tortured.
The third was no where to be seen. We tried to peek further into the room but was stopped by a chilling feeling.

It made Diego's spine curl and he turned facing down the long hallway with a feelign someone was watching him. Someone was. A lone man with black eyes and a long coat stood in the center of the hallway, his hat down and covering is forehead. Diego tried to act calm but was scared. These wolves. They couldn't be. But the legends. So similiar . . .
In that time Diego thought the man lunged and his coat feel off revealing hairy arms and scratches. Diego was thrown to the ground as the man pounced on him in his true form. The werewolf.
Diego felt a terrible pain as his neck was snapped and he had onlyseconds to live before the blood drained out. He had no chance. Like Maria.Poor Maria. Betrayed by her pets. The werewolves.

Diego closed his eyes and could only process the werewolf's Italian words before heis eyes blacke dout.

"We are the Hounds of the Devil."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby yankees324 » Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:54 pm

*Shivers and hides under blanket* Spooky, but awesome and captivating! Love it! :P
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Oh, this is how it starts,
Lightning strikes the heart,
It goes off like a gun,
Brighter than the sun.
Oh, we could be the stars,
Falling from the sky,
Shining how we want,
Brighter than the sun.


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I'm taking a leave off RPs, probably for the next month or so. I'll still be on CS adopting pets and whatnot, but my creativity is drained for some reason and I don't want to give you bad posts, especially since they're all going so well. Sorry for this slight inconvenience, but its for all our benefits.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:31 am

Made this one up.I was bored

Kelly knew here toys came to life at night.She never opened her eyes just stayed in bed listening.She found out that Mike and Tama are inlove (2 of here barbies).Here stuffed animals on the shelf got very cold at night.When ever she heard her toys complain at night she always took care of the problem.She was scared that they might hurt her if they where uncomfortable.One day Kelly's parents let her stay alone at the house over night while her parents went to there friends house.As Kelly sat in the big Recliner she switched to the nw just as she was getting bored she heard of the escape of a killer already 5 people have been injured and 1 dead.Kelly was very frightened.She walked around the house closing all the widows and doors locking them.Kelly made one mistake.She forgot to lock her window.She watched a funny movie and popped some popcorn.Normally she would watch a hooror movie but she didn't want to be more scared then she already was.Kelly's hair keeped raising up like a six senth.Kelly ignored it thinking the mureder story was creping her out.Late at night she went to bed just as she was dropping off to sleep.Something roughly pushed her to the other side of her bed.Kelly froze in place.Right where she just was there her huge unicorn that she loved.A large knife pearced through here bed going through here unicorn.But instead of stuffing coming out blood poored through.Kelly stiffled a scream knowing the murderer was unnder her bed.An evil chuckle came from underher bed.Kelly grabbed her blankets and hid under them peering out with a little peek hole.The bloody knife was slowly pulled back under.And a tall evil looking person came out from under her bed and walked out her room and went outside leaving her house.Kelly waited 5,10 finally15 minutes before coming out from here hding place first she locked her door got out the first aid kit and some thread and needle.She walked to her room locking the window and door.To her surprise all her toys and stuffed animals were sorunding her unicorn badly hurt.Silently shehe set to working on the uni.She stitch and cleaned the wounds.Finally as the sun came out her toys slowly turned back to toys.Last of all was the unicorn.Keelly said"I know before you where alive".She fell asleep waking up to the sound of pounding on here door frightened she asked who is it.The person replied"I am offcer Fred Clinton"."I found the murder in your parents room he has been taken back to jail."I'm sorry to say he killed your parents".Kelly onlocked the door peeked outside saw the officer and bursted to tears.Kelly was takened to ,live with her Aunt a block away.She never forgot what her Uni did for her.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:42 am

Oh,yay! finally a story where the alive toys aren't evil!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:11 am

Does any one have a good story for aliens because i love aliens stories.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:19 am

I think we used up all our alien stories a few pages back. My sis is looking for stories right now. I'll make her look for an alien story
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:11 am

wow both nice and i just love how the unicorn saved the child! how sweet!
@DragonFlight me to i would love to hear a good juicy alien story!
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby WinterSkyWolf » Fri Dec 17, 2010 9:54 am

I`m going to make a alien story off the top of my head:

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sally. Sally lived in a small house with her mom and dad, and little brother named Zack.
One day while she was at school, she heard some kids gossiping about an alien invasion. "It was on the news, a man saw a UFO flying over his house not far from here!" a boy said.
"Thats nonsense, there is no such thing as aliens!" a girl said.
Sally didn't think much about it, she just continued with her day. When she got home, she was greeted at the door by her parents. "We are going out for dinner, there is pasta in the fridge if you get hungry."
Sally nodded and went inside, Zack was playing video games in the living room. It was getting dark out so Sally went outside to star gaze. She lied down on the grass and stared up at the sky, suddenly she saw a moving light. "Must be an airplane." she thought to herself.
But it wasn't an airplane, it came closer and closer, than a blinding light shined down on her. Suddenly Sally passed-out. When she woke up, she was strapped to a operation table and surrounded by green aliens. Then an alien started cutting her open with a knife. She screamed in pain but the alien didn't listen. She passed-out again. This time when she woke, she was in a hospital. "She is waking up!" her mom yelled.
"What happened?" Sally asked.
"We found you passed out on the lawn,the doctors say you will be fine"
Ever since that night, Sally never when star gazing again. And she still has the scar from where the alien cut her, but she can't remember how she got it...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:05 am

Woah.....scaryy!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:42 am

I am making a story Part 1
Aliens!!
Skylar didn't know how she got here.In an UFO.The Aliens had a mouth but they didn't talk with it they used their minds to comunicate they also had 4 arms and 2 legs.They where like gray blobs with arms and leg'. Skylar was so scared when they brought here here they had a bunch of stuff plugged to her body.They somehow got information from here mind.They nevred talked to her or even comunicated to her.Skylar sat in her cube that was her new home.She somehow knew she would never live at earth again.The Aliens took skylar to a surgents room(well it looked like one).They put her on a table made her ly down and stapped he in.Skylar fainted when she saw they ment to cut her head open.Funny she felt no pain.Then when she woke up she saw her memeries being projected.She was alared to see her head opened and tubes stuck to her brain.She fainted again.When she was awake she was in her cell with some strange looking food.Sklar cautusly poke it with her finger and licked it.The food was wierd sorta tasted like the moonlight and stars.She ate it because she noticed how famished she was.Then slowly tears came to her eyes they started falling slowly then faster and faster.Skylar would never see her familly and friend agian not even her boyfriend.She creid herself to sleep.She waas awakened to the moving of the UFO.It felt like it bumped into something.There it was again!She fell down HARD.Skylar looked at the TV thing that showed her outside into space.Another Ship was there and it was shotting at them!An evil looking face come on screen it said d¦ÿ ñcz¨ §Ñß ŠÄü'' ÏÊRʺ (we want the Female).Then a large jolt sent the UFO tumlbling.One part of the ship was on FIRE!

To Be Continude
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