Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

[sweet tooth]

rencarnated spirits would be ok
if firestar, hollyleaf, jayfeather, lionblaze, cinderpelt, and dovewing were not reborn
too many >.>
it would be fine if one was reborn and he wasn't some special cat who has powers to destroy planet earth
EDIT: although I do love hollyleaf, she is a wasted character, and now just pure sad trash as she was reborn

[agathokakologic]

wait
so
they weren't just named in honor of the cats
they're rebirths?!
whut
no
please


and look! one of the rules was broken again!
"ambermoon"... sigh

[abxy]

wait
so
they weren't just named in honor of the cats
they're rebirths?!
whut
no
please


and look! one of the rules was broken again!
"ambermoon"... sigh

AMBERMOON!? AMBERMOON!? YOU ALREADY STATED MOONFLOWER WAS A MISTAKE
HOW ARE YOU GONNA LET ANOTHER MOON SLIDE THIS TIME, HUH, ERINS?!

[bronzebones]

I'm gonna try to make a more complete list about what I'll change in my rewrites.

Still can't find Into the Wild...

Maybe God is sparing me from its stupidness.

Changes:


Book 1:

Make Tigerclaw a less obvious villan.

Change many names. Make Redtail a she-cat. (And different name.)

In fact, right here are the character changes I'm making:


Redtail used to be a tortoiseshell tom. - Will be a tortoiseshell she-cat named..OH GREAT ERINS, YOU DON'T TELL US THE SKILLS.


*rages, leaving note saying: i'll finish this later*

[sweet tooth]

I saw ambermoon and knew somthing was wrong, though I coulndn't tell

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Erins
please just
my first draft I'm working on has better ideas then all of your books combines

[bronzebones]

If I could make a list of the untraditional names, I'd be here 'till I'd die.


YOU KNOW

I'LL DO IT.

I'LL KEEP ADDING TO THIS LIST.

Longtail

Runningwind


Runningnose


Clawface


Wetpaw


Tallstar


That's all from the first book.

If I made a list adding the ones used in the wrong way though.....

[Wolvine]

ok but like... if theyre doing reincarnation they should at least try for some consistency. i mean, for cinder, it was bc she didn't get to be a warrior which doesnt make an awful lot of sense but... ok... what r they gonna say for a reincarnated firestar? there was literally nothing left for him to do. or r they gonna go for the old "i will never be able to live up to the expectations set by amazin ancestor who i have an uncanny resemblance to, oh woe is me!" cliche?

[bronzebones]

ok but like... if theyre doing reincarnation they should at least try for some consistency. i mean, for cinder, it was bc she didn't get to be a warrior which doesnt make an awful lot of sense but... ok... what r they gonna say for a reincarnated firestar? there was literally nothing left for him to do. or r they gonna go for the old "i will never be able to live up to the expectations set by amazin ancestor who i have an uncanny resemblance to, oh woe is me!" cliche?

And they're going to ignore Hollytuft who MIGHT have more to do.

I mean, WHY DO YOU NEGLECT HOLLYLEAF/TUFT ERINS.

[miss universe]

Hollyleaf had soooo much potential! With her ambition and passion for justice, imagine her as leader!

[agathokakologic]

k guz i fineshid chptar 1 of mai neew feanfac lunaster's ohmen. de blerb is a few pgs bck if u wanna chek

chptare 1

lunuket jmpd arund excitdlie. 'i well becum an aprntece son i cantt wat' she sed haply. brmblster clmbd de hiledg and sed 'lunuket hez reechd her 6 mon nd wel becahm aprntic. i wel mentr hr. com lunipuw we wll c de teritry nd hnt nd fit.' lunapew wus so excted! 'k' she sed happly.

stay tund 4 chptur 2