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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby chimique, » Wed Apr 08, 2015 9:02 pm

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby ownanimal » Wed Apr 08, 2015 10:29 pm

All ofthe text after this is said in the attitude of link:

well, i got accepted into furford academy..
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Name: im link..
Gender:if it isnt obvious enough already, im a guy.. my feline friend here is a guy too..
Personality: well, im pretty layed back, what you might call "chill", I dont talk too much, Im not a jock or anything, I like talking to people with intersting thigs to talk about, I tend to suddenly ask unexpected questions, I'm slim but not too skinny, I tend to know what people are thinking, its not a gift or anything, I was taught alot, im really smart and i lie when its necessary, or not. you wont see me smiling alot, i grin to make people feel uncomforatable cause i can, and sometimes a flash of a smile when imabout to do something..
Hobbies: I know how to deflect attacks, I like practicing karate with my "friends" Movies are my favourite, if you walk into my dorm room at pretty much any time not during classes, i will either not be there, or watching a movie. I tend to stare at people, try to figure out their problems, I try to enhance my "mind reading" skills sometimes (not actual mind reading, just being able to detect small things, like when somethings up, he'll know)
Group:im a lone wolf, outside of the academy i have many "freinds"
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? if you consider a friend being someone who watches for danger while staying away
Others:
I have friends at this academy but, well, lets just say they are aquaintances, no, actually they are backup, helpers you might say.. every time i said friedns, it meant backup, I have a secret life outside the academy, I can do many things but i will never show most of those skills to a single one of you.. I know about skylars diary, in fact, i know almost everything about her, and i was sen to keep her safe, but you know, shes being targetted by a few people, I only need to come when its most necessarry.. i have a sort of fifth sense, I know when something is about to happen, but i can never tell what it is, when the thought process of the thing that is going to happen goes through my brain, my eyes turn a foggy grey colour..



This and anything said after this is me, ownanimal talking.


AHHHHHHAHHAHAHAHHA this is totally awesome!!
Quesion?
can i make a diary thing like this too??
it will include all the events that happen in this in links perspective and his secret life too
I almost stalk skylar all the time but not completly all the time
so can I?
i will post later than you do though
also, please pm me if you think its ok
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:49 pm

20lait1 wrote:
Moonlightfairy wrote:
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name:jackson
Gender:male
Personality: flirty and sweet he is quite dependent on anyone he meets
Hobbies:flirting,taking girls shopping, doing peoples hair and male fashion
Group:jocks
Is he/she a friend of Skyler?no
Others: he loves Mackenzie (if its okay) and has a thick British accent


Mackenzie comes from DWD's Dragon. Yeah, I guess so.... I might need DWD'S permission first though. Accepted anyways! (I'm doing a collab with DWD now, so if you want to join Barktree, I need permission from DWD. If you want to join Furford, then he probably won't know about Mackenzie.)


I've asked DWD. DWD suggested you should add your character into the Dragon too if you're going to add it here.

ownanimal wrote:All ofthe text after this is said in the attitude of link:

well, i got accepted into furford academy..
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Name: im link..
Gender:if it isnt obvious enough already, im a guy.. my feline friend here is a guy too..
Personality: well, im pretty layed back, what you might call "chill", I dont talk too much, Im not a jock or anything, I like talking to people with intersting thigs to talk about, I tend to suddenly ask unexpected questions, I'm slim but not too skinny, I tend to know what people are thinking, its not a gift or anything, I was taught alot, im really smart and i lie when its necessary, or not. you wont see me smiling alot, i grin to make people feel uncomforatable cause i can, and sometimes a flash of a smile when imabout to do something..
Hobbies: I know how to deflect attacks, I like practicing karate with my "friends" Movies are my favourite, if you walk into my dorm room at pretty much any time not during classes, i will either not be there, or watching a movie. I tend to stare at people, try to figure out their problems, I try to enhance my "mind reading" skills sometimes (not actual mind reading, just being able to detect small things, like when somethings up, he'll know)
Group:im a lone wolf, outside of the academy i have many "freinds"
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? if you consider a friend being someone who watches for danger while staying away
Others:
I have friends at this academy but, well, lets just say they are aquaintances, no, actually they are backup, helpers you might say.. every time i said friedns, it meant backup, I have a secret life outside the academy, I can do many things but i will never show most of those skills to a single one of you.. I know about skylars diary, in fact, i know almost everything about her, and i was sen to keep her safe, but you know, shes being targetted by a few people, I only need to come when its most necessarry.. i have a sort of fifth sense, I know when something is about to happen, but i can never tell what it is, when the thought process of the thing that is going to happen goes through my brain, my eyes turn a foggy grey colour..

This and anything said after this is me, ownanimal talking.


AHHHHHHAHHAHAHAHHA this is totally awesome!!
Quesion?
can i make a diary thing like this too??
it will include all the events that happen in this in links perspective and his secret life too
I almost stalk skylar all the time but not completly all the time
so can I?
i will post later than you do though
also, please pm me if you think its ok


Question: "Can I make a diary thing like this too??"

Yes, of course! The Hawk was inspired by the Dragon, as written on the fanclub (find it at the top of the first page). So yeah, if you create a diary, I'd love to read it! Just give credit, okay?
Meh. Too lazy to PM. If you don't answer this in a day or something, I guess I'll have to lift those lazy bones of mine and PM you.

EDIT: Can you choose a group anyways? Even if you're a loner, you're still in a group. It's kinda confusing for me if some dogs weren't in groups...
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby areadbhar » Thu Apr 09, 2015 12:33 am

mark!
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:02 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Today I've managed to skip school to get back in time for the dance (Snowy moved it back since she's got her dance partner already)! There was a new kid at Barktree... And I think Ace and him are fighting over the BIG MAC.

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BIG MAC: Oooh! Perfect jock. Name and interests?
???: Well, mate, I'm Jackson, and I like male fashion and of course takin' gals like you out shopping.
BIG MAC: Jocks! At once!
Jackson: Well, mate, maybe we can go out after school? Some shoppin' perhaps? *winks*
BIG MAC: Meet you at the mall! *girly giggle*
Me: *pretends to throw up*

So Ace and Jackson are fighting over her.... Whatever. It's time to go. Dad's taking me. Just me. So yeah, I'm in the car now. In fact, I have a prank in ready for the Queen of Mean....

I'm at the dorm now! Cinders trying to convince me to have a party even though there's going to be one later. So yeah, the prank actually went the way it was supposed to! Like in the first time in forever!


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Me: *walks down the halls whistling off-key*
Snowy: THE OUTCAST GIRL? What are YOU doing here?!
Me: Oh, nothing much. Just coming along to watch you ultimately fail at the dance.
Snowy: Humph. I bet you'd be a loner at the dance. Now, your fashion style is still -
Me: SNOWY! THERE'S SOMETHING GREEN IN YOUR TEETH!
Snowy: WHAT! *turns around and grabs paw mirror out of bag* Where? WHERE!
Me: Oh... Show me.
Snowy: *looks at me*
Me: There isn't. *throws honey-ball at her face*
Snowy: EEEEEKK!!!! *honey drips off nose* JOCKS!
Random jocks: *runs over to Snowy*
Another bunch of random jocks: HOW DARE YOU MESS UP THE LOVELY -
Me: *swishes paw*
*wind blows them down the hallway*
Me: That'd teach you to attack a girl. *walks past Snowy whistling*


So yeah, it's lunch now. I think there's a new kid to be sorted.

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Snowy: Nam -
???: Name and interests, yes, I know. You are very predictable. Too predictable.
Snowy: But - You're going in -
???: Outcasts. Yes, I know. Let me explain myself. I am Link, and my feline friend here is a guy if you didn't notice.... I do karate and I like watching movies. Everything else is none of your business. *walks off*
Snowy: .....

So the rest of the lunchtime, I chatted with my friends and such. Somehow I feel as if someone's watching me from far away... Whatever. So I figured out some... stuff. Jewel's going to the dance with the new kid Tobias, Fang's going to ask Creek out, Riptide and Xavier aren't coming... Kolli's going to be standing around and won't take part in the dance... Ink doesn't even know when's the dance and she doesn't want to come even when I explain... Lilly's going to come but won't take part in the dance because she would rather sit and eat than dance.... Taylor's hanging out with Snowy.... I have no idea what are Monica and Maggie are going to do... And the new kid Link seems to be hanging around by himself. It's creepy. Now, who's left... Me, Xander and Charley. Ooookay. I don't know what to do now. I think I'll cross the bridge when I get to it (whatever that means). Sooo.... Time to spend lunch like normal. And here are the pictures as well. Many pictures.


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Riptide

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Xavier

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Taylor

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Xander

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Kolli

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Creek

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Ink

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Charley

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Monica

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Maggie

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Me: So, guys.... You know what's going on for the dance, right?
Fang: Erm.... Yeah...
Creek: I don't think I'm going....
Fang: W-why?
Creek: Well... I've just got no one to go with...
Me: *whispers to Fang* Tell her now before it's too late!
Fang: :? I - I - Creekcanyoucometothedancewithme?
Creek: What?
Me: Calm down, Fang. Now, speak slowly and clearly.
Fang: Caaaaaaannnnn yoooouuuuu -
Me: Gah! Just speak normally!
Everyone: *stares at Fang*
Fang: Creek, can you go to the dance with me?
Creek: I - I - Yes!
Jewel: At least someone else has a crush now. *smiles at Tobias, who's sitting beside her*
Tobias: Yea - Yeah! Ri - Right!
Me: Well then, let's ask in order. Jewel, you're going with Tobias, right?
Jewel: Yes....
Me: Next - Lilly?
Lilly: I think I might be at the party - just to eat and for the games. I think it's boring.
Me: Oookay. Riptide? Xavier?
Riptide: We're going to be playing video games up in the dorm.
Xavier: Better doing something we like than doing something we dislike that happens like once a year, right, bro?
Riptide: Definitely.
Me: ..... Okay. Taylor?
Taylor: Snowy wants me to hang out with her and stuff.
Creek: Snowy's bossing me around lately... She wants me to hang out with her, too.
Me: Don't worry. With Fang -
Fang: I'llprotectyou!
Me: Oookay. Xander?
Xander: I - I -
Charley: No you're not!
Xander: But why can't I?
Me: .... Okay.... Kolli?
Kolli: I think I'll stick with Lilly's plan. Plus I want to take a video of the party too, so I'll be hanging around with a camera or two. You know, for PawTube? Connie won't be able to do something like this!
Everyone except for me and and Kolli: Who?
Me: Her little sis at Barktree. Ink?
Ink: I think this night is a good night for climbing trees. Don't you agree? Yes, I know, it's quiet and peaceful -
Me: Okay..... Charley?
Charley: No you're not! I am!
Xander: But I said it first-
Charley: You didn't say it yet!
Me: Oookay. Still arguing. Monica and Maggie?
Monica: Well..... I guess I can hang around, but dancing's just not my thing.
Maggie: Neither me. I can stay, but I don't want to dance.
Me: Okay. Now, how about those two -
Xander and Charley: CanIgotothedancewithyou?
Me: Wha?
Xander and Charley: Can I go to the dance with you?
Charley: But -
Xander: I was going to -
Me: .....

Okay. Two guys want to go out with me.... Who should I choose? I''m worried.... And you can't help me. Who should I go with? I'll have to write in you after the dance.... What can I do?
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:05 pm

I tried to do the British accent for Jackson though I probably failed.

Now, time for a question - Who do you think Skyler should go with?

1 - Charley
2 - Xander
3 - None of the above
4 - Someone else! (PM me to tell me/write it with your post)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby abxy » Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:07 pm

20lait1 wrote:I tried to do the British accent for Jackson though I probably failed.

Now, time for a question - Who do you think Skyler should go with?

1 - Charley
2 - Xander
3 - None of the above
4 - Someone else! (PM me to tell me/write it with your post)

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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Thu Apr 09, 2015 7:43 pm

Reads chapter* Well, Creek and I are officially happy! And so is Fang. Thanks 20Lait1! And, personally, I believe the answer to Skykers dance partner is 2, Xaivier. Well, still blushing like a cherry red! I needed that, have to sleep, 3:43 AM!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby chimique, » Thu Apr 09, 2015 7:46 pm

defiantly xander
and ya its fine you did a very good job
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Alnitak » Fri Apr 10, 2015 12:15 am

wolfiegirl8679 wrote:Reads chapter* Well, Creek and I are officially happy! And so is Fang. Thanks 20Lait1! And, personally, I believe the answer to Skykers dance partner is 2, Xaivier. Well, still blushing like a cherry red! I needed that, have to sleep, 3:43 AM!


    Heh. I think you mean Xander there. Not that i'd have any objections to Xavier going with her but he's my character so maybe i'm a bit biased. Either way it was never an established plot point. Also, even while I would've assumed Xavier would be at the dance for the heck of it, I find it more predictable and more suited to his attitude and such that he's back in the dorm playing videogames because this is Xavier we're talking about. owo
    The fact that you, 20lait1, actually seem to understand my character makes me feel like a bad person. ono

    Also, I don't really have a preferance because I honestly don't know which of the two characters Skyler's closer to. I think it really depends on which character seems like a better partner for Skyler and I can't conclusively come to a decision on that because I don't know of the characters that well.
    I honestly still ship Fang and Skyler, even though Fang's going with someone else.
    But yeah, no opinion on that from me, really. Sorry. ono
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