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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:26 pm

@ erille- it's a great story so far, please please don't give it a stereotypical ending. You are a good author/writer.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Uffie<3 » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:34 pm

(This story is LIKE the one on the first page but a bit different.)
One day in a tiny little village there was a family. The familys' house was quite far from the grocery store and they were quickly running out of food. So the parents decided to go out to look for food. It was the middle of winter and the snow was only getting deeper so they had to go that night or be trapped in the snow to either freeze or starve to death.

"You'll be fine," the little girl's mother promised. "Besides you have Aaron." Aaron was their dog's name. Every night when the litlle girl dozed away he would sit by her bedside and lick her hand. And every night when Aaron licked the girl's hand she felt safe.

The parents left and the girl was all alone. She cuddled Aaron as she waited for her mother and father to return. It was getting more and more towards night and the blizzard was raging outside of her window. She started to cry. She warily dragged herself to her parent's bed and curled up upon it.


The dog licked her hand in an attempt to calm her long and pitiful sobs. For the moment everything was alright and the girl drifted off to sleep.

The girl woke up and still her parents had not returned. She started to fret. But she decided they were probably just safe at someone else's home and had stopped to get out of the blizzard's way. She walked to the kitchen to get some bread. She looked in the cabinet but none was left. She sniffed the air. Something was wrong. There was a smell like something had died.

The girl searched the whole house. She finally came to the bathroom. With a shaky hand she opened the door but screamed at the scene awaiting her. In the bathtub was her beloved dog, Aaron. In the mirror was a blood scrawled note reading; The Jersey Devil can lick hands, too.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Wed Dec 15, 2010 3:14 pm

The Mothman is incredibly interesting...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Wed Dec 15, 2010 3:16 pm

I've seen so many TV shows about Mothman! They say he might have been giving the people a warning, if it's the same mothman
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:04 am

The mothman *shivers* there was a story about him on LostTapes!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snampa » Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:05 am

...I have nev er heard of the Moth Man. :| What is it?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:10 am

Okay... so, of course you all know I'm not good at explaining things, theres this town and a few people from there over the course of a couple weeks saw the "mothman" After that a bridge collapsed and there were many car accidents. A lot of people blamed mothman, others say he was trying to warn them. He hasn't been seen since. The made a statue of him though!

I saw it on Mystery Hunters about a year ago, so it may not be accurate
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:55 am

Creepy *shudders and looks around*
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:09 am

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:24 am

Mothman is sorta cute.The wings are awsome :)
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