FirClan {Closed} and MoorClan {Open} {Discussion + Forms}

[Piefan]

^^^ I think you forgot to close the colour tag for the skills/weaknesses answer.

Anyway, when'll the roleplay begin? :3

[detective who.]

It's closed in the coding; if you quote my post, you'll see it closed there.

Soon! I'm working on getting everyone on the front page right now, and then I've got a couple of other things to take care of. We might not start until sometime next week; I've been tremendously busy lately, and my schedule should calm down then.

Edit;; Who would like to mentor Mudpaw and Shrikepaw?

[CoolComrade]

Are we beginning once the apprentices have mentors?

[detective who.]

Or soon after. I'm working on a proper plot for this so it doesn't do that floating-around-with-no-purpose a lot of Warriors RPs seem to do. I'm open for ideas, prophecies, etc if anyone is interested.

[miniaturetigers]

Description - Brown tabby with jet black stripes brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan
Name - Adderfang
Gender - Tom
Rank - Warrior
Age - 29 Moons
Personality - Adderfang is often described as rude, stubborn, ignorant, and arrogant. But he has a soft side, and his soft side is described as funny, nice, friendly, kind, sarcastic and a bit offending but he doesn't mean it. The reason he seems rude and stubborn etc. is because he doesn't want the clan to be hurt. He lived off of protecting his clan,- even as a kit. And as a kit, he caused trouble.
Family - Spidertail - Sister - Alive
Notable history - He was born to rogues, along with his sister Spidertail, who was Spider while he was Adder. Their parents abandoned them on the edge of a clan's territory. And that clan so happened to be FirClan. They were tooken in, nursed, and raised into warriors of FirClan, ready to fight and defend the clan-even at the cost of their own lives.
Skills/Weaknesses - Skills: Strength, excellent hunter, great eyesight, good tracker. Weaknesses: Speed, clumsy, short temper, stubbornness, can't think while fighting, may claw clanmates on accident.


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[color=#404040]Description - Dark brown tabby with black stripes brief and clear - darker coats more common in FirClan than MoorClan
Name - Spidertail
Gender - Molly
Rank - Warrior
Age - 29 Moons
Personality - Spidertail is kind, forgiving, and sweet, feeling pitty for many others that she doesn't even know. But once you get on her bad side, she is rude, snappy, sarcastic, stubborn and did I say rude?
Family - Adderfang - Brother - Alive
Notable history - Born as a rogue with her brother Adderheart, they were abandoned on a clan's territory. And that clan was FirClan.
Skills/Weaknesses - Skills: Light pawed, graceful, speedy, well balanced. Weaknesses: Strength, lithe muscled, weak, frail,

[Duskshine]

Description - A calico she-cat with a medium build, minimal scarring entirely hidden under her fur, and sharp yellow-orange eyes.
Name - Leopardpaw
Gender - She-cat (Molly)
Rank - Apprentice
Age - 8 moons old
Personality - Easily excitable and highly energetic, Leopardpaw is all about extremes. She seems to be full of contradictions on the outside, but everything she does makes perfect sense to her. She's typically very forgiving, but when it comes to large trespasses against her trust she can hold grudges for years. Consistently stubborn but consistent in little else, Leopardpaw almost never backs down from a fight, verbal or physical, because whenever she has an opinion she sticks to it through thick and thin, just as she stands by her friends. She is quick to laugh with her friends and just as quick to claw away her enemies, and it is always clear where a cat stands with her. She dislikes complexity, because she sees the world as a pretty simple place, and everything is pretty close to black and white to her.
Family - Falconheart is her estranged older brother.
Notable history - When she was just a kit, her parents and brother were out hunting when a fox attacked. By then, Falconheart was already a strong warrior and should have been able to adequately help fend off the fox, according to Leopardpaw; however, both of her parents still ended up dead, and she never forgave her brother for it.
Skills/Weaknesses - A better fighter than a hunter, and a better hunter than a diplomat, as she can be brutally honest.


Description - A very average-seeming dark tabby, well-muscled and long-clawed. His eyes are dark.
Name - Falconheart
Gender - Tom
Rank - Deputy if available. If not, warrior.
Age - 26 moons
Personality - Falconheart is quiet and intelligent, in contrast to his sister. He thinks about who it would be advantageous to be friendly with, and who is too unimportant to really bother with. He makes a visible effort to be kind to his sister, who he says hates him because she was too young to handle their parents' deaths. He uses this and other subtle tactics to win sympathy for himself, which encouraged other cats to speak to him of their own accord, when he began to form bonds with cats in higher positions than he. Therefore he is somewhat a politician, using his intelligence to gain affluence with the right cats and thus win power in the clan, even in limited ways. That is not to say he couldn't be a good friend, or that he isn't loyal to the clan. He shows his loyalty by employing his hunting and fighting skills at every good opportunity, and keeps it a secret that he considers his own life and prospects just slightly more important than anyone else's. He'll protect the clan at the cost of his life to protect his power over other cats and his legacy, which he wants to be a great legacy.
Family - Leopardpaw, his estranged younger sister.
Notable history - Leopardpaw's account of their parents' deaths is fairly accurate, although he made it clear to the clan that he couldn't have saved his parents, and only his sister ever suspected him seriously of letting them die; he returned badly wounded and apparently devastated.
Skills/Weaknesses - Intelligence is his main strength, although he lacks empathy and is not a stellar fighter, and he is secretive and selfish, which has made him somewhat paranoid of fully trusting other cats.

[detective who.]

To xXxOwlxXx:
Both of your cats' prefixes are fine, but I'd take another look at their suffixes. Skill suffixes take precedence over personality suffixes.
I suggest looking at -nose and -whisker for Adderheart, and -tail and -foot for Spiderheart.
PM me with your decision, please~

To Duskshine:
Both Flickerpaw and Hawksight are very interesting characters, and I can't wait to see them in action. However, their names need another look.
FirClan is placed in England. There aren't any flickers there that I've found in my research, and there aren't any animals just called hawk, either (here's hawk- on Ailuronymy). I'd suggest looking at the Patterned and Grey sections of the prefix list, respectively.
Hawksight's suffix needs another look, too. Read through the suffix list and see if anything there suits your fancy.
PM me with your decision, or if you'd like a second opinion. I'd be happy to help~

A good day to both of you.

[.:shiver:.]

Description - Muscular, brown tabby tom with amber eyes with long front claws.
Name - Alderclaw
Gender - tom
Rank - warrior, wants to become deputy
Age - 36 moons
Personality - Born to a clan queen who mated with a rouge, he's never really believed he fitted into the clan properly. He was teased as a kit for his father, but this just made him more determined to be the best warrior he can be so nobody can fault him. He's brave, loyal, and not afraid to fight if it means that his clan benefits from it. He follows the warrior code, but if it goes against something he believes in, he will break it. He is courageous in battle, but underneath the seemingly perfect warrior image, he hides his self-doubt and is always over-critical of his actions. Since being appointed deputy, however, he has grown more confident in his self and his position in the clan, and endeavors to serve his clan the best he can. He does have a touch of a short temper, and can be known to use his claws before his tongue. He tries to avoid this and often takes a step back to consider the situation before rushing in.
Family - not rped currently
Notable history - Half rouge, was bullied from kit-hood midway to midway through his apprenticeship.
Skills/Weaknesses - skilled fighter, strong, decent climber. Not the most skilled hunter, not good at stealth.
Important notes - None, currently

[Dezembro]

Description - Small dark gray-brown molly with big yellow-green eyes and a flat face
Name - Mousestep
Gender - Molly
Rank - Warrior
Age - 42 moons
Personality - Mousestep is obsessed with morality and has an strong, innate sense of right or wrong - although only approximately 3 and a half years of age, she acts much older. She has a mature, motherly aura about her, and although she can be reserved and skittish in most situations, she is quick to correct others when they do anything that she considers to be wrong. She believes that anything the Clan authorities have to say - be it leader, deputy, medicine cat, or senior warriors - should be obeyed without question. And her blind faith is not reserved for only the Clan leaders. She sees good in every cat, no matter if it is really there. Mousestep is also a romantic at heart, and her only aspiration (other than teaching good morals to the younger warriors and apprentices) is to find "the perfect mate" and have some kits of her own some day.
Family - x
Notable history - x
Skills/Weaknesses - A great hunter, very wise and motherly, but not so good at battling or resolving conflict and a little misguided in her gullible faith in everyone
Important notes - Mousestep earned her warrior name from the quick and silent steps she takes while she hunts. While her skills in battle may be average or even sub par, her patient, undetectable style of hunting is admirable.

[detective who.]

Mousestep and Alderclaw are both accepted! I'll go edit the front page, and then I'm going to put up the poll for deputy here after Hawksight gets his new name.