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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:05 pm

I was digging through my friends files, (she was the manager of a trailer park), and saw a peculiar looking one. It was tattered and marked strangely. I opened it to find a tragic tale.

Here is the story.

There was a family of 7. Five kids, and two parents. The eldest of the children was a girl, approximately 16 years old. The second oldest was a boy, about 14. Third oldest was a girl, around 10. And the last two were a set of boy twins at the age of 7. Each of them died one after another, in or around the trailer park they lived in.

The trailer they lived in had a strange address: 527. Seems like more then just a coincidence to the fact that there were 5 kids, 2 parents, and 7 deaths from the family that lived in that trailer.

The sequence started with the eldest daughter, Livia. She had gotten invited to go to the prom from this guy who a very bratty girl also wanted to go with. While Livia waited to get picked up to go to the prom, she had acctually been waiting for her death because the jealous brat had hired someone to kill her. The day after she was found with several gun wounds in the chest.

Second in line was the second oldest child. He had been in trouble with several gangs. He had gambled away more money then he had and would ever be able to pay back. This being so, the gang leader he owed the money to came after him with other members of the gang. As payment they beat him severely and left him to die. As he lay dieing he crawled to the spot where his sister had been killed which was mere feet from where he was.

Third was the next oldest. She was on her way home when she was hit by a truck belonging to one of her neighbors. Unable to admit what he had done he buried her in his yard sometime after to be discovered by the police.

Finally the last of the children, the twins. They had been playing in the woods near the park one day and just never returned home. Days later they worn found in those woods beaten, Shot at, and hanging from a tree.

After having lost all his children the father commited suicide by slitting his throat and wrists. Soon after, the mother, who had been on an extreme amount of anti-depressants, over dosed in an attempt to end her life aswell.

To Be Continued
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:14 pm

I like it so far!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:17 pm

Me too. I'm gonna have to catch up on stories, month changes always get me confused and I'm caught up in other threads
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:05 pm

The rest of the story
Haveing herd their story i remained in disbelief. while i had always belived in ghosts i htought this was to strange to be true. But, one night my friend and i where returning from our trip up north, as we pulled in front of her house i looked back and standing up top the hill at the end of the road was a figure engulfed in smoke. While we were camping we had told ghost stories so thought i was just imagining it but i told my friend any way...she turned around and low and behold it was still there. Freaked out of our minds we ran inside. Things went on normally until later that night we were sitting in her bedroom finishing telling ghost stories haveing dismissed the earlier experiance as our minds playing tricks. I was sitting on her bed staring out the window, i looked down at her as she was telling her story then i looked back at the window and there staring in was a girls face. I was becomeing short of breath, i turned and looked at my friend and motioned her to look at the window, there was nothing there, i convinced her that we should go out into the living room. Finally i told her how i had read the file and that the girl i saw in the window was the oldest girl in that family. She told me that she knew who it was she just couldnt see her aslo, sh etold me that she had seen her before and that thats who was standing on the hill. Later that week in the woods beyond the park we saw the boys hanging from the tree.... If that wasnt scary i dont know what is. Their faces were as plain as day it horrible they looked so...scared. Also, we've seen the oldest boy rolling dice on the street he was killed. He'll look up at you as you stand there terrified. He said something to us as we stood there but we couldnt hear him. we think he said " Hey ladies wanna game" cuz thats what it seemed to be also he had a divious smile on his face that would kill.
Now we dont live there but i can't even drive by there.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Bellachewybillie » Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:24 am

hey guys im leaving chicken smoothie for a month or two i will just come here too adopt from the advent calender

from now on till im back chaos<3 will tAKE OVER
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:34 am

1. The Daughters room
Once, my car broke down, in the middle of nowhere. i soon walked to a small house, with a sweet old couple who invited me to stay the night, since it was very late. i was hesitant, i mean, youve seen the movies these days! but i went anyway, thinking whats thw worst that could happen in there that wouldnt happen in the cold dark woods in the middle of NOWHERE! so i chose the house. after a delicious meal, they showed me a small room in the back, and showed me a bathroom 3 doors down the hall. They said there re no rules other than not to go in thier daughters room, and since they had been so sweet, i agreed. well, i woke that night needing to go to the bathroom, and as i was walking back to my room, i looked in the little girls key hole, just to peek, and i just saw red, i relaxed, they just had repainted the room and didnt want me ruining it, thats all! well the next morning i went downstairs a little guilty, and confessed to peeking, but not actually going it, which i was happy i didnt, they then told me, "Oh..well, our daughter died about a month ago, she died of a stroke in the front of her brain, it mae her eyes turn blood red, then she passed on.."

2.The AIM scare
One night, bored, i logged on to AIM instant messenger, to chat about a fun halloween party coming up with my friends. We were all bored of one on one conversations so we opened up a fun chat room. Then, someone we didnt know came in to the chat, he seemed nice but seemed kinda off. about an hour later my friends logged off, leaving me and only the stranger. he logged out of the conversation and one on one IMed me, saying hello. I greeted back, and asked what his name was, how old he was, you know, basic conversation. he told me he was older than me, which i found weird..why not give me a number? then he said his name was Ricky. I gave him my name and he said, oh i already know. it startled me, so, intruiged i asked more, i finally got to, where do you live? and he said in your house. thats strange i though...and scary! i blocked him. then, i instantly i hear YOUVE GOT MAIL, and i open it up to him saying, why would you ex out? do you want to speak personaly? i replyed with why he was scaring me? he said why not turn around and ask me to my face? i gasp, and, crying i turn around., but noone wad there! i laughed, and as i turned around to say "very funy" to him, he logged off. then, i heard the phone ring, and he said, why hello there, im coming to say hello personaly. i scream and hang up, then call the police. they say if he calls again, to call back and they will trace his call. i hang up, and he calls again, he says hes closer, so i call the police again, they say to stay calm , they are tracking it as they speak. then he calmly tells me to go to my front door, and open it, i do this, then he tells me to run as fast as i can, up the street to the telephone booth, and they have someone meeting me there, i ask why, but he hangs up before i can ask, so, terrifyed, i run. just as i reach the phonebotth, a police officer grabs me, and pulls me to his chest, and pulls out a gun and points out towards where my hous ewas, keepimng me safe. i thank him, but asking why he couldnt just come to my house, and as several men run towards my house, with guns and shields, he informs me that the calls....were coming from a cell phone in the closet behind were i sit at the computer.

3, The black dog
ONe dayi went for a run, but i didnt want to go along my treet, so i did a quick drive to the river in the center of town.As i run i see a beautiful black lab dog, and when i finish my run, i head to the local supermarket for some food. the cashier sees my sweat and asks if i had been running, i reply, yes, and she says to be aware of the black lab. i tell her i had seen it, and she gasps, telling me "If you see the black lab, its the ghost of a puppy that was killed after a murderer had tortured his owner, only to do the same to the dog. if you see him once, its good luck, twice, it means you will be hurt, and 3 times..you die" i laugh it off, saying even if it was true, i only saw him once! =], as i walk out of the store, i see a 100 dollar bill lying on the ground! my luck! as i get home to unload my small bag of grocerys, and to put away my money, i see a the black lab run through my yard, i get a eerie feeling btu shrug it off. its only a story..then i slip on the floor, and crack open my skull. black.
a week later, i open my eyes in a hospital, only to be informed of what had hapened. a few weeks later, im walking with my friend along my road, telling her all about the grocer, the run, the dog, everything, and just then, the black lab walks over to us and picks my palm. we stare at it, completely terrifyed, my friend screams, i coudl understand why she was scare but why THAT scared? i look around, and all i see is a car comin...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby chagups » Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:51 am

Bellachewybillie wrote:hey guys im leaving chicken smoothie for a month or two i will just come here too adopt from the advent calender

from now on till im back chaos<3 will tAKE OVER

great i can always trust her how to keep a thread clean from spam so watch out guys
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I AM BACK FOR HOPEFULLY A SHORT TIME BECASUE MY FRIEND [CHAOS<3] HAD DID SOMETHING WRONG TOO HER ACCOUNT SO SHE CANT LOGIN. SO FOR NOW ME AND HER ARE GOING TO USE THIS ACCOUNT. AND IM LETTING HER JUST SO SHE CAN KEEP UP ON HER ROLEPLAYS. I HOPE THIS IS OKAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH.~chagups
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Uffie<3 » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:08 am

Imma join. I have a whole book with 666 Urban Legends which scare the crap out of me. brb :3
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Angel:. » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:15 am

Gee, freaky stories peoplez "shivers: :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:24 am

@DragonFlight, I like the black lab story. Kinda short, but its cool
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