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Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:54 pm

This is a fan fiction sortove bassed on a 1x1 roleplay that I am doing with ~Snowstorm~. Shadekit/paw/warrior name is her cat.

Allegiances.

Thunderclan
Leader: Ivystar, pale grey she cat.
Deputy: Tigerfang, ginger and black Tom.
Med cat: Littlefoot, White Tom with three brown paws.
Med cat app: Birchpaw.

Warriors
Mudwhiskers, brown Tom.
Darkmoon, young black Tom.
Dawnpelt, golden and white she cat.
Stormfall Grey and white fur, Tom.
App: Shadepaw,
Littlenose, brown and grey Tom.
Leaftail, pale grey she cat with white paws
App: Nettlepaw
Cherrytail, tortiseshell she cat.
Rainfur, pale grey, almost blue furred she cat.
App: Amberpaw.
Snowleaf, pure white she cat.
Blackfire, midnight black she cat.

Apprentices:
Nettlepaw, white and black fur.
Amberpaw, white, ginger and black she cat.
Shadepaw, white and grey tabby Tom,
Birchpaw, pale ginger she cat,

Queens and kits
None at the mo.

Elders.
Halfear, white to, missing half his ear.

Siblings
Snowleaf/Blackfire.
Rainfur/Stormfall
Cherrytail/Littlefoot/leaftail
Mudwhiskers/Dawnpelt

Mates/kits
Snowleaf+rockclaw(dead)= Amberpaw/Emberpaw
Blackfire+Otterfoot(dead)=Shadepaw/Birchpaw/Lightkit(dead)
Tigerfang+Ivystar=Stormfall/Rainfur.
Cherrytail+halfear=Ivystar.



Riverclan.
Leader: Stormstar, white and grey Tom.
Deputy: Blackfur, black Tom.
Med cat: Smallbird, red and ginger she cat.

Warriors.
Streamfoot, blue she cat.
Mousetail, brown she cat.
Smallfoot, small tabby Tom.
Otterheart, black and brown she cat.
Pebbleheart, silver she cat.
Stoneclaw, grey and white Tom.
Tallfur, black Tom with unusually long fur.
Flametail, red and ginger Tom.
App: Mistypaw
Ashnose, red and white tom.
App: Streampaw.

Apprentices
Mistypaw, pale grey and white she cat.
Streampaw, white Tom.

Queens and kits
Pebblefur, brown she cat.
Kits: Riverkit, silvery tom.
Grassear, white she cat with green eyes.
Kits: Silverkit, silver tom, Whitekit, white she cat, Greykit, grey Tom.

Elders.
Longear, Tom.

Siblings
Blackfur/Smallbird/Stoneclaw
Smallfoot/Otterheart
Talfull/Grassear/Pebbleheart
Ashnose/Flametail
Mousetail/Pebblefur

Mates and kits.
Ashnose+Pebbelfur=Riverkit
Grassear+Tallfur=Silverkit/Whitekit/Greykit
Longear+Brightstream(dead)=Blackfur/Stoneclaw/Smallbird
Blackfur+Otterheart=Flametail/Ashnose.





Shadowclan
Leader: Deathstar, black Tom with a dead eye.
Deputy: Mouseheart, Brown Tom.
Med cat: Willowfur, grey she cat.
Med cat app: Tinypaw,

Warriors.
Ashtail, white Tom with a black tail.
Swiftfang, aggressive white she cat,
App: Lakepaw.
Bigfoot, Large tabby Tom.
Flowerstem, pale grey and dark grey she cat

Apprentices:
Tinypaw, black and white Tom.
Lakepaw, small dark grey Tom.
Stonepaw, grey Tom.


Queens and kits,
Hollyfur, golden spotted she cat,
Kits: expecting. (Ashtail)

Elders,
Strongfoot, fluffy white Tom.

Siblings
Deathstar/Strongfoot
Mousheart/Ashtail
Hollyfur/Flowerstem
Bigfoot/Swiftfang

Mates and kits
Hollyfur+Ashtail=
Flowerstem+Bigfoot=Stonepaw
Swiftfang+Sharpclaw(dead)=Lakepaw/Tinypaw.



Windclan.
Leader: Thornstar, Brown Tom whose fur won't stay down.
Deputy: Thrushcall, white tabby Tom.
Med cat: Stumpfoot, ginger she cat with a missing foot.

Warriors.
Bumbletail, yellow and black Tom.
Thistleclaw dark grey she cat
App: Snakepaw
Sandleap, ginger tom
Acornheart, reddy Tom.
Fangheart, brown she cat,
Finchheart, shaggy ginger Tom.

Apprentices
Icepaw, Pale bluey she cat.
Snakepaw, ginger tom

Queens and kits.
Swallowcall, grey and cream she cat.
Kits: expecting (Sandleap)
Yelloweye
Kits: Applekit, reddy Tom, Fogkit, wispy grey she cat, Dustkit, Light ginger Tom.

Sibblings
Fangheart/Stumpfoot/yelloweye.
Thistleclaw/Acornheart
Swallowcall/Thrushcall/Finchheart

Mates and kits.
Yelloweye+Bumbletail=Applekit/Fogkit/Dustkit
Swallowcall+Sandleap=
Fangheart+Thrushcall=Icepaw/Snakepaw/Mousekit(dead)

Cats outside the clan.
Midnight. Young pitch black Tom.
Emberpaw. Ginger Tom, once a warrior apprentice, now a kittypet.
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Re: Thunder clans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:56 pm

Prologue.

The Starclan meeting swirled with stary cats.
"Something is coming soon," Firestar said, looking at the other cats. "The four clans will need our help soon. Thunderclan may fall." There was a murmur from assembled cats.
"Thunderclan will fall? But thunderclan has been here since the dawn of the clans!" a brown Tom with a white tail called.
"Yes, Tallstar, which is why we will chose three cats from Thunderclan to save them. Each of you must chose one young cat from your clans," Bluestar said.
"Why does Thunderclan have more!" A large white Tom with black paws hissed.
"Because Thunderclan will be in the most danger!" Lionblaze snapped back. A pale blue she cat that looked a lot like Bluestar stepped forward with a ginger Tom with a broken jaw,
"I, Mistystar, and Crockedstar of Riverclan agree." She said. She crouched near the pool, and a cat appeared in the pool. Bluestar nodded in agreement.
"He will do well," she said.
Blackstor stepped forward next. He crutched beside the pool. The cat they chose caused meows of astonishment.
"But he's so young!"
"He won't be when it happens," Firestar said, stepping up to to pool, Bluestar and Bramblestar beside him. Three cats appeared in the pool. Tallstar stepped up next.
"There are no cats suitable for this in our clan yet. We will wait for Fangheart to have her kits before we decided," he said. The other cars nodded.
"Then it is decided. We will meet again when Fangheart's kits are born," Bluestar said, and the cat dispersed.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:24 pm

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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby WolvesOfFire » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:25 pm

This definitely has a lot of potential! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:25 pm

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Chapter one.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:48 pm

Chapter one.

"Look out!" Amberkit cried, jumping on her brother, Emberkit. A moss ball sailed over them.
"Hey, get off, mouse brain!" Emberkit said, grinning. Shadekit and Birchkit bounded up. Shadekit had another moss ball in his claws.
"The great Shadestar will defeat the Shadowclan warriors!" Shadekit said, leaping on Amberkit and Emberkit. Birchkit just smiled and watched.
"Why don't you join them?" a voice said, and Birchkit jumped. She turned and saw her mother, Blackfire.
"I dunno, I just done feel like it," she answered. Suddenly, the three playing kits tumbled into Snowleaf, Amberkit and Emberkit's mother.
"Go and play outside, kits. You're old enough now," she said, shooing them out.
"Really?!" Amberkit cried. "Race you!" She speed out, followed by Emberkit and Shadekit. They stopped as they exited the nursery. Birchkit bumped into them.
"It's so big!" Shadekit whispered.
"Race you to the other side!" Emberkit cried, and started to run.
"No fair!" Amberkit said, following him, Shadekit close behind. Birchkit raced after them. They were stopped as a patrol entured, lead by Rockclaw. Emberkit and Ambrkit were soon climbing all over their father, while Stormpaw showed Shadekit and Birchkit some hunting moves. The two younger kits, Amberkit and Emberkit, where four days old, while the other kits where half a moon old.
Birchkit saw Littlefoot enture the camp, followed by Rainpaw. She ran over to the medicine cat.
"What are you doing?" she asked. Littlefoot smiled.
"Carring herbs for the clan," he answered.
"Ok," Birchkit said, running back to the others.
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Chapter two.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sun Mar 29, 2015 4:17 pm

Chapter two.

Stonekit watched Tinypaw and Lakepaw chatting about their days. He sighed, he wished he had a sibling, or even a play mate. But he was the only kit in the nursery at the time. He couldn't wait till he was an apprentice. But he had to wait for another four moons.
"Hey, Stonekit. Do you want me to show you a hunting move?" Lakepaw called to him. He looked up.
"Yes!" he cried, jumping to his paws. He rushed over the Lakepaw, as Tinypaw walked to the medicine cat den.
"Okay, crouch down, no put your tail down, that's better, no, keep it still. Good, no pretend im a mouse, ok?" Lakepaw instructed. Stonekit nodded, and stalked the older cat. He leapt, and grabbed Lakepaw's tail.
"Got you!" he said, through a mouth full of fur.
"Ow! Hey, don't bite!" Lakepaw said, shaking him off. Stonekit sighed, that would end the training. Lakepaw got angry easily. "What did you do that for?"
"Sorry, Lakepaw," Stonekit muttered. Lakepaw snorted, and walked back to the apprentice den.
"Four more moves," Stonekit muttered.
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Chapter three.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:47 pm

Chapter three,

Streampaw jumped over the log, but missed, and landed on him face. His sister, Mistypaw, cleared the log easily. She was so much bigger then him.
"Hurry up, Streampaw," his mentor, Ashnose called. Streampaw sighed, and followed the others. This was his first outing as an apprentice, and he wanted it to be great. He bounded after the others, and soon the came to the Lake.
"Whoa!" Mistypaw cried, and for once Streampaw agreed. The lake was huge!
"Right, I'll show you how to catch fish. And try to keep out of the water, Streampaw," Flametail said. Streampaw felt his face buring. Just because he was small didn't mean he couldn't swim! He was a Riverclan cat! The four cats walked to the half-bridge, and Asnose showed them how to wait til they saw a fish, then lash out and catch it. Mistypaw soon caught a fish, but Streampaw just couldn't get the hang of it. Suddenly, he saw a flash of silver, it was a fish! He lashed out, and flicked it into the air, but just as he was about to catch it, he heard a yowl.
"Twolegs!" Flametail shouted, and they rushed off the half-bridge. Streampaw was left behind because of his small legs, and he left the twoleg kit grap him. He hissed, and tried to swipe at it, but it was holding him to hard. He saw a flash of red, and the twoleg yowled in pain. Streampaw felt himself falling, and suddenly he was in the lake. He gasped in shock and pushed his paws, trying to get to the surface. Swimming in the lake was much harder then swimming in the camp. He pushed harder, but felt his strength failing. He felt teeth on he neck, and saw Ashnose pulling him up. The red and white Tom lay him on thee bank, and Streampaw lay there, gasping.
"Didn't I say stay out of the water?" Flametail asked, "let's go back." Streampaw felt tears come into his eyes. Why was he so small?
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