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by Nanashi » Tue Mar 24, 2015 10:10 am
I think that the stars looks great now on it! I am not too sure if I just used too much of them XD Thank you for advice!
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by Erwin Smith » Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:48 pm
Casually waltz's in here.
Any comments/criticism on this commission I've done?
I am aware that you can't see the words properly. I am not sure how/where to change the word placement to :(

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Hajime wrote:I think that the stars looks great now on it! I am not too sure if I just used too much of them XD Thank you for advice!
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by saka. » Thu Mar 26, 2015 12:08 am
@Levi;
That commision looks great! I love the use of the gifs and overlapping on it! However, I agree that the text is a little hard to see. Perhaps you could take out the gif beneath the text and make it a quote that fades in? Or you could make the font a little darker?
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by narwhalchan. » Fri Mar 27, 2015 2:14 am

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by Erwin Smith » Sat Mar 28, 2015 10:29 pm
Hᴀɴᴀᴋᴏ wrote:@Levi;
That commision looks great! I love the use of the gifs and overlapping on it! However, I agree that the text is a little hard to see. Perhaps you could take out the gif beneath the text and make it a quote that fades in? Or you could make the font a little darker?
Thank you for the critique :'D
I didn't see it until now, apologies.
I might remove those words all-together :)
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by oat » Sat Mar 28, 2015 10:34 pm
@Levi
I love it! The gifs are excellent! But I think the gif of the wolf opening it's mouth at the
back is kind of eroding when the foggy stuff comes up, and I feel like it's very geometric
maybe you should add some rounded corners to some images? nonetheless it's beautiful
and I love it with all my heart, and you are a champion for understanding my ramble just now
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by Erwin Smith » Sat Mar 28, 2015 10:37 pm
Yuu. wrote:@Levi
I love it! The gifs are excellent! But I think the gif of the wolf opening it's mouth at the
back is kind of eroding when the foggy stuff comes up, and I feel like it's very geometric
maybe you should add some rounded corners to some images? nonetheless it's beautiful
and I love it with all my heart, and you are a champion for understanding my ramble just now
Ah yes. Unfortunately the erosion cannot be fixed properly. Gifs can only have 256 different colours, therefore the next closest colour that is already used is selected to fill in the erosion ;-;
But yes, thank you as well for your critique <3
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