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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby ParaKitty » Tue Mar 17, 2015 2:26 pm

This is getting quite interesting. :D
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby derision » Wed Mar 18, 2015 3:47 am

Yay >3<
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Battle of the Twins

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:04 pm

This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!


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Hatari, Roxanne, and I skidded to a stop, and I looked up at the male standing proud in front of the throne, tears forming in my eyes.
I looked at this terrible dog.
The terrible dog that was my brother, yet wasn't at the same time.
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Stepping forward, I whispered, "Ara, what happened to you?" The response was a high pitched laugh with no happiness stored inside. "Reality happened. I realized, everything will come crashing down at some point. Why not now? If I control this world already, who says I cannot spread to other Scapes?" His smile was replaced by a blank look, before a small twitch at the corner of his mouth, spreading across his face into a smirk. "And, you and Roxanne's dreamscapes will be taken first. If you die by my hand in this scape, your scapes will succumb to my rule."
My fur stood on end, but I could sense it. Something in Ara was still struggling to escape this monster, I just needed to help it get stronger.

"Ara... Please." I advanced towards him, making him snarl menacingly, and ignoring Roxanne growl of warning. "I know you're still in there, just stop this..." I reached him.

Ara moved backwards, before a blast of the darkness surrounding him hit me hard, making me see stars and skid across the floor. Roxanne and Hatari gasped. I winced, and I let out a dry sob as I hoisted myself up on one paw.

And I glowed.

Suddenly, Roxanne and I changed--looks and power wise.

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Roxanne ran over, growling defensively from behind me. I sent a mental message to Anya--hopefully, she recieved it.
Ara squinted at my light, smiling wider. "If I kill you both in these forms, then I will be even more powerful." His mirthless laugh rang again through the air.

I sniffed and wiped away my tears, getting to my feet. He grinned.

"And now, the real party begins."

Against my will, I growled with Roxanne, defensively, and suddenly weapons appeared out of nowhere, falling to our paws.

My weapon was a beautiful, slender golden staff. Roxanne had a set of daggers.

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Roxanne quickly disappeared from my side, Ara tracking her with a breath. He shot darkness at her, making her fall down and skid back to me. I quickly blocked the next attack with the top of my staff, the gem seemingly absorbing the dark magic.

Suddenly, Anya burst in.
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Hurriedly, she screeched a battle yowl, and people from me and Roxanne's army appeared, flooding into the room, screeching back. Hatari rose above the fray, doing a loud dragon-whistle, and a large green dragon burst through the wall, not injuring any people of course, with a mighty roar.

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Ara looked startled for just a second, before smirking, and chanting something. Suddenly, an undead army was rising against us, and two dragons to match Hatari and her father appeared--surprisingly, not undead.
"Remember the little friend I sent after you your first day here, Arisa?"
Oh dear God.
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"Dad, look out!!" Hatari screamed at her father. The dragon narrowly missed the fireball the red one blasted at him.
Hatari wasn't so lucky.
The smaller, lava dragon smashed his club tail into her side, spinning her off course. Suddenly all the dragons darted outside.
Everyone seemed to have a match for them, and Ara and I were just having a staredown. Suddenly, he lunged forward, shooting smudge of darkness towards me. I blocked it again, then darted forward vaulting up with my staff and slamming myself into Ara, flooring him.

I then realized why Anya had me taught how to high jump. Was she an all-seer or something?

Ara growled, as I quickly flipped back, barely missing another burst of darkness. I conjured up some light, shooting it at him, making him duck.

Our exchanges went on for a long time, until he trapped me against the throne and disarming me, making him smirk yet again as fear built up inside me.

"Dead on the throne. How fitting."

He conjured up a concentrated ball of darkness, shooting it at me, when...
"No!"
A dog ran out in front of me, blocking the shadow, then fell from the impact, struggling for a second, then falling limp.
I looked at the dog.
Volt.

"Well, that's too bad. Perhaps you should stop letting other people sacrifice themselves for you, Arisa."

Rage built up inside me. This monster was not my brother.
I stood, shaking, and even though battle raged on around me, the dragons battling above, I didn't hear anything, completely focused on Ara.
Looking him in the eyes made him freeze and hesitate as I took a few steps and slapped him, claws digging in before I tore my paw away.
Snarling, I said,
"You are not my brother."
Ara's eyes widened and shocked, as the darkness started to dispel and he realized what he had done.
"Arisa, I... What have I done?" He said quietly, looking at the fallen from the armies.
Suddenly, he sat down, and bawled as the whole room went silent.

"I-I'm sorry! I didn't mean for any of this to happen!"

Suddenly, a crash came from outside as the whole building shook. Hatari ran in.

"The castles going down! Everyone needs to get out, now!!"

Everyone gasped, excluding the undead soldiers. They had crumbled once Ara had started to cry. I turned and started running out the door, until I noticed that Ara wasn't coming.

"Go. I don't deserve a Dreamscape."

I ran back, and said, "I'm not leaving until you do."
We smiled at each other, hugging before the building collapsed and everything went dark.


And that concludes the first saga.
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby ParaKitty » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:14 pm

-applause- Beautiful story, full of action. ;u;
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Re: Battle of the Twins

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:20 pm

fabulous. wrote:
And that concludes the first saga.


--who said it was over?
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby derision » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:23 pm

Omergerd Hatari >3<
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:36 pm

Ohmygosh this was amazing.

you tricky lil' girl leaving us on a cliffy until you make the 'second saga' i'm assuming you'll make

EDIT:recreation saga


........FABULOUS WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME WITH ALL THIS FANGIRLISM :shock:
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the Recreation Saga.

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:37 pm

I woke up in a dark cave. Feeling trapped, I felt around. It seemed I had changed back to my normal form. A small burlap sack laid nearby, and, feeling a slip of paper on it, I summoned a small light, reading,

Quickly, find Ara and Volt.


I looked at the messy scrawl of cursive, written like the person was in a rush, confused, then I realized.
I hadn't woken up to reality.
I was stuck in a scape.


And that, my friends, is a preview to the second saga, or should I call it...
the Recreation Saga.
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby trickszy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:41 pm

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You'll just have to wait until I release the full chapter.
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Re: This isn't a DIARY, it's a GRIFFIN!

Postby abxy » Wed Mar 18, 2015 2:42 pm

fabulous. wrote:
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You'll just have to wait until I release the full chapter.


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