Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby MockSun » Mon Mar 02, 2015 1:47 pm

Okay. Kinda late, but my entry for the Mary Sue contest:

Name: Starrystar (Warrior name was Starrynight)
Rank: Leader and Medicine Cat
Gender: She-cat (NOT MOLLY)
Age: Immortal
Appearance: Starrystar is a wonderful she-cat with long, flowing fur. She has pitch black fur, save for some white speckles on her coat that give her the appearance that there are stars on her fur. Her right eye is blue, and her left eye is red. When she gets angry, her right eye turns red, and she switches into her alternate persona VenomousDart.

VenomousDart is a large she-cat who can kill anyone in a single slash because her claws are five times longer than Tigerstar’s, reinforced with dog’s teeth, and are coated in a poison that can kill in milliseconds. She is the leader of the Dark Forest.

If someone looks into either cat’s eyes, they’ll fall in love with Starrystar/VenomousDart in seconds and there is nothing they can do to resist. To counteract this, Starrystar wears a blindfold, but she can still see just fine because she has echolocation (like a bat!).
Powers:
Echolocation - The she-cat can see just fine while wearing the blindfold because she can sense what’s ahead of her with sound waves! She can also let out a screech that instantly deafens whoever hears it.
Elemental Powers - Since Starrystar is the Avatar, she can control all four elements flawlessly. She could do this ever since she was a kit.
Physic Powers - Starrystar control control things/people with her mind, let out powerful physic blasts, and teleport.
Death - Starrystar has 99 lives, instead of just nine, because StarClan decided she was such a great leader they blessed her with both eternal life and 99 lives (more on how that happened in the backstory). She can also kill anyone instantly by writing down their name, but she NEVER actually does this because she hates killing and it would haunt her forever.
Personality: Perfect. Also, meet her.
Weaknesses: Too kind, too beautiful
Strengths: Fighting, hunting, swimming, climbing, herblore (since she’s also the Medicine Cat of the forest), balancing, talking (she’s very persuasive and can even talk to other animals, including twolegs), mothering, has a close connection to StarClan.

Backstory: (Everyone hold on, this might get bumpy.)
Starrystar wasn’t named Starrykit. No, because her mother died giving birth to her, her father thought she was cursed and named her Bloodkit. The rest of the clan did nothing to fight this because they agreed she was cursed and hated poor little Bloodkit. But one day, she sneaked out of camp and made her way to the Moonstone. StarClan said, You are not cursed. You are an agent sent from StarClan, reborn of the best warriors to ever walk our planet. You are special. You carry the blood of Firestar, Brambleclaw, Squirrelflight, Lionblaze, Jayfeather, Hollyleaf and whoever it was that had the super senses. So when Bloodkit returned to camp and told her leader this, he welcomed her warmly and she was hailed as the clan’s future savior. She was renamed to Starrykit, because of the star-like markings on her fur.

But trouble didn’t end there for Starrykit! One day she saw some kits sneak out of camp. She didn’t tell on them, ‘cause that would be mean, but she decided to follow them from a distance to keep them safe. Then they ran into a fox! But before it could hurt anyone, Starrykit leaped into action, slaying the beast in one blow. “Wow Starrykit you’re great!” The kittens cheered. But when Starrykit turned back around, her eyes were RED! DUN DUN DUN!

Everyone gasped as the kitten let out a cold laugh, growing to the size of a dragon. “I AM VENOMOUSKIT!” It declared. “I am the reborn form of Scourge, Bone, Hawkfrost, Tigerstar, Mudclaw, Thistleclaw, Sol and Mapleshade! Fear me!”

But before Venomouskit could hurt anyone, Starrykit saved the day! She took control of her body back and everything was cool.



... Okay, I could continue this, but I don’t think I could finish writing her backstory with my sanity intact.
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby Wolvine » Mon Mar 02, 2015 2:55 pm

Scarkin wrote:May i ask it was Pokemon Omega? c:
It was shut down by Nintendo lawyers back on may 8th 2014 (MY B-DAY!!!!!!) and I'm looking for fellow users
lol of course it wasnt po thats dumb

no, sorry. it was a proper forum dedicated to this one warrior world. it was like warriotcatsplatinumrpg.forumotion or something. i think they moved sites and then the whole thing died.
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby agathokakologic » Mon Mar 02, 2015 4:53 pm

SincerelyUnique wrote:So the RP is in Animal Jam. It was created by this guy named Madjasterxyz. I warn you, DO NOT go there at all. It is FILLED with gary-sues, mary-sues, and powerplayers. It is extremely out of order. Everybody is a wannabe. There's about 20 and more different leaders everyday. The warriors don't even mentor apprentices, there's someone killing someone everyday. And then there's the ''detailed'' people that use anatomy but don't even LOOK like cats. They think they all that .-. Then there's the cats who have powers. Don't get me started on that.. There are also trolls there that cause the most chaos. (pink ballerina pandas, dancing giraffes, you name it) The clan is extremely not organized. That's all I can say right now..




Also, anybody realize that Chicken smoothie is being slow, or is it just me?


Omg
When I used to play AJ 2 years ago
Madjaster's Thunderclan was like
Omg

They live in a volcano, there are 50 leaders with names like Starstar, and like
192831817272271771737364 warriors
Its chaos
Complete
Chaos
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby Vit11 » Mon Mar 02, 2015 6:30 pm

Aquamarine Abyss. wrote:
SincerelyUnique wrote:So the RP is in Animal Jam. It was created by this guy named Madjasterxyz. I warn you, DO NOT go there at all. It is FILLED with gary-sues, mary-sues, and powerplayers. It is extremely out of order. Everybody is a wannabe. There's about 20 and more different leaders everyday. The warriors don't even mentor apprentices, there's someone killing someone everyday. And then there's the ''detailed'' people that use anatomy but don't even LOOK like cats. They think they all that .-. Then there's the cats who have powers. Don't get me started on that.. There are also trolls there that cause the most chaos. (pink ballerina pandas, dancing giraffes, you name it) The clan is extremely not organized. That's all I can say right now..




Also, anybody realize that Chicken smoothie is being slow, or is it just me?


Omg
When I used to play AJ 2 years ago
Madjaster's Thunderclan was like
Omg

They live in a volcano, there are 50 leaders with names like Starstar, and like
192831817272271771737364 warriors
Its chaos
Complete
Chaos


And they keep having these floods/battles with other clans/hurricanes/dead cats whom whisper their last words to their loved ones before dying, only to reappear in the form of another can/forbidden loves/prophecies/deputies/tigerclaw carbon copies/Madjaster carbon copies/scourge carbon copies/madjaster's 'brothers'/madjaster's 'mates'/etcetera.

Oh, and don't even get me started on the 'abandoned' kits, a cat named Hollowheart for their lack of heart (literally, they have a hole in their chest), how wolves are actually the cats while actual cats like tigers r always rejected since they aren't a wolf for a cat clan...., and the OUTFITS, come on, spikes, ginormous claws, and let's not forget the swords, and are all of them gonna be brown and/or grey with blue eyes? Or a brown cat with a black underbelly with stars?
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby sweet tooth » Tue Mar 03, 2015 10:59 am

O-O
Uh
Where can this RP be found?
like, a link?
I want to see this mess
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby hqmary » Tue Mar 03, 2015 11:10 am

It's in Animal Jam. They don't have forums...
at least that I know of. Unless someone screenshot-ed it or something there would be no way of seeing it off of AJ.
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby PrinceRazril » Tue Mar 03, 2015 11:10 am

good gracious, that sounds terrifying.
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby Vit11 » Tue Mar 03, 2015 12:23 pm

PrinceMizuki wrote:
good gracious, that sounds terrifying.


Oh yes, it is indeed terrifying, the last time I was there, they was a flood that killed all the cats, and the den was constantly full! Always saying when ur trying to get in, saying,' sorry, too full, come back another time'
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby detective who. » Tue Mar 03, 2015 12:29 pm

    Hey Arcaii, I was looking at the front page and noticed that you had some books down for future reading. I was wondering if you've ever heard of The Animals of Farthing Wood? I just read it fairly recently and enjoyed it quite a lot.
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Re: Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

Postby Arcaii » Tue Mar 03, 2015 1:04 pm

I've heard of it before, but I haven't actually read it myself. I've heard nothing but good things about it, of course, so I'll add it to the list!
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