Let's Read: Warrior Cats Series

[SingTheRain]

Username: Sparrow_feather3
Cat Name: Sparrowfeather
Warrior Name(If not Warrior):
Rank: Warrior/Queen
Gender: she-cat
Age: 14 moons
Description (Or Picture): Light brown tabby with dark brown stripes, white belly
Personality: Gentle, nice to everyone, brave, funny, great hunter, short temper
Crush:
Mate: Hawkheart (killed in battle)
Kits: Fawnkit (she-cat, newborn), Whitekit (tom, died at birth)
Other: Had a hard life but carries on. Good friend is Brambletail.

My first RP cat xD I'm cringing.

[agathokakologic]

Name:
Lunamoon

Gender:
She-cat

Clan:
Thunderclan

Rank:
Medicine cat, but also fills in as deputy when needed. She can also be a mentor to a normal warrior apprentice as well as the close advisor of her leader.

Description:
Normal form:
Dark, midnight-blue she-cat with glowing, bright, kind turquoise colored eyes, and silvery bluish paws with whitish, sparkling specks. Her tail, which is a shimmering baby-blue, is long, flowing, silky, and thick, with a paler edge and small, glowing white specks that look like stars. There is a circular, black patch on her flank surrounded with other small patches of black. In the middle of the patch, she has a white crescent moon marking that glows with a silver sheen in the dark. She has a black chest that rings around her neck. In the middle, there is a white crescent moon identical to the one on her flank. The fur along the back of her neck and her forehead is like the fur around her tail. There is a blue moonflower on her ear and two crow feathers on her tail. There is also a shard of gem that she found on a crashed meteorite looped around her neck with a blue ribbon with other shards of black gem, stardust, and moondust sprinkled around it.

Nightmare form:
Black she-cat with dark teal eyes, sharper fangs, and long claws that are over three times as long as Tigerstar's. They are also hooked, sharp, and jagged, and even just a small cut from them kills easily. The patch on her flank is purple and pale blue, and her chest, headfur, and paws are baby blue. She has a dark aura that swirls around her, and she can sprout black bat wings at will. This transformation occurs when she's angry or in grief.

Personality:
Lunamoon is a kind, honest, selfless, generous, loyal, wise, intelligent, skilled, brave, humble, noble, good-humored, mellow, fierce, swift, fast, nimble, affectionate, loving, and thoughtful she-cat. She's skilled in hunting, and always comes back with at least five pieces of the best prey. One time, she came back with over twenty five! Because of her role, she is also very familiar with herbs, and is one of the best medicine cats her clan has ever seen. She has saved every clanmate so far, and none of them have ever died, even from the ten greencough epidemics that she's faced. But her fighting skills are also very impressive. She can easily take out half a large clan of experienced warriors by herself, and as an apprentice, she could defeat a patrol of senior warriors with a flick of her paw. She is very fierce and loyal to her clan, and would die for them in a heartbeat.

History:
Lunamoon's parents died in a fire when she was very young, and she was abandoned in a forest far away. Her only littermate, Solarkit, was killed by a wolf pack attack, and though Lunakit managed to kill four and wound the others, it was too late to save her sister. She lived a solitary life for most of her life, but made her way back to Thunderclan when she was only three moons old! She was allowed to become an apprentice a sunrise later, and blazed through her training. Her warrior name was given when she was eight moons old. But her dreams and omens from Starclan led her to the role of a medicine cat, where she became a full fledged one in three moons. Secretly, part of her change was due to a strange power she had. She could manipulate all elements- water, wind, earth, grass, fire, electricity, darkness, light, and sometimes weather. She can also read minds and look into their pasts, be unbeatable in battle, travel between Starclan, the real world, and Dark Forest, and see things that were far away. Because of her powers, she became scared, as one time, she wiped out the entire clan of Riverclan in battle. She went to the role of a Medicine Cat so she wouldn't hurt anyone else.

[Arcaii]

Colored like a slug?
Ewwww. Slime. jk xD

Hey, slugs are okay! They're not as cute as snails, but heck if anything's as cute as a snail.

Is it weird tht now I wanna eat something slimy, like a slug after u mentioned the slug thing...... OMG, wut is wrong with me

If you're french, yes. If not, maybe you should sit down for a little while.

[hqmary]

Name:
Lunamoon

Gender:
She-cat

Clan:
Thunderclan

Rank:
Medicine cat, but also fills in as deputy when needed. She can also be a mentor to a normal warrior apprentice as well as the close advisor of her leader.

Description:
Normal form:
Dark, midnight-blue she-cat with glowing, bright, kind turquoise colored eyes, and silvery bluish paws with whitish, sparkling specks. Her tail, which is a shimmering baby-blue, is long, flowing, silky, and thick, with a paler edge and small, glowing white specks that look like stars. There is a circular, black patch on her flank surrounded with other small patches of black. In the middle of the patch, she has a white crescent moon marking that glows with a silver sheen in the dark. She has a black chest that rings around her neck. In the middle, there is a white crescent moon identical to the one on her flank. The fur along the back of her neck and her forehead is like the fur around her tail. There is a blue moonflower on her ear and two crow feathers on her tail. There is also a shard of gem that she found on a crashed meteorite looped around her neck with a blue ribbon with other shards of black gem, stardust, and moondust sprinkled around it.

Nightmare form:
Black she-cat with dark teal eyes, sharper fangs, and long claws that are over three times as long as Tigerstar's. They are also hooked, sharp, and jagged, and even just a small cut from them kills easily. The patch on her flank is purple and pale blue, and her chest, headfur, and paws are baby blue. She has a dark aura that swirls around her, and she can sprout black bat wings at will. This transformation occurs when she's angry or in grief.

Personality:
Lunamoon is a kind, honest, selfless, generous, loyal, wise, intelligent, skilled, brave, humble, noble, good-humored, mellow, fierce, swift, fast, nimble, affectionate, loving, and thoughtful she-cat. She's skilled in hunting, and always comes back with at least five pieces of the best prey. One time, she came back with over twenty five! Because of her role, she is also very familiar with herbs, and is one of the best medicine cats her clan has ever seen. She has saved every clanmate so far, and none of them have ever died, even from the ten greencough epidemics that she's faced. But her fighting skills are also very impressive. She can easily take out half a large clan of experienced warriors by herself, and as an apprentice, she could defeat a patrol of senior warriors with a flick of her paw. She is very fierce and loyal to her clan, and would die for them in a heartbeat.

History:
Lunamoon's parents died in a fire when she was very young, and she was abandoned in a forest far away. Her only littermate, Solarkit, was killed by a wolf pack attack, and though Lunakit managed to kill four and wound the others, it was too late to save her sister. She lived a solitary life for most of her life, but made her way back to Thunderclan when she was only three moons old! She was allowed to become an apprentice a sunrise later, and blazed through her training. Her warrior name was given when she was eight moons old. But her dreams and omens from Starclan led her to the role of a medicine cat, where she became a full fledged one in three moons. Secretly, part of her change was due to a strange power she had. She could manipulate all elements- water, wind, earth, grass, fire, electricity, darkness, light, and sometimes weather. She can also read minds and look into their pasts, be unbeatable in battle, travel between Starclan, the real world, and Dark Forest, and see things that were far away. Because of her powers, she became scared, as one time, she wiped out the entire clan of Riverclan in battle. She went to the role of a Medicine Cat so she wouldn't hurt anyone else.

You based that off Luna from MLP! I know all your MLP related tricks! You can hide nothing from the Great and Powerful Trixie!

[Silxe]

Lunamoon has many other horrid diseases cliches common in sues.
Avatar syndrome: controlling all the elements.
Suepolar syndrome: one self is the perfect, glittery, loved by all, and the other is the dark, edgy and unbeatable "awesome" cat. 2 for 1.
Any others?

[Dawn.]

So I was reading Tallstar's Revenge {Please don't spoil it for me, I'm almost there but not done.} and there were two naming mistakes within 2 pages XD

They put Stagpaw twice instead of Stagleap, when this cat was clearly a warrior by now. I would have expected it to only happen once.

[Nitro Indigo]

What about terrible RP clan names? I can't think of many right now, but I've seen CrowdedClan.

EDIT: WhisperClan, Yin and Yang Clan, WildClan, PaintedClan, MysticClan, ClanClan, FrigidClan, FemaleClan, and ArrowClan are some other "good" names I've seen.

[sweet tooth]

Clanclan was a weird RP xD
Femaeclan is atctually pretty awesome
I had one named Wispclan(not whisper wisp)

[Vit11]

Colored like a slug?
Ewwww. Slime. jk xD

Hey, slugs are okay! They're not as cute as snails, but heck if anything's as cute as a snail.

Is it weird tht now I wanna eat something slimy, like a slug after u mentioned the slug thing...... OMG, wut is wrong with me

If you're french, yes. If not, maybe you should sit down for a little while.

Very true, I find them very fascinating, although I like slugs a tinny bit more than snails because you get to see what they look like rather than have them hide in their shells

Kk then *sits down for a little while* ō-ō how has my life turned into this

What about terrible RP clan names? I can't think of many right now, but I've seen CrowdedClan.

EDIT: WhisperClan, Yin and Yang Clan, WildClan, PaintedClan, MysticClan, ClanClan, FrigidClan, FemaleClan, and ArrowClan are some other "good" names I've seen.

Leopardclan... And the most kitties rnt even spotted

Rainbowclan, just read the dinking title people and tell me this isn't a bad name for a clan

Tigerclan... Like the leopard kitties, nor many r striped (I'm not counting the ones that are pure white but have black spots)

Lunamoon has many other horrid diseases cliches common in sues.
Avatar syndrome: controlling all the elements.
Suepolar syndrome: one self is the perfect, glittery, loved by all, and the other is the dark, edgy and unbeatable "awesome" cat. 2 for 1.
Any others?

Double rank syndrome: Being able to be of two positions at once, medicine cat and deputy, so basically a Stoneteller (since if ur deputy, u will become leader so u know wut I mean)

Mary Sue look syndrome: just read the appearance section

Bipolar/Double form/being syndrome: She has a nightmare form, emo hair, wings, large teeth and fangs if u piss her off or when she's sad

Abandonment history: abandoned in the woods

Superhero syndrome: defeated and killed four wolves when she was a kit


I'm sorry, but I can't list anymore without having to cry tears of blood

[Mr. Cloudwhisker]

I've been reading Stakit's Prophesy and I'm like: